Menu
26th Nov 2011 16:09 - 13 years ago
Description : Track I am currently working on, can use all the feedback there is.

Mate told me this is a good site if you want feedback so here I am.

PEACE

Comments (8)

If you have time take a listen and give theshobbler some feedback.

BrummerBeats
BrummerBeats 27th Nov 2011 17:17 - 13 years ago
I listen to your beat 5 times today. I must f*cking have it when it's done.

peace, and thanks for you nice feedback.
theshobbler
theshobbler replied 27th Nov 2011 - 13 years ago
Then I am glad to announce the track is finished. But since I can't upload more than one track a day I have it on soundcloud already, the link for it is on my other track I uploaded on here, of course also listen to that one if you'd like.

PEACE
tryanothername
tryanothername 27th Nov 2011 03:28 - 13 years ago
Hey, thanks for your feedback on my track I appreciate it. This song is interesting, I would call it dubstep but it's different to a lot of dubstep that's around. I like the really stripped down drums and all the odd sounds and stuff you have going on create a cool atmosphere for the track. The bass is not just typical wobble bass either, it's really inventive and original sounding. You definitely have something that you could call your own sound here, good stuff!
theshobbler
theshobbler replied 27th Nov 2011 - 13 years ago
A lot of thanks goes out to you my friend! Yes I originaly made thi track with a dubstep tought to it. But a friend of mine on MSN told me that it definitly isn't dubstep, but I guesse it actually is, but then in my own style. Have other tracks like this, but this one is over the top compared to my other stuff.

Thanks for the comment and check you later :)
SHOKHER
SHOKHER 27th Nov 2011 01:35 - 13 years ago
Nice :) when its done you should send it to me, and ill dropp some Nasty Ruffneck with this, AKA A SHOKHER REMIX ;)

BUT NICE STRUCTURE

Much love, SHOKHER
theshobbler
theshobbler replied 27th Nov 2011 - 13 years ago
Yes will be prety cool mate, when it is done I will upload it on here, but it is too bad i can only upload one track in 24 hours because i have tons of other stuff I want you guys to listen too!

Peace
BrummerBeats
BrummerBeats 26th Nov 2011 17:57 - 13 years ago
reminds me a bit of dubstep. good work. =)

peace
theshobbler
theshobbler replied 26th Nov 2011 - 13 years ago
Yes, I am used to make dubstep, I will upload some dubstep tracks later on! Thanks for the nice comment

peace
Spivkurl
Spivkurl 26th Nov 2011 17:36 - 13 years ago
I would pump up the drums as you have said, but you may want to lower other elements, so things don't get too muddy. Thanks for the reply!
theshobbler
theshobbler replied 26th Nov 2011 - 13 years ago
Okey I will try something out, sometimes it sounds a little bit to busy, but havent yet mastered and mixed it correctly thanks for the feedback!
ScreamingZombie
ScreamingZombie 26th Nov 2011 17:29 - 13 years ago
hmmm...not sure at all... i think this sounds a little too much like mario bros. Respect for trying though hahaha
Ghostzyden
Ghostzyden 26th Nov 2011 16:44 - 13 years ago
Excellent composition, perfect rhythm, this is a great track my friend! I hear many influences and love the mix of styles going on here. Good work, keep it up. Its all about the music;)
theshobbler
theshobbler replied 26th Nov 2011 - 13 years ago
Hey thanks for the comment! This is actually still a work in progress, I am making music for over 4 years now. And just found out about this website. have been a member for 4 years of a site like this. It is sick :)
Spivkurl
Spivkurl 26th Nov 2011 16:42 - 13 years ago
Fun song! I really like the vocal clips! One thing I would work on is the balance between the drums and bass, because the drums sort of get lost in the mix. Still I enjoyed it thoroughly! Keep up the awesome work!
theshobbler
theshobbler replied 26th Nov 2011 - 13 years ago
Thanks for the comment, nice feedback. The thing about the drums being a little bit in the background is because I made this on my laptop and it has different sound than my other gear I have, should I pump the kick snare up a little?

You might also like these tracks

If you liked Just For feedback by theshobbler you might also like these other Electronic tracks.

23rd May 2024 21:08 - 10 months ago
Description : Feel free to check out the video on YT as well (Alan McLaren Project - Upside Down) of this 6min journey from electronic to rock with some psychedelic moments...
This is my latest, but also one of my earliest tracks.... any feedback is more than welcome, thanks :)
15th Nov 2021 02:34 - 3 years ago
Description : Electro psychodelic trance
7th Sep 2024 15:25 - 6 months ago
Description : Biggie Cheese Inc. has returned

Free use for whatever - Please credit me (BCI)

Any feedback is much appreciated
18th Feb 2020 18:09 - 5 years ago
Description : Im feeling progress in this one. First time doing something more hardcore.
Let me know what you think
24th Jun 2019 23:15 - 5 years ago
Description : A demo of one of my current projects. The chorus vocal sounds like "Aaaaraashe" to me. The song is in C# minor with a nod to C# pythagorean on the chorus. The beat on the verse was inspired by the Peter Gabriel song Intruder.
17th Nov 2016 22:33 - 8 years ago
Description : This track contains only free loops from several Looperman artists. Enjoy! Applied loops (fully or partially):

CHOKISTARZ: 0224756-0051325 (LO Temp-Pop),
0224756-0053733 (DS Arp-1),
0224756-0053734 (DS Arp-2),
PSYCHOTROPIC_CIRCLE: 0071878-0003227 (Gran Stutter Vocal 120),
0071878-0003277 (Weird Voc 03 160),
VIDMEISTER: 0329240-0071338 (Ginger ARP Bass 06)
CUFOOL: 0345547-0050757 (Blue Clouds),
DJPUZZLE: 0000013-0010394 (Hardstyle Vocal Loop 2),
DUSTHILL: 0139050-0016020 (depro string violin riddm 02),
LIONEL442: 0284916-0046285 (Vocoder Chorus),
TLC7777: 0672835-0064591 (Trap loop),
BOSEMOSE: 0760223-0081446 (Robot love),
DJ_JEZZA: 0076999-0007547 (Tribal banger),
FRATERNEMO: 0133345-0006042 (vox grain beat delayed),
ALIVIDLIFE: 0158799-0035929 (Hmnnn Brush Kit Imaged),
EDGE70158495-0024508 (Feel It 2),
WALLYKETA: 0039447-0000756 (wallyketatekloop),
ECKSJOE: 0148594-0020057 (8bit Loops - Drums),
NENADSIMIC: 0086756-0005040 (Made in Reason),
YISRAELEE: 0171741-0008663 (PWL Loop3).
25th Dec 2024 12:22 - 2 months ago
Description : I started this track 5 or 6 years ago but finished it just recently. Let me know what you think of my work.
14th May 2021 21:48 - 3 years ago
Description : Retrowave Cars! Its all about the oscillators.
22nd Jan 2015 06:08 - 10 years ago
Description : This is one of my earliest productions that I did at the start of my recording career. I did not have a keyboard at the time I made this song, so I improvised and used my sister's iPad and a 5 dollar GarageBand application instead, and plugged the headset jack into into my PT6 rig and did my best to turn each individual track (which were mono and there were about 25 tracks or so) into a stereo image. Then recorded vocals over it. My computer was so old and slow that I had to mix my music and then BOUNCE it to a new session - four times. My computer (which had 512 MB RAM and an 80 GB hard drive) couldn't handle more than 8 tracks at a time or it'd stop working because the processor couldn't handle it. Took me FOREVER to do. But I got it done. Had a lot of fun doing it too, even if it isn't my "best" work. I'm still happy with it, considering I didn't have many tools to choose from at the time.
5th May 2016 22:06 - 8 years ago
Description : Junior Paes - Saying Goodbye (Just Alone)
24th Jul 2019 23:22 - 5 years ago
Description : "no internet connection" Album on all platforms.

CLICK ON PROFILE PICTURE FOR LINKS.
10th Mar 2016 10:53 - 9 years ago
Description : Mash up of electronic / samples / rock track
Needs vocals !!
11th Feb 2021 21:41 - 4 years ago
Description : Long time lurker first time poster, pretty new to production n stuff, this is my first track in Ableton Live.
was going for a darkwave/synthwave sound, reminiscent of Justice, Carpenter Brut, Perturbator, ect.
Looking for some feed back, constructive criticisms or even just your thoughts if you liked it or not. This is just a rough cut on this current WIP, just the bones of it if you will.. If you have some cool title suggestions, would love to hear those too.
Thanks for listening.
-B
29th Apr 2011 02:34 - 13 years ago
Description : Far out mid-tempo fat beat deep chillout grooves with Eastern/Arabic and slightly menacing vibes, huge delayed synth bass and a great palette of psychedelic layered and intricate sounds (mostly synths) and a stirring, epic feel. Even has guitar solo section reminiscent of some 80s power rock which is then followed by a brief synth harp solo. I began making it straight after staying round the flat of the flute player from the legendary Ozric Tentacles - easily the greatest ever space rock band. I made this in about 2001 and still think it might be my best track (and it's nice and short, for a change). My production skills were much weaker in those days (no EQ, compression or mastering used here) but, somehow, this one turned out pretty much just right. Feel free to disagree. Now sit back and get ready to trip extremely far out. If you manage to return, let me know how that trip was...
11th Jun 2016 08:55 - 8 years ago
Description : Got some spare time finally...just started on some random ideas basically (lets say kygo meets alan walker). A blend of dubstep,edm,downbeat,tropical etc.
It's still a work in progress, so i would appreciate your honest inputs. Thanks to all those whose loops I have used in here, sorry I don't have time to search them out.
Edit-added some more filthy sounds from my previous tracks and gave it some ending. Advice will be helpful.