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13th Aug 2011 08:22 - 13 years ago
Description : Minor2Go's instrumental cut and pasted a bit with added effects and ability to make into a proper vocal accompaniment. I wrote the lyrics and sung. :] P.s. this is all done with garage band, taped with the mic that comes with a 4 year old laptop's built-in microphone, so I couldn't sing to my fullest... But I hope you enjoy the intention! Credit credit credit Minor2go.

Comments (20)

If you have time take a listen and give Zenia some feedback.

BradoSanz
BradoSanz 18th Dec 2015 07:07 - 9 years ago
Your piano is AWESOME....Oh my gosh. I love the way it sounds! With some proper mixing this song could be so mainstream! :D I know this song is older but dang, its better than a lot of songs that have been released by some of the other LM members :D

Brado
clindsay
clindsay 2nd Jun 2013 14:36 - 11 years ago
Very nice - I like the slight dissonance in the voice - it adds an edge. I think the crappy mike adds an authentic sexiness to the track.
andre778
andre778 24th Aug 2012 04:35 - 12 years ago
I love all your songs> But this one I love best.I think you could do a lot of damage with it across seas. Nice work.
FullCapicityMuzic
FullCapicityMuzic 26th Feb 2012 05:14 - 12 years ago
course we all know better equipment makes things....well, better haha.

but i'm listening to this for the second time, and i'm amazed because i'm getting something different as if it were the first time. as i listened i read some of the other reviews, and i think the sliding of the notes added a bit more character to the song.

minor's work always shines on its own!

and i absolutely love the fact that it has a positive message, and am grateful for you to share. great job!
DatBoiB
DatBoiB 4th Dec 2011 03:12 - 13 years ago
If u serious about doin a chorus for me than pick a beat and write one we can either exchange emails or put a download on here with the beat and ur vocals in the rights spots i can do the rest :)
i dont kno how much u kno bout music so dont b insulted but a chorus is just 8 bars and i need 16 inbetween to do my thing u kno? for a catchy song i think its best to do sumin simple u kno money skill love ect... u ever seen the movie hustle and flow? i can imagine u doin sumin like that... hard im sure but i always liked a challenge ;) lol whatever u come up with im sure will b fine tho
DatBoiB
DatBoiB 2nd Dec 2011 04:43 - 13 years ago
Thanks again for your commet on my track glad you liked it. You got a pretty voice i'd like to hear it more natural i dont kno if its the effects or program and mic. i use pro tools le with a shure microphone its a lil high end but worth it. its still on the low budget side compared to the real pros tho. Ever try a rap style chorus? I'd love to use it if you wanted to try to do a song with me?
Zenia
Zenia replied 2nd Dec 2011 - 13 years ago
I totally loved it, and I actually am hearing it again right now. It's great! Your flow is amazing. Ha, yes, so, for this song I was using my computer mic (aaah!) and for The Flight I got a new mic. I'm still learning how to use my new mic, so The Flight was a test in that sense. :) I would love to do a hook of some sort to a rap song, if that's what you're talking aboot? Like the whole female chorus thing? Let me know! I'd love that!! :D
ILMMUSIC
ILMMUSIC 29th Nov 2011 14:07 - 13 years ago
Beginning piano is also very good vocals the whole song sounds great at my wonder !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

did you choose me to do the vocals and piano.
nothing more and nothing less professionally:)

wishes of success in your work:)
Zenia
Zenia replied 2nd Dec 2011 - 13 years ago
Thank you very much for your comment. :)
I really appreciate it! I shall check out your channel as well!
DjDaz
DjDaz 29th Nov 2011 13:35 - 13 years ago
I really like this one! Very Nightwish-esque!!! Keep this up!
Zenia
Zenia replied 2nd Dec 2011 - 13 years ago
Nightwish! I just heard them right now. They are amazing! If I were to make a band, I'd make it like this. Haha, thank you so much. My voice really likes doing operatic type things, I don't do very well with plain singing...Her voice is gorgeous...Thank you so much DjDaz! :D
Mahloo13
Mahloo13 27th Nov 2011 08:59 - 13 years ago
Ah Symphonic rock or better said symphonic metal are bands like Nightwish, Within Temptation and such.

And about those pitch issues as far as I can see the problem lies in the fact that you don't hit the note instantly and rather hit a sharp or flat and then rapidly correct it, it is very subtle although I make it sound so obvious.

As I said in my earlier review you have a very good tone and definitely keep working on your voice.

Respectfully,

Malu
Zenia
Zenia replied 2nd Dec 2011 - 13 years ago
Oh. I will check them out, thank you so much for your feedback.
I heard pitch issues as well.. I had hoped no one would notice. ;) haha. No but really, I am currently re-doing the vocals. I can hear it, it's not at all subtle to me. You're totally right.
Check out The Flight and tell me if my voice is okay there, I also got a new mic which helps. :) Thank you!
Mahloo13
Mahloo13 26th Nov 2011 12:13 - 13 years ago
Well with the risk of sounding harsh...why didn't you fix those pitch issues? I don't like those slides at all.

Besides technical issues I think you have an absolutely great voice and I'd actually suggest you'd try symphonic rock tracks, you've got a bit of Tarja Turunen's tone in your voice and I really think it would work out perfectly.

My advice...get a good mic and sing to the fullest of your potential cause you've got plenty of it.

Best wishes!

-Malu-
Zenia
Zenia replied 26th Nov 2011 - 13 years ago
I didn't fix the pitch issues because I just got the mic and was figuring it out.... but I wasn't patient enough to wait till I figured it out I had just to just tape it! Yea, I know, my voice kinda has huge pitch issues... but i'm actually in the process of re-taping it now!

Thank you for the compliments, but seriously I really appreciate the constructive criticism, because I really need to hear it to know what to improve! :)

I have a yeti blue big guy, I just didn't use it properly.
I've never heard of symphonic rock... unless I have and I didn't know it! Any recommendations to get an idea of what it is?

Thank you! :)

-Zen
haven
haven 9th Nov 2011 02:16 - 13 years ago
i think this is great work - I like the inspirational mesg - you can have be and do anything - your voice is wonderful and no pitch issues that i heard at all - also great work on the production - love the interplay of the cello/violin - very nice!!
Zenia
Zenia replied 2nd Dec 2011 - 13 years ago
Thank you so much Haven! Inspirational music is my goal. Aw, that means a lot. You're an amazing musician yourself. I am in the process of re-recording this one because apparently I hear a lot of pitch issues haha, and I got a new mic. ;) Thank you so much for taking the time out to even comment!
FullCapicityMuzic
FullCapicityMuzic 18th Aug 2011 14:29 - 13 years ago
this is absolutely a great effort! your voice is perfect for this. your delivery is quite impressive. great capture of the musical atmosphere.
Zenia
Zenia replied 2nd Dec 2011 - 13 years ago
oh my goodness! thank you so much. Your voice always astonishes me, so I'm very honored. :) Thank you so much.
ShortBusMusic
ShortBusMusic 17th Aug 2011 20:08 - 13 years ago
Wonderful work and what a marvelous voice. I hear a bit of Kate Bush but also some Ann Wilson thrown in for good measure (I'm an old guy so I remember her well). I love Martin's work, and this song is a nice blending of two great artists.

I look forward to many more from you. Another great female singer on the Loop. I love this place!!!!

Bear
Zenia
Zenia replied Unknown
Thank you! I definitely want to branch out vocally and try some different genres too, to see what my voice does. I do remmeber Ann Wilson ;) her voice is so deep though and rich! mine has some work to do. that's a big compliment though, thank you. :)

Gotta love the loop. :] keep in touch!
GEOram
GEOram 17th Aug 2011 20:01 - 13 years ago
DAMN! I've worked with plenty of female artist's and you rank up there with talent. The vocal range you can achieve is top notch , now i might be jumping the gun but i would say you've had some vocal training if not you really need to hone in on this skill...Great work on the track...
Zenia
Zenia replied Unknown
Thank you! that means so much to me. :D Oh wow...really?? I actually haven't had any training, which is kinda a bummer cus I've been looking around for vocal classes! I'm super touched, thank you so much. :]
MrMisery
MrMisery 14th Aug 2011 23:57 - 13 years ago
thank you so much for agreeing to do a the track with me,I dont use skype so is there another way I could get the track to you & thank you again your amazing!!! (looking forward to having a dedication with your vocals to acompany it) :-)
squeak
squeak 14th Aug 2011 23:57 - 13 years ago
all i gotta say is wow! amazing voice, amazing range you wanna do something with me and i def want you on baord. i would really love to hear what you can do with my candy girl track. so dl a copy and holler back wen you got something and ill record a better copy and let you know wen its up
Zenia
Zenia replied Unknown
your stuff is amazing too! im workin on the track, i unfortunately got a sore throat [[bummer for a singer!]] so i'll have some more tea and be at it preeeetty soon. ;D thanks man, that'd be amazing. :]
MrMisery
MrMisery 13th Aug 2011 20:46 - 13 years ago
well done on this!!! its amazing your voice is better than kate bush,you have so much soul in your vocals i love it!,would you be interested in doing a chorus for a track im working on? its about the loss of my sister but I really cant sing (I only rap) but I want it to be heartfelt & big...& you got that locked down tight!!!! let me know thanks ;-) FAVED!
Zenia
Zenia replied Unknown
I would love to do that with you. I know what it feels to lose someone you care about... so very deeply. Skype: Zinkles.
Thank you so much for the feedback!! :]
chongkongchewie
chongkongchewie 13th Aug 2011 20:40 - 13 years ago
this track is cool very good the bet goes great with your vox
VickyDan
VickyDan 13th Aug 2011 14:28 - 13 years ago
First of all you've done a very good choice, for loops, then your voice to the intonation of "Kate Bush" ....
Really nice ....

Dan
Zenia
Zenia replied Unknown
Oh my. :] thank you so much. she's got quite a voice... I'm thoroughly honored.
MightyBender
MightyBender 13th Aug 2011 09:51 - 13 years ago
Oooh! You gotta lemme Make something to your voice! Or, the other way around. You are awesome. I loved this. Rich voice! Great tone.
Zenia
Zenia replied Unknown
I would absolutely love to do that!! :D Definitely add me on skype and we can play. :]
yay! you're magical.

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