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13th May 2011 00:40 - 13 years ago
Description : Whats sup this is Broken Scythe's track (Clenched) He's my good homie from High School so on behalf of BSP and myself MrPalabra we present Man Vs. Himself. Lyrics by Mr. Palabra, (Broken Scythe) actually Broken Scythe wrote a verse to this as well, so expect that coming with most likely a better take that will have less static. (Apologies for the not too great recording quality)
but until then, feel free to drop a review! I'd appreciate it as I'm new to rap and i'll return the review as well Thanks.

Comments (6)

If you have time take a listen and give MrPalabra some feedback.

MaxJC
MaxJC 15th May 2011 05:22 - 13 years ago
Nice track and as the others already mentioned, strong message projected through it.No worries; there's always place for improvement vocal mix-wise but still a strong way to start in the loop - glad i came thru; cheers!
BrokenScythe
BrokenScythe 14th May 2011 23:57 - 13 years ago
YeaH bro, telling you, it came out sick. If we get a better mic we'll really have some quality on our hands.
Dnt forget to give revs out when you can. You'll get noticed more and your song will go on the featured section in the top right.

BTW, Manzet just posted a new track. Its sick. Look for it on my reviews out. He said to tell you a lot of the things he mentioned were used in that track.
JamesDavies
JamesDavies 14th May 2011 08:25 - 13 years ago
Realy aprieciated; a lot of emotion put in to the track... I can't understand you'll what a better mic for recording your voice, but the melodies are great and it's got a super beat; I mean I've made quite a few hip-hop tracks now but I've never managed to make something as nice as this,...
abnerbesares
abnerbesares 13th May 2011 13:58 - 13 years ago
WELCOME TO THE SITE ! BIENVENIDO PAPA ! well enough said sorry if don't read spanish, anyway your doing good and this is a good start to losing the fear of been reviewed, hope you came here looking to to be criticized in a good or bad way cause if not , well you figure it out' Nice track ,good song BUT YOU NEED TO WORK ON the mic POPs in the vocals ! GOOD LUCK my friend !
MrPalabra
MrPalabra replied Unknown
of course i read spanish lol my name is MrPalabra haha pues gracias man te lo agradesco and yeah im fine with being crititcize i want the truth about my sound so i can perfect in man with time thanks for the review and the love man thanks
Manzet
Manzet 13th May 2011 03:30 - 13 years ago
First I Would Ask How Are You Recording Your Vocals? Are You Using A Daw To Record Your Vocals? And What Kind Of Mic Are You Using? Nice Tune Though FAM...Real Chilled Out Song Yo... It Seemed Like Maybe You Need A Pop Filter And A Better Mic, But That's Just My Opinion... Also Stack Your Vocals It Helps For Real Yo... Go To Youtube And Look Up A Kat Named Bobbygrayproductions A Lot Of What I Use In Pro Tools I Got From Him...And It Doesn't Matter If You Don't Have Pro Tools Because You Can Use Those Settings Inside Any Computer Recording Software That Allows You To Add Eq's And Fx's To Your Vocals... But Keep Grinding Fam Your On The Right Path Yo...

Manzet
MrPalabra
MrPalabra replied Unknown
Ey bro i appreciate it man im really gonna try to get a better way to record im glad u can give me ur input so i can become better much love stay blessed and stay fresh G
CFactor
CFactor 13th May 2011 02:46 - 13 years ago
Nice track man. it felt like your flow got better and better as the track progressed. Maybe the snare could have popped a little more but thats just a personal thing. Keep up the good work. CF
MrPalabra
MrPalabra replied Unknown
Thanks CF im glad u liked the track i hope always ppl can be str8 with me and tell me how it is im humbled by these first reviews and imma keep flowing and writing bro thanks.

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