try adding some melodies and/or pads to "smooth" the track.
it's not bad eh, i like how you mixed the barass but.. maybe after 3~4 min start being quite monotone

nothing to say more than the others! Needs some serious mixing, but that is not that hard! The ideas the music is nice and fresh! Cheers!

Unique track you got here! Like others have already mentioned, this track can use some work mix wise. Once you fix that, this track will be ready to go!

Interesting track. I noticed that there is not much dynamic range, so the kick, therefore doesn't sound as hard as it could with less compression.

About dynamic range:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Gmex_4hreQ

Part 2
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qUcgg2vMX_s

Levels are crazy high., it clips way to much. If you can get a handle on the DBS this would sound that bad. Just rememmber. , nobody likes clipping. It was a problem I use to have myself.

Hey there! I've got some tips for this piece and I will be typing as a listen to this song. What's with the blank noise at the beginning? Can you try to remove that? Also the "wubs" are to loud and seem to come in to early around 1:10. They seem out of place. Try finding a more synth lead. Around 1:45 your drums are peaking. A lot. Try using an equilizer- not just on the drums but also on the peace. The whole thing is very loud. 2:35 I see that you were trying to do a drum thing but that would be a good time to bring in a background lead. Did you use the same loops for the lead throughout the song? I know it can be hard but try to switch it up a bit. The percussion gives a very industrial sound to it and you could build off of it. This song is very good in my opinion, just try to equalize some things out and swap the lead out a little bit and this piece will be that much better. Good job with the piece overall though!