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4th Jun 2011 17:00 - 13 years ago
Description : Take a Listen :) Review?

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If you have time take a listen and give ColeAlexander some feedback.

daniellouismusic
daniellouismusic 16th Jul 2011 06:41 - 13 years ago
I am a big fan of bizarre music, thanks to Pink Floyd for that great intro and real nice sample, the style is not my thing, but korn helped me to love metal, not as hard metal as this, love korn, great, great use of sampled voz sits very, very well a almost mystical spacy sound great job.
PhasmataJ
PhasmataJ 23rd Jun 2011 13:42 - 13 years ago
The first part made me feel claustrophobic, as if I was locked away in a mental ward. This is a good experience because according to the title (Unsound), this is probably what many in such places are like.

The treatment of the monologue is really very well executed. It's like a peek into someone's thoughts.

As for mixing/mastering, I use M-Audio monitors which with most of my music tends to pop the bass. Your song had more treble to me and was quite pleasing I must say.

The length is really good. You don't want it too long or too short. Basically, get in, get your message across, and get out.

A character comes to mind while listening. Remember Faruzza Balk? I see smeared black mascara on her eyes while wrapped in a straight jacket. Eyes that look up at you as you enter her cell. What do her eyes say, "I am a God that will break free".

Again, I loved Unsound and relished the atmosphere it created in my head. Thank you for sharing. And thank you for reviewing my song.
Zelab
Zelab 11th Jun 2011 22:18 - 13 years ago
Yes!! this is evil bro! wish i still had my long hair to head bang
Crypt
Crypt 8th Jun 2011 12:27 - 13 years ago
Very impressive man. Love the death metal vocals. The only thing I didn't like was the singing at the end. But that's just my own opinion. Maybe a tiny bit less reverb on the vocals as well. Other than that, it's wicked. Nice work. Not too many low screamers on here so I'll be keeping my I on you. Faved.
ColeAlexander
ColeAlexander replied Unknown
Yeah they sing was rough did add to many affects I don't like studio produced type metal, I listen to bands like Every Time I Die, Deftones. Bands That really don't produce their vocals but they're good. Bands these days get lazy. Lol
And thanks.
Allistar
LazarusBlack
LazarusBlack 7th Jun 2011 05:48 - 13 years ago
This is Bangin bro..Definitely diggin the vocals.Very Hard.production values are great on this and the samples put it all into perspective.Dayton eh?Ive been thru there a couple times,im actually from Toledo,just moved here to Alberta about 3 years ago.anyhoo...Great track,keep'em comin.

RawHead }:)-
ColeAlexander
ColeAlexander replied Unknown
I just moved up to Dayton about a year ago. I love it up here. Huge music scene only problem is I can't join in the fun because I can't keep a band together lol. I'm very opinionated when it comes to music and most people don't like it.
Allistar
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 7th Jun 2011 00:06 - 13 years ago
Bad azz vox :) You are really versatile. It takes some real talent to move from this type of metal to something like your acoustic track. Outstanding effort. I have to believe a lot of the guys on here that do metal must might be beating your door down for collabs.

Awesome job on this one. My compliments to the band, whomever they are.

Bear
theFISHface
theFISHface 5th Jun 2011 23:03 - 13 years ago
I'm not really into metal and i def like ur acoustic song better

but this is good . . . . . very good

theFISHface
JohnBoutilier
JohnBoutilier 5th Jun 2011 02:47 - 13 years ago
Lol, its amazing how many people use clips from apocalypse now. Glad to see another metal\rock talent on here. We need more.

I like the track and your arrangement.

Is that you doing the vocals?

Might be a collab in the future :-)

John
ColeAlexander
ColeAlexander replied Unknown
Yes I did the vocals in this track, however that is all I did. I can't remember who I got this from though.
Allistar
digitalSKYY
digitalSKYY 5th Jun 2011 01:41 - 13 years ago
Awesome stuff man!!
What are you playing exactly?

Later this month ill be working in about a half million dollar pro studio for a few things and ill have my set up in studio. I would love to collab!

I specialize in metal, my DB is insane (just saying, not being cocky lol)
Let me know!!

Cheers
Kenny Lee
ColeAlexander
ColeAlexander replied Unknown
The thing is I can play guitar and drums, but have no way of recording them to sound good. I am mainly a vocalist. I have been in over 7 different bands since I was 13 as a vocalist. Most of the tracks except "These Hollow Halls",which was recording by me and a friend, are all by other people and I just put vocals to them so they can see their track come complete.
CyberSon
CyberSon 4th Jun 2011 18:36 - 13 years ago
Very, very tightly produced my friend. A great arrangement and I really liked the use of the sample. Although not my type of vocals, I thought it was extremely well performed. Nice one!
ColeAlexander
ColeAlexander replied Unknown
Thank you every response is greatly appreciated. If you don't like screamo vocals I have another song up that's acoustic. :)
Thanks for the Review
Allistar

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