Description : I tried hard on this song, tried to record something id listen to and i think it came out good, if you like mainstream rock then give this a listen and please let me know what you think, thanks in advance. (comment to download)
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Good tune - needs arrangement and modulation of the vocals as well as a bridge. The song holds up just needs some tunesmithing. I concur with JJWeeks.
-clindsay
marvelous guitar arpeggio , considered usage of strings & frets of guitars ,and that Pad which comes and go & makes this package warm an warmer ..very welldone kriebel17 .respects.___Behnam
Did you record your vocals while you played or separately?
This song would be even more neat with some harmony layers added to it as well!
There's a lot of emotion in your voice, it's clear, and you poured your heart into this (even if it may be broken?)- but I'm not convinced this is the final product. I encourage you to think of ways to add over it in layers, go deeper in that emotion!!!
the music was someone elses and my vocals were recorded on 3 takes and just kinda meshed together, thank you for your kind words , i vermy much appreciate it.
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Kyle
Did you record your vocals while you played or separately?
This song would be even more neat with some harmony layers added to it as well!
There's a lot of emotion in your voice, it's clear, and you poured your heart into this (even if it may be broken?)- but I'm not convinced this is the final product. I encourage you to think of ways to add over it in layers, go deeper in that emotion!!!
Great job, Kriebel17!!