well ofcourse I know may it's an old track for u,but it's my first time that I've listened to it(in fact the first track wich I've heard from you) & my appologize if I'm late.
any way I listened to & enjoyed it ,nice & suspended intro , then beauty & proper vocal style( U both )& commensurate lyrics , well done chill out atmosphere which hypnotised brain .I also liked how beat added to mainstream theme , & some how helped my brain to complete a supposition Image for myself with listening to music .
any way cheers & well done.
regards
__Behnam

At first excuse me, if I write nonsense, but sometimes I´m looking for the correct English words.
As I told you before I love that song. The beginning is mysterious and it should go on after the drums started. So you definitely need to make an extended mix. Maybe you can use some loops.
You tell me, you´ve got difficulties making tracks more than 4 minutes. But don’t consider time. A song needs some kind of structure. Introduction, bridge, main part, end. I know that it isn´t easy to plan a song in parts, but I can tell you what I do.
After I planned the mood and the basic idea some tracks seem to come to me at once, they appear and then the precision work begins. I try different sounds and options. I burn the song on a cd and listen to it in my car while I drive to work. So I hear what is missing or what I´ve got to change.
I hope this was helpful for you. Next thing I´ve gotta do is to listen to your soundcloud stuff.
Maybe you can take a look at my video clips, because if one of my songs has been done I do a second thing: the video clip. http://www.youtube.com/user/House7th/videos?sort=p&view=0
Have a good time and cheers from the Lower Rhine Region, Germany
PS: visit me at facebook: https://www.facebook.com/pages/7th-House/212727518740546 and Soundcloud: http://soundcloud.com/7th-house

This song makes me nod my head, my right foot starts moving, what happens? When the drums started, I was gone in the rhythm. I could hear a lot more of that tune.

Hiya GG my friend. Lovely piece of work you have created here. Dreamy, blissfull, relaxing, easy on the ear, simple yet not dull. Lovely switch when the drums kick in. Then that bass just rolls along like a Rolls Royce fulla helium. Quality work indeed.

Hi ya!

loved this!

nice journey you've aloud the listerner to go on.

I just make music for fun and know how addictive it can become lol

great work,you've produced a real nice track and i think your go a long way!

real nice Track,
really blissful!

I went to the other place you sent me a link to and was able to hear it clearly. Nice. I like the ending when all of a sudden the drums go to banging.

Mr. P

coool, nice right off to pique our interest. Dig the spacey sounds & the ethnic feel.. killer movement ! Excellent work on the bass.. moooore..

thanks !

neal visher

Is it supposed to build? I see your comment, wait for it. Ah. I just don't get it...I can't hear it and I wanna.....It seems to start out in complete silence then gets a little louder but not much..I can hear others pieces fine. let me know..I mean I'm listening to it right now and right at the end when the drums kick in that's all I hear clearly, everything else is very low.

hmm. Did that then realized that since my speaker system is running through the same jack it shouldn't matter. However, I gave it the benefit of the doubt. Still can't hear it until the end.

Mr. P

Ahha...right at the end i could hear it better. But from the start, I think I hear something but it's so low it's indistinguishable from my laptop fan..just couldn't hear it bud. I'd love to.
and sorry for the second post. went back and kicked the song closer to the end.
Mr. P

Greetings again ggarris. I tried my best to listen to this. Couldn't hear any of the first part of this and about mid way it started to get a wee bit louder but still not loud enough, even with my sound system turned up all the way. I had to stop it and turn my system down. Didn't want the volume to suddenly jump out and find me wearing speaker goo. "StarFleet boost your matter gain, we're losing them" Not getting enough signal.........I'm sure it's good but until I can hear it I can't call it.
Being honest.
Mr. P

Wow now this is great mate and you've only been doing it for 6 months,keep it up mate...your doing well i like it.

Nice one! I Like it!!