Yeah man it slaps for real good job!

I like it and there is room for improvement you just need to practice!!

Yeah you definitively did a awesome job, just make them hi hat more panned and a lil bit crazy! Good job!!!

Your beat is awesome too, thnaks for using my sample!!!

Yooo man the beat is good, I really like the structure you gave to it. But it seems like you are severely lacking mixing skills mainly in the low end (kick and bass), I hear some high end frequencies on your kick that are pretty much useless and make your kick sound cheap, and that's really a problem cus the kick hits really hard and I like that but the fact that there are high end frequencies in the kick just pretty much ruins the whole sound. I think that the 808 is not tuned (if dont know what I'm talking about just search on yt ''how to tune 808's" and an 808 that isn't tuned it's a off tune 808 that not only ruins the overall sound but just completely sets off the listener. The drums are waaaay to much centered, there is not panning of hi hats, snare, percs. When making a beat we need to leave the centre space of the beat as free as possible from mid-range, high-range frequencies because is where the voice is going to sit in the final mix of a song, and having too much elements in the centre of a beat stereo field is only going to make your track less appealing to a possible customer. You clearly just started out but I can tell you that the fact that you give variation with lp filters and all is only an indicator of how much you already know about variations and musicality. Just step up your mix game and you will gain HUGe results!!! (not going to be easy at first but when you get a solid grasp of it it will be like walking man easy as hell)

Yo man the 808 hits braaazy hard I love that, but you might need to learn a way to control your high end cause that hi hats were piercing trought my ears so hard that I had to lower the volume of the beat. an dyou know if people start lowering their volume to listen to your beats they might loose how much the 808 hard! Absolutely not bad beat man, but for real tho them high end crispy and not in a good way ya dig?

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will do man thnaks!!!

Look man this beat ain't bad but ain't good either, you need to step up your sound drum selection, get some good sounding drums and start using some variations in what you do. You surely are starting out but listen to me and you'll see a HUGe difference in the quality of your product!!!

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