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14th Jun 2011 02:18 - 13 years ago
Description : A song I made; pretty acoustic and mellow with a small drum beat to bring the song along.

Comments (9)

If you have time take a listen and give MeganONeill some feedback.

RuskiMagroo
RuskiMagroo 22nd Jun 2011 12:39 - 13 years ago
I really like everything on this except the effect on the vocal. Nice one though. Ruski.
MeganONeill
MeganONeill replied Unknown
thanx
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 20th Jun 2011 07:51 - 13 years ago
Nicely done. I think you have a great voice, and it is good enough to carry the song without the autotune (I'm not a big fan of autotune, especially with people who can sing.....and you can sing). It would be interesting to hear this one with you singing the same lyrics and melody with a piano accompaniment. Great lyrics and I think you have mad skills and control.

Very nice track.

Bear
MeganONeill
MeganONeill replied Unknown
thank you so much! I actually thought this song didn't have the autotune on it...weird. I do know I have a version with autotune and one without but thank you for the comment!
lostjoe3
lostjoe3 18th Jun 2011 00:42 - 13 years ago
I like this song very much even with the drums,even though i would have done without it, because your very talented with such a beautiful voice, that it carries its own with the guitar.
MeganONeill
MeganONeill replied Unknown
thank youu !!
KillaKeishh
KillaKeishh 16th Jun 2011 21:49 - 13 years ago
love the acoustic but i think you should go even simpler with the drums..i love the vibe of thissss!!
MeganONeill
MeganONeill replied Unknown
okayy thankss !
etamski
etamski 16th Jun 2011 00:11 - 13 years ago
nice;)...smoth..and i know this guitar loop;)..loopmasters..yes?;)...nice vocal..maybe i can use your voc???..this is my profile..http://www.facebook.com/profile.php?id=100001581348554.......add me ansd we will talk about it;)...
MeganONeill
MeganONeill replied Unknown
lol added u, pretty sure the loop is frm MINOR2GO on here yeah thanks for the critiquee.. i am waiting for validation on two loops so wenever those come up you can use em and show me what ya come up wit. thankss
WaPer
WaPer 14th Jun 2011 19:34 - 13 years ago
Hey Jdashit!
Cute song. Like the lyrics you wrote. Guitar loop fits the song among singing, but the drum coming unexpectedly and its to fast for this type of song i think. Maybe you just wanted that way... this is only my opinion.
Keep your work!

Cheers!

WaPer
MeganONeill
MeganONeill replied Unknown
thank you for your critique ! I kinda wanted to give the song a little boost but I'll work on my stuff, thank you for that ! :)
RoyaleMuzik
RoyaleMuzik 14th Jun 2011 03:00 - 13 years ago
I really enjoyed this, I love the vocals & lyrics. This reminded me of Kylie Minogue, really nice pop feel & I like the guitar synth. I would turn the vocals up just a tiny bit more, but other wise great track!

-David
MeganONeill
MeganONeill replied Unknown
Thank you very much for that review !
Alcraine
Alcraine 14th Jun 2011 02:55 - 13 years ago
Nice track I love the lyrics.

Slow down the drums do. Sometimes less is more.

Keep Hustling

Alcraine
MeganONeill
MeganONeill replied Unknown
Thank you for your critique !
JohnnyHunter
JohnnyHunter 14th Jun 2011 02:43 - 13 years ago
Nice song. You have talent in songwriting. That you playing the guitar? I think the drums were unexpected. I think it would work really well if the drums were half the time. Or if it was just the guitar and vocal. Great stuff!
MeganONeill
MeganONeill replied Unknown
Thank you very much, and I will check you out as well !

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