Description : Track I am currently working on, can use all the feedback there is.
Mate told me this is a good site if you want feedback so here I am.
PEACE
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Comments (8)
If you have time take a listen and give theshobbler some feedback.
Then I am glad to announce the track is finished. But since I can't upload more than one track a day I have it on soundcloud already, the link for it is on my other track I uploaded on here, of course also listen to that one if you'd like.
Hey, thanks for your feedback on my track I appreciate it. This song is interesting, I would call it dubstep but it's different to a lot of dubstep that's around. I like the really stripped down drums and all the odd sounds and stuff you have going on create a cool atmosphere for the track. The bass is not just typical wobble bass either, it's really inventive and original sounding. You definitely have something that you could call your own sound here, good stuff!
A lot of thanks goes out to you my friend! Yes I originaly made thi track with a dubstep tought to it. But a friend of mine on MSN told me that it definitly isn't dubstep, but I guesse it actually is, but then in my own style. Have other tracks like this, but this one is over the top compared to my other stuff.
Yes will be prety cool mate, when it is done I will upload it on here, but it is too bad i can only upload one track in 24 hours because i have tons of other stuff I want you guys to listen too!
Excellent composition, perfect rhythm, this is a great track my friend! I hear many influences and love the mix of styles going on here. Good work, keep it up. Its all about the music;)
Hey thanks for the comment! This is actually still a work in progress, I am making music for over 4 years now. And just found out about this website. have been a member for 4 years of a site like this. It is sick :)
Fun song! I really like the vocal clips! One thing I would work on is the balance between the drums and bass, because the drums sort of get lost in the mix. Still I enjoyed it thoroughly! Keep up the awesome work!
Thanks for the comment, nice feedback. The thing about the drums being a little bit in the background is because I made this on my laptop and it has different sound than my other gear I have, should I pump the kick snare up a little?
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Looking for some feed back, constructive criticisms or even just your thoughts if you liked it or not. This is just a rough cut on this current WIP, just the bones of it if you will.. If you have some cool title suggestions, would love to hear those too.
Thanks for listening.
-B
peace, and thanks for you nice feedback.
PEACE
Thanks for the comment and check you later :)
BUT NICE STRUCTURE
Much love, SHOKHER
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