Good job dude. I see you tried to get that superbassy feeling for your kick. There's a trick to this. This took me a while to learn. If i had to take an educated guess i would say you doubled up your kick sequence to give it more power. This will work to a degree but doing this will also take away other frequencies that are using that hz level. If you just put more volume or gain to it to get that effect I would back it back off, then try experimenting with sub bass levels, not the actual kick. There are many ways to do this but a quick way is to bring the kick into an editor such as cooledit or something, then filter everything out of it besides sub frequencies. In order to do this you need a stereo or amp that can handle sub frequencies or you just won't hear anything. then just save as a new file and overlap this over the original kick. This way you aren't overstocking frequency ranges you are actually using a lower one instead. With some tinkering and time you will get the effect. And be sure to listen to your track on as many different stereos and devices as you can. Right now I'm on a friends system. He has crappy speakers so the song kinda grumbles a lot because of gain levels and his speakers inability to make sense of it. On my studio speakers at home it might sound wonderful. So test it everywhere you can. Also look into layering for the keyboards. it will give more depth and help fill "empty space". Good job though. I wouldn't have written so much if I didn't think you as an artist wasn't worth it. So keep at it. If you have any more questions feel free to drop me a line and I'll help the best I can. wow this is the longest review I have ever given. congrats!

Demon