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24th Jan 2012 20:10 - 13 years ago
Description : *Up-date* Editing done to volume levels of background vocals & used different eq mix to see if the sound has improved!

This track is the finished product of my instrumental "Unfold My Love"...retitled "We Cry", produced by myself with Lyrics & vocals by my cousin LaRayne. I've been producing tracks for some years now but this was my first stab at producing/editing vocals, so i'm pretty sure there are a few miss-steps/off beat slips with the vocals. Please listen and let me know what to improve. Vocals start at 1:07, enjoy & thanks!! P.S. Lyrics are included if you'd like to read them!

-David

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If you have time take a listen and give RoyaleMuzik some feedback.

bil0700
bil0700 31st Jan 2012 01:22 - 13 years ago
Love the beat and her vocals were amazing. great job
RoyaleMuzik
RoyaleMuzik replied 31st Jan 2012 - 13 years ago
Thanks Clarkey, much appreciated man!!

-David
mackit
mackit 30th Jan 2012 03:30 - 13 years ago
Hey Choki,MACK MAN still around.The track is the bomb. you are a synth using guru. I really like the sub on this track,great vocals. I agree with SILVERPAW to boost at 1500hz 1or2db or so. I also herd distortion. I would even roll off the bottom freq. between 60-80hz,then try using a graphic eq on the overall mix.Little more stereo on the back round vocals. Of course it's better to repair what ever problems a mix has before mastering.PEACE. THE MACK MAN OUT.
RoyaleMuzik
RoyaleMuzik replied 30th Jan 2012 - 13 years ago
Thanks Mack, man it's always a pleasure! I know exactly what you me...I went back a did a little editing to the volume levels of the background vocals and tried a different eq mix to see if the sound has improved...I still hear a little buz during the last verse...will have to go back and edit that...but thanks again!

-David
FullCapicityMuzic
FullCapicityMuzic 26th Jan 2012 02:52 - 13 years ago
In addition to all thats been said, the background vocals are louder than the lead, I think the lead should be out front just a tad more, at least where the backgrounds are.

It isn't always easy to blend vocals with muzic but if you think about it it's just another instrument, much like the ones that made up the instrumental track. No worries, it can only get better :-)

LOVE the lyrics! Overall good job!
RoyaleMuzik
RoyaleMuzik replied 26th Jan 2012 - 13 years ago
You are absolutely right, and I realized that after I finalized the track...My cousin LaRayne (who wrote & sang the song) will be going to an actual studio to re-record the verses...so it should sound much better. I'll update this once that happens, and i'll also have to master is because I've somehow distorted the bass a little doing the chorus. Thanks alot for your comments/critiques...greatly appreciated!

-David
SBzilla
SBzilla 25th Jan 2012 02:20 - 13 years ago
On point Choki!
RoyaleMuzik
RoyaleMuzik replied 25th Jan 2012 - 13 years ago
Thanks Sean for the comment, always appreciated!

-David
Carmino
Carmino 25th Jan 2012 00:02 - 13 years ago
i Liked That A Lot !! Nice Work..Keep It Up ! , Godbless .
RoyaleMuzik
RoyaleMuzik replied 25th Jan 2012 - 13 years ago
Thank you much Carmino for your words, greatly appreciated and i'm glad that you liked it! I read your profile...I've been trying to collaborate on here but nothing ever comes to fruition! I'd like to collaborate with you if your up for it...just let me know, my e-mail is on my page. Thanks again, will definitely check out your music!!

-David K.

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