Description : My latest collab from here. It is/was called, NaiN-1.. by, mariuszkip. I did not partake in any instrument or anything else on this song, only the writing/lyrics/vocals due to the great collab request. So, I ripped, "The Nerve."
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I agree, absolutely. In fact Im going to eq and master all these songs "again" because the person I hired to do it did such a horrible job. Just havent had the time lately..
I never got these songs exactly how I wanted to hear it on load speakers, for I am certainly lacking expertise in the mix down of everything. Thanks for the comment..
Lesson 1.. Never mix your stuff on headphones. It will sound nothing like you wanted once it hits the big speakers..
I see now that you didn't do the music. I guess you can't pan the guitars. Sorry, I should have paid more attention. Vocals eq and panning would help, and disregard the guitar feedback.
Thanks for the suggestions. But, ya, there isnt much I can do with a downloaded instrumental. I will try to put a smoother eq sound on this one though as soon as I find the correct tool. With regards...
The issue seems to be the vocal's mix,eq and pan. Vocals sound like there is a lot of low end in there that is distracting and muddying things up. The vocals sound more spread out than the guitars, which sounds kinda bad. Vocals themselves are good, just overwhelming the guitars/everything in a bad way.
I'd say to try to take some of the vocal's low end out, and boost the bass guitar to compensate. Spread the guitars more and keep the vocal's more centered. The two don't sound properly connected.
Now, that said, I really like the writing of the guitars and lyrics. Not so much into the message, but it sounds like you have a bit of experience writing. That's big.
I love the heavy shit, and your distortion sounds pretty chunky and good. I'm jealous.
I hope you appreciate constructive criticism. Only wanting to help.
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Description : I discovered Meshuggah around 2003 and was blown away by the power, complexity and super Heavy sound of their music. Their "Nothing" album marked the switch to 8 string guitars and pushed Heavy Metal into a whole new territory. My track is a variant cover of their song "Nebulous". I have stayed pretty close to the original but added a few dynamic elements of my own. Its loud, its super heavy and way out there...Beyond Nebulous.
Description : This unconventional metal track is dedicated to Valvedriver https://www.looperman.com/users/profile/841435 though it's not a parody of his fine music or me actively trying to sound like it. I struggled for months with the first few minutes of this track knowing that I must be able to take it somewhere deeper, more psychedelic and powerful. Then I loaded some sampled choir voice instruments, as used in my track Reckful https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/160356 and suddenly found myself happily in Valveland - not a place I visit often. Feeling amply Valvedriven and newly inspired, I added the last few minutes fairly easily and very quickly. So: it's a twisting, turning mixture of grunge, menacing ambient, mystical metal and ultra-heavy funk. Instruments: electric guitar+bass, synth basses, female choir voices, one synth pad, some other synths on the nastier side of things and a few programmed heavy acoustic drumkits playing a mixture of triplets and straighter grooves. Interesting thoughts appreciated. Favourite bits? Shit bits? Please listen on good headphones/speakers as there's a lot of heavy bass in this. Now get ready to rock: balls out, hands in the air and with rebellious joy in your heart. Just try not to headbang the hell out of your laptop. Go!
Description : Whats up guys?! Been a while I know. Iv'e moved around a lot but have finally settled down and have been hard at work with my metal band. Unfortunately I've had to put my solo work on hold for a bit while I'm recording with the band. We are being professionally recorded now, a very big step up from the last recording of my band that I posted here. Anyways, hope you guys enjoy! We are, Raze The Pyre.
Description : Rough sketch of a Heavy Metal tune.
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Description : FINAL UPDATE -- 25.06.2015 -- L.O.D - Lovers of darkness
- Phatkatz4 on guitars and drums
- Joe Cramer vocals, synths and drums
I tryed to enhanced Phatkatz track. https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/139962
used loop - Chris Hall waves-and-ocean
german and english lyrics are in the lyric folder
enjoy - comments are welcome
Description : used 4 loops from 3nigmadjing including the insane riser which i love big thanks for that looperman-l-2432186-0114538-3nigmadjing-insane-trap-or-dubstep-buildup and ableton with old greco stratocaster.
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Thanks for the comment..
I never got these songs exactly how I wanted to hear it on load speakers, for I am certainly lacking expertise in the mix down of everything. Thanks for the comment..
Lesson 1.. Never mix your stuff on headphones. It will sound nothing like you wanted once it hits the big speakers..
The issue seems to be the vocal's mix,eq and pan. Vocals sound like there is a lot of low end in there that is distracting and muddying things up. The vocals sound more spread out than the guitars, which sounds kinda bad. Vocals themselves are good, just overwhelming the guitars/everything in a bad way.
I'd say to try to take some of the vocal's low end out, and boost the bass guitar to compensate. Spread the guitars more and keep the vocal's more centered. The two don't sound properly connected.
Now, that said, I really like the writing of the guitars and lyrics. Not so much into the message, but it sounds like you have a bit of experience writing. That's big.
I love the heavy shit, and your distortion sounds pretty chunky and good. I'm jealous.
I hope you appreciate constructive criticism. Only wanting to help.
Take care.
Evan
yes it is a good production as far as metal goes
well done Octonimus