Nice piece, my dear! Very well done!

Hey Patricia, You always deliver with your vocals, impressive! It's nice to see you around, hope you plane to be around more often, you are so talented.

I love the track and it seems like many have offered some good suggestions to help improve it. But looking down the list of commenters I find it a bummer how many of these wonderful artists are no longer active here. I do wish many of these people come back and contribute again.

Take care!

Wayne

I want to be in Love with you Patty ! Man you got some pipes ! I hadn't heard this track before. I know you have had some issues involving unathorized use of your vocals and haven't seen you post anything new here in quite awhile. Its a shame cause you are one of the top vocalists we've had in here. I personally would love to hear this song remixed and would love to hurt a set of strings shredding you out a lead guitar solo for it. If your still around and have any interest, drop me a line. Best wishes, hope all is well.

Neo

just had to log in for a listen....what to say...top class just as expected....good to hear you again Patricia.
Have been on extended absence from LM (& music)..but life may get back to normal in a few months.
Quite sure I still have my copies of those collabs we did Patricia...next time I crank up the music pc will check my backup disc & email you copies if you like.....Have your email from back about 6 or 7 yrs so if you have changed it just use my contact button & will try & get back to you next week..........Great to know you are still sharing your talent...hope all is well with you......Ed
PS: usually keep my page down to a few but just deleted the few that were there a while back till I get a bit of time for listening & follow-up..

Love the passion in your vocals and the music.

Excellent idea to reupload this brilliant track ! Top notch performance !

Compliments_____Orlando

Everything good and nothing to complain
peace & love

Nayab

So good ... Nice voice

Nice Patrica really great song. Your vocals are really fitting in the song nicely. My only negative comment it that you say > Collab. Enjoy. Yet just like you, your musicians or as I should say collaborators derisive recognition for this effort.

Peace

Skorchin Hott..I Love it!!

https://www.looperman.com/tracks?mid=soundhound

When You Are Here...Just posted it, hope you like it.....

I'm real liking this track, feels right vocally your sound is so dynamic
it don't really need a lot of help....Stands Strong On It's Own....

May the winds of life, blow only good things your way....

Peace...TG..

What amazing track Patricia! You have a wonderful voice. Great lyrics too! The production is on point. Truly nice work.

sounds pro, always great, keep it up

Please,if u got time check my music, on my profile. If u like hip hop u might like it .. Thank you and again WONDERFULL voice !

insane voice gurl u got insane voice ;x i luv it
;d

No, seriously, you can sing. And I really like your taste in music with the edgy and smooth guitars, drum snares, and the backing vocals. This is seriously enjoyable, not boring as I initially assumed. lol

This is great stuff. I really enjoyed this piece. You have a beautiful voice and your music is great. Keep up the good work and God bless you

wow... insanely powerful vocals, i like very much, blown away. The song is awesome...

this is great, very catchy, got it on repeat, great voice too.

This is legit! I def feel the emotion! :D

I'm convinced, there is no style you cant concur. You sing with such conviction. Now I want to be in love. Great track. PEACE THE MACK MAN OUT.

Any artist who can take a simple chord progression and do that to it has to be in another denension,Your writing and voice connection are just off the charts, You have a no boundry approach, which is unheard of these days !! keep rocking that faith! love it!

Bm ;)

Very nice song. I felt it the entire ride!

Haven't listened to none your stuff for quite a bit, your singing has always been on point. So decided to check your most recent, translation= the track on the very top of your profile. lol but yea this is great, you've belched it out plenty, keep doing you. peace

Neobane/InPSYcLe

When I first heard the into guitar I was thinking it was a Lita Ford song. Very beautiful song. Looks Like I'll be taking a look at you vocals section soon.

wow Patricia...I forgot how amazing your voice sounds. This track is very well down, I like how you powerful your vocals are and how they flow with the feel of the track.
the production is also great, props to the producer :)
see ya around!

Awesome as always Ma'am.
Well we are recording better now.Do lend us an ear!

Hey Patrica

Sweet very nice work on this one, sounds like a Pop/Rock type of piece, still get blown away with your vocals, have reviewed a couple of tracks for other artist with your pella, we are so blessed here on the loop to have someone of your vocal talent here, everything here sounds spot on, as I said in other reviews, you sound so much like Beyounce, but here with this one you sound different again, which is a great sign, extremely impressive work, well done...Peace Mos formly ELSD...

That was AMAZING!!
You have a wonderful voice!

you're the star of looperman
I am your fan ever
what about more
hope to see you published and then tell their friends
I was one of his early fans

I don't know what to say. This is amazing, beautiful...just all out great music/vocals. I agree with the first comment, this is a certain hit if it were to be released to the public. I am actually amazed you shared something this good anywhere, makes me feel real good about this site.

well what can i say??? if this was released in the charts right now... I would deffo be buying it! I love your voice! and the whole bag baby!

Patricia - this is great! Really - this could be a hit in my mind for sure - and as always yer vox are outstanding! I am curious about a little background on this - did i miss a description somewhere? Did you write it? Music? Lyrics? production? hope you are well and sending much love!!

Now this is something different! Very well performed and arranged. This could easily be aired on the radio.

It's to hear you branching out towards different challenges.

I enjoyed the driving vibe of the guitars, I think they really added a nice touch and worked really well with your voice.

Props to both of you!

i'm your fan

Patricia,

I am a bit of an old git! When I see the word "pop" in musical genre lists I generally listen to about 20 to 40 seconds of the track before I switch it off and curse like mad! There is just this X Factor appeal going on everywhere dragging in those who maybe like pop because their friends have told them what is cool to listen to! It is a shame. I am of the belief that if bad music wasn't rammed down the throats of these people by Mr Simon Cowell et al, then the charts would have an unfamiliar but better feel about them. Society is to blame for this.

And now your track.....

Soul, soul, soul. I appreciate the effort you have put into making the listener feel that they can offer you your love, concur with your sentiment or know someone going through a bad relationship that a certain song triggers the hairs on their necks. I feel you have achieved this and much more. A truly harmonious, strong and expressive vocal talent you have. And you have captured the whole essence of emotion in this song. I congratulate you. This is lovely!

Regards,
djkp

You are baby. You love music and music loves you. Sing it girl. Soul emerges from your being here. Musical composition slick and grooved. Vox pushed and slammed..yeah. Fantastic and natural you are! Love your range! Come over MacJams and Collaborate with us!

A SincerelyZipped, TvRicky

wow, this is killer stuff and loads of tunes form ya, will take me some time to listen here, but dam am i gald i did,love the style from a to z , thanks for sharing!

Bm;)

WOW!! I was really surprised nice track and the collab was pretty cool also.

Absolutely an uber gute track!

I think I'm in love...

u r tha truth!

great song!
u are a really good singer

great job by you and your mysterious collab partner(lol NUADASILVERHAND)

it is great listening to this!!!

Very nice voice! :)

I'M NEW 2 THE TECH SIDE OF STUFF. SO I DON'T KNOW EXACTLY WHAT EVERYBODY TALKING ABOUT. WHAT WE HAVE HERE IS A VERY EXCEPTIONAL PIECE OF MUSIC. MUZICIZMEE4EVER, U KILLED IT. YEAH THIS SHOULD TAKE U PLACES. I'VE LISTENED 2 A COUPLE OF UR SONGS. LADY UR A KILLA. A JOY 2 LISTEN 2. THANKS 4 BEING OUT THERE. PEACE.

I think you did a really great job with this one Miss Muzik, i like that you show alot of versatility and a wide range of vocals skills, a real producers dream artist. Like i always say keep'em come'n cause im gonna ride wit you.... let's go!

Beyonce who?

This is awesome! one of the best things ive came across on this site..... Astounding arrangement and astounding vocals. Keep it up you killed this!

Jeez fellow loopers. The attack on the quality of the musical production keeps coming in waves lol. Im kidding yall, dont attack me now haha.

Putting the technical stuff of the music aside, the vocals are beautifully amazing. Great singing as it went with the music really well. It all flowed great. Gave it like 12 listens since i cant dl it haha. Now, the mix and mastering of this track is.... Just kidding lol Almost got you rolling your eyes...

Anyways this track was a Real pleasure to listen to. Amazing work!!!

MM4E..this is a great song, and it's obviously a great song. For sure, real instruments are gonna inject some more life into the track. I agree with all the other posters about the mix/mastering. Try this....not to change the song, but learn more about the song you have: take it from BIG to small. You can hear how/where to power up an instrument or a section alot easier when the track is small and quiet to begin with. For me, when a track is already big and intense I fine it hard to hear where the dynamics are making a difference. It's an experiment that will payoff. Once you find tha places where the intensity needs to ramp up in the quiet version, you can then go back to addressing your existing version. TK

beautiful track, great lyrics and supreme instrumentals..i have to agree with pjb tho..the stereo image as a whole sounds way to flat, it doesn't expand when it needs to expand and compress where it needs to be compressed, its needs dynamics basically, especially in the chrous...my two pennys wud be take this to a professional sound engineer and he/she will make sure the sonical quality of this track is as good as the emotional quality..and then you will have a masterpiece on your hands

keep it up
samoi08

Well young lady, this is really nice work...better than nice - your vocals are absolutely flawless. Move over Beyonce/Rhianna/et al, and make room for a real artist!!!!!

I have to agree with Dave, but for different reasons. This would be a fantastic song if it was done with real guitars (I'm not a big fan of the synthesized guitars). I think if this one was done in a studio with real session players it would be a hit record. Something for your collab partner to think about.

Can you imagine how good this could be with Planet on bass, Bilbozo or Rei or AllenV or MackMan or Randy or any other number of great guitar players that are on this site doing the guitar work, and then maybe Buddrumming on drums??????? Ohhh that would be fine.

Anyway, sorry if it seems I'm nitpicking but this one really has major, major potential. It has all of the necessary elements to be a hit record. It would just be fantastic if you and your collab partner could wander into a studio and do it up right.

Great song though, and again, your vocal work is spectacular.

Happy New Year

Bear

Great track Muzzzzzzzic!....a splendid performance....the backing music,the vocals and whole vibe is really cool.....But!lol I'm putting my studio hat on here so please don't think this is negative, the whole sound needs to be remastered maybe,it's there but hidden under a layer of what sounds like a mastering preset..I'm not hearing the individual dynamics of the instruments enough or your fantastic voice brought to the level it should be.....Don't get me wrong I love the song and the music,but it's not breathing enough on the production side of things....mind you having said all that,it might be that my ears are shot! lol.....I always think there's a risk involved with critiquing or rather someone like myself who isn't a professional studio technician passing judgement.....your a real talent,no dispute....maybe what I'm really saying is you deserve a big production house behind you. :)

I can't believe I'm early enough to be the first to comment on this upload. of course it's brilliant, love the lyrics and the guitar..harmonies are in the pocket. It sounds like you did some effect on your voice (maybe?). I don't think you should put anything between that beautiful instrument, and the listener's ear.

Was fantastic to listen to!

Nameste,

Leahcim