Haha I like this song alot ! ! "This is deff last one......last one.......last drink mate......no more guys" Haha made me laugh for sure. U did a great job.

feel ya buddy. when i go for a few cheecky ones, i come home 5am smashed as f***.

im likin it dont no why but t his ones really humerous to me. made me smile and laugh loved it mate lol

Great.
Nice to hear something that isn't just a bunch of loops pasted back to back with no thought given to musical structure. You're a real songwriter!
Love the samples from the bar, they add just the right touch.
An inverstment in an autotune plugin might be worth considering for the vocals but not really necessary (I can't live without my autotune).

Nice guitar and beats although, to be honest your vocals are a little off tone... man that's hard to say... but yea good job

We need more people like you in this world, it would be a happier place... Great job on the song! Music is not about trying to be good, or trying to be the best, its about MAKING MUSIC, and you guys are pros at doing what you enjoy doing, I give you a thumbs up!

i like your style.cleaner vocal sound on this 1.great words again.