Made a remix, I hope its ok for you thanks,

https://soundcloud.com/dj-candymane/forget-about-you-dance-remix-ft-zoie-lou-anja

Interesting acapella, some parts were captured well. Gives something special, the message happened to go with what I've been working on lately and thought to share with you. The way I had used your pella is as an a vocal sound effect. Stretch and reversed with some eq adjustments. Do hope this idea of using it is acceptable by you. Thank you for allowing us to use your words. Peace,Dave

https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/155979 if you'd like to hear what I mean.

what enzotic said

Hello Zoie, you have a Awesome Voice,
I Produced and Arranged a Italodisco (80s style Pop) Song with your Acappella:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pkFXqV1z7fE

nice upload really like it a lot. keep it up. really enjoyed the lyrics.

https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/153622
hope you like this groove will send you the instrumental version so you can change things a bit I have work out the tempo for you track its 119.837 bpm.
enjoy and do give me a feed back on this one.

This appears to be a nice song. I like that you repeated the lyrics more than once, it gives a producer more flexibility. The recording is also relatively clean for a track that wasn't professionally recorded.

One thing that need work is the tempo. It's about 117 bpm, however, you are going offbeat a bit at times. In addition to this, some of the notes are off key. After listening and analyzing the song, you seem to be singing mostly in the key of C major.

I mention these two issues with the recording so that hopefully they improve in future recordings. The unstable tempo can be a "turnoff" to a producer that might not want to work harder on a free acapella. Same goes for singing in key. I thing that recording with a metronome and maybe a loop of a chord progression can help with both of these issues.

The recording is still better than many. I'd just like less work in fixing a recording, so that I can work more on composing! I hope my feedback doesn't seem harsh or rude, just shedding knowledge for improvement! I'm currently working on a track and hope to finish it sometime soon!

I really like your voice! It's amazing!
but I want to give you some advice.
because I really want to work with your voice...

so..
I like the very beginning of the acapella till 1:00..
but That's all of this acapella.
It repeats till the end.

I heard the others of yours,
and all of your song repeats in one pattern.
That's what the problem is.
too many repeating makes your song boring.

maybe you have to split the part of your song like this,..
[verse1 - chorus - verse2 - chorus - bridge - chorus or some highlights]..

this is not the motto of the every song,
but at least you should have 2or3 part for the song.

and
lastly I want to tell you this again.
you have really good voice.

hi....i see you use fl....i used to too till i found studio one.... i would like to hear some of your vocals through a better daw....how are you recording is it all dry vocals.. izotope nectar 2 is your friend....use it lol.... email me at shane.cassidy@live.com or find me on facebook dj-shane cassidy...been looking for a vocalist for a while... i could also teach you some stuff too....and even provide you with the software you need ;)....be lucky

Hi Zoie. I sent you mail on your email that i found here. It is about music collaboration and signing with record label. Let me know what you think about it. Thank you

fresh from fantasy, :-)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xzKPEGjTxs0

greets
Andi

I'm going to work on this, feels like pop/country feels good. more please.

I like this. good job