Description : I make weird music, so brace yourself. This is a somewhat emotional beat; RnB/hip hop type song. This is my first attempt at making a rap instrumental. I know the bass is kinda like in your face, but other than that all criticisms are WELCOMED. I made this a while back, so cut me some slack, I've made progress. Regardless, please give me as much advice as you see fit.
Also, feel free to rap or sing to this or whatever you do.I'd love to hear what people do with it. Just put a link in a comment. And thanks to Chefboydee for the drums.
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I really love this beat. Thinking of throwing something on it. I seem to be in the minority though, as I feel the vibe get thrown a tiny bit by the shouts. I wouldn't have put them in, but that's just me. Otherwise, it's clean. Very nice man.
Thanks! And I see where you're coming from. I guess the shouts are just a matter of personal preference. Either you like them or you don't. No harm no foul. But I appreciate the listen anyways.
nothing weird about it to my ear MrShores...Its just good music put in a modern hip hop context..actually I don`t find the bass overstated at all...with the kick its holding down the bottom end well and I have noticed that bass is generally a more prominent part of music that it used to be...as far as EQ in your high mids go...I always give the lead (piano) its natural space and make other overlapping sounds go around it...I like the track...its really well done..and I really don`t think it needs more than you have here.....much enjoyed....Ed
Hey I love this song and I am going to try and write something worhy of putting my voice to this. Thank you for your generosity and thank you for ltting us use this.
I'm glad you liked it.... But that ay! is my own little special loop. I listed how to make one in a previous comment, so you can just do that, but I'm keeping this one for myself. Nothing personal.
Its strange that I played guitar professionally for many years, but have always admired the sound of a piano. This is a beautiful song and piano can tell a story like no other instrument. Use a little subtractive eq in the mids and this will clean up nicely.
Thanks for the review. Yeah I noticed the mids were a bit sloppy. I think it is on part due to to my lack of panning. There is no sound strange so the middle is a bit crowded. But i have put that on my to do list. Thanks for the constructive criticism. It's how I grow.
Nice track, like how you made the track different because it makes you unique in that way ;) And very good for first attempt. Looking forward to see someone doing the lyrics on this song and I hope you find someone
beautiful lyrical intro. i am really hearing the rap over this one so I think you have succeeded. introducing classical feeling with strings,extended melodic sections is innovative fresh sounding. the "shouts" remind us we are still in hip-hop land! the dissonance in piano at the end is unexpected bite! nice work.
Thanks, I appreciate it. And yea, the shouting was originally a lady screaming "DJ!" but I cut out the first syllable and put an echo on the "Ay" part of Jay. I didn't think anyone would notice it. I'm glad it stood out. Thanks.
read your comment about the bass It's funny I just learned this today so hope it helps I am using FL 10 but if can try adjusting the mixer volume or a parametric equalizer or a limiter helps control the pitch power and volume of the bass again hope this helps and I love your work.
Yea, I work with Mixcraft 6, so I've been using the EQ on my master track. I just wanted to try to keep the punch but lower some of that reverb. I have master limiters on all my tracks to control the volume, but I'm still working out some of the kinks. I may even leave it as is, but I'm grateful for your input.
hey as far as I am concerned you knocked this out of the park. I am new hear but can only hope to make beats that good maybe after a few hundred more tutorials lol. You going on the fav list for sure bra! great work.
Thanks. I'm hoping I can find someone to do some. Not only is my mic broken, but I've never been too good with words and things of the sort. But I appreciate the support.
I really like it - great use of strings and the melody is compelling. I liked the background 'heys'. The production values are actually very good bass and all. On its own it is good with a good lyric I think it could be great. I can tell you took some time with this.
I'm a fan of piano and strings, in this instrumental they sound really good! The melodies are expressive that provokes the mind to wonder while enjoying as it goes along. I like the ideas you had for this. I hear what you mean about the bass in your face but thankfully I got bass n treble knobs on my speakers so I can really get the most enjoyment out of this great tune. That bass is alive and breathing! The only suggestion would be to adjust the bass and treble eq that I believe could turns this clearer and give a good bang through speakers. On headphones it's more controlled but again the eq would make this shine. Really like this man. Good 1st attempt and thank you for sharing! Have a good 1, Peace.
Thanks for the tip. I'll try the EQ suggestion asap. I really appreciate the tip. I always wondered why there was such a difference in headphone and speaker quality. I always thought I just had terrible speakers (which I do) but this adds a whole new factor. I'll try it. Thanks man.
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And what a wonderful idea that shouting.
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