Man this track concept is a winner The beat and the hook is classic.The vocals on the other hand needs work..They are too thin for the fullness of the beat..You could try and duplicate the vocal track a couple of times. parallel compress and eq each track a little differently and don't roll off so much off the low end. and I can hear the vocals levels going up and down..compression should smooth them out.
That's my two cents..Bro this track, the words being spoken and the message is dope..you owe it to yourself to put your all in this one.

safe man hook is fire, ur bars are good but u need to get in a studio man n get the quality up! i pay for professional studio time & it improves the track so much. Also id say work on ur breathing & pronunciation so you can get the full force of your voice out without bein short breathed. big track though great work

Very good man :) keep it up the good work :)

Wow....Just like vortexsurfer said,this has to be the best rapping on Looperman so far.If only it was better quality........

wowwww that's excelent, best track i've heard on looop so far.
Great work all round , maybe a bit much rverb on the beat , but hey that's just me
love it and faved
Cheers!