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12th Jul 2013 02:38 - 11 years ago
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Description : Vocals from Antranita:
https://www.looperman.com/acapellas/detail/3304
Drums from Spivkurl:
https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/61933
and from Kristijann:
https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/61819
Saxloops played by Ferriterry:
https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/62880
Thanks guys for sharing!

The rest is mine, the vocals sound a bit drowned under everything else - have to fix that later. If you have any advice, thoughts etc. - let me hear! It's definitely an odd song again...

Remastered - did my best bringing out the vocals but the pads have to be put on some other time.

Comments (17)

If you have time take a listen and give SeriouslyJoking some feedback.

LPROJECT
LPROJECT 14th Jul 2023 04:40 - 1 year ago
Wooooooów
FreeRadical
FreeRadical 29th Jul 2013 15:44 - 11 years ago
Well this has plenty of atmosphere. Nice layering of the vocals with the big reverb going off all over. It almost has a kind of dub sound to it except with pianos rather than bass.
This is a well chilled track and it compliments the spliff i've just smoked perfectly so cheers for that!
FR
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking replied 24th Aug 2013 - 11 years ago
Sorry for a very late reply but thank you for listening and for the review!
Mosestone
Mosestone 18th Jul 2013 03:48 - 11 years ago
Beautiful intro .. typing as I listen !! moody . nice beat . up the main vocal ? drop the piano or put extreme wide . sax perfect . slight string missing ? lovely flow . bass thump !! here and there ? Love It :) Peace & Light
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking replied 19th Jul 2013 - 11 years ago
A lot of useful suggestions - thank you for them and for listening!
Take care =)
ScottB55
ScottB55 18th Jul 2013 00:02 - 11 years ago
Very nice SJ. I noticed you used one of my collaborator's loops (Franco,) so I wanted to chime in and give you an "Atta-Girl" for your creation of a very cool, haunting track.

Cheers,
Scott
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking replied 19th Jul 2013 - 11 years ago
Thank you Scott!!
MrShores
MrShores 17th Jul 2013 07:17 - 11 years ago
I like this track, man. The feeling makes you want to move... no watch someone else move. I guess you hit the nail on the head with the dance genre here. Keep it up, man.
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking replied 17th Jul 2013 - 11 years ago
Thanks, man! ;)
I will.
SoraSolitudine
SoraSolitudine 14th Jul 2013 23:40 - 11 years ago
I loved the piano, the sax(?) and the voices!
Reminds me of Nelly Furtado, just a little... I don't know why.
I really like your song! :D
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking replied 16th Jul 2013 - 11 years ago
Thank you, tallented girl SoleixLune!
That made me very glad to hear.
Take care!
Mosestone
Mosestone 14th Jul 2013 21:26 - 11 years ago
I like your Creative thinking, very pollished. I like the spaces because it gives this production a very big studio feel and sound :)
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking replied 16th Jul 2013 - 11 years ago
Wow - thanks a lot for the review and for taking your time to listen!
ElectronBlue
ElectronBlue 14th Jul 2013 19:13 - 11 years ago
This is a good track. Tone the piano down a touch, the vocals are fine. Can you add a little bass to carry it along? Up the kick a littl more. I think that some times the percussion could do with some shake or ride just add to the quiet sections with no beat. But that is just my take and in no way reflects on your track. I like it as it is actually and you have done a great job apart from the piano been a tad loud. Well done.
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking replied 16th Jul 2013 - 11 years ago
Thanks for your time and all the suggestions to improve this track! I'll try to remaster it when I have acces to a functioning computer again (the old one just crashed).
So glad you liked it this way also - take care!
crucethus
crucethus 14th Jul 2013 18:20 - 11 years ago
Fantastic, you got the mix where it needs to be. Worthy of a download!
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking replied 16th Jul 2013 - 11 years ago
Perfect! Thanks for appreciation!
brillbilly
brillbilly 14th Jul 2013 16:38 - 11 years ago
I really liked this!

For me it's going in my Chillout file, as i found it real chilled more than Dance,but thats just my personal liking!

Great use of loops,I can tell your working hard to refine things,so dont worry as its sounding great.!

The main thing is the enjoyment you get,and not always how perfect music has to sound.!

No Track is perfect ever even for famous artist's,
as music is never static.
It breaths what ever life you put in to it.!.

Good Track man!
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking replied 14th Jul 2013 - 11 years ago
Thank you for the comment and for listening!
My laptop just crasched yesterday and died completely (or so it seems) and I'm now listening to this with other headphones on an other computer and - oh boy - it all sounds really muddy and not at all the same as before. I guess that's a good thing to discover!
But you are right - nothing can be completely perfect - or if it is, then it looses something else.

The muddiness I have to try to fix, though! =D

About the genre - I really didn't know where to put this, maybe you are right.
Take care!
deciBel
deciBel 13th Jul 2013 02:06 - 11 years ago
dear S.J, glad to hear a new track of yours after a while , and byond everything this new track of yours make me ask myself how would be if I become a father someday & can I compose like now & myself or like U ?!?
uuumm...I'm noT sure if I can ...!
oh I speciallY reallY love those SaX loops by FrancO , & U've used them so considered . & those drum lines by our tallented colleague Sprikuval , and as Patrick has told himself too , I also like those pianO too so much . vocal line's voice too was impressive . & totalY U had make a reallY remarkable package .welldone .thnX for sharinG .best wishes.___Behnam
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking replied 13th Jul 2013 - 11 years ago
Oh hi Behnam!!
So happy to have you back here with us!
Haha - well I Think you would get yet an other new dimension to your creativity if you become a father so I'm gessing you would sound as You but even more like You. And you already compose magical stuff, so it would be even more magical.

I love the sax too, and the drumloops in this song! And Antranita has a special soulful voice - I just remastered the track to get her voice more infront. I did the pianopart myself although it's only done in FL Studio and is not at all the real thing but maybe some day...
Thanks for listening and for the fav!

I'm so glad to hear from you that I'm fav'in YOU Behnam!
Take care!
aelmen
aelmen 12th Jul 2013 17:05 - 11 years ago
sweet and smooth! good work!
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking replied 13th Jul 2013 - 11 years ago
Thanks Anders! :)
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 12th Jul 2013 15:20 - 11 years ago
Impressed!
Very good: I second Steve's suggestion.
And I am looking forward to hearing the new version: this stuff is good!
Fav'ed
Domenico
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking replied 12th Jul 2013 - 11 years ago
Wow - thanks for the appreciation!!
Makes it worth the hole thing, actually.

Have a nice day, Domenico!
dansjoy4
dansjoy4 12th Jul 2013 13:58 - 11 years ago
Nicely done SJ...agree the piano can be toned down a bit but other than that fabulous work. =B-)
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking replied 12th Jul 2013 - 11 years ago
Thanks Dan!!
Spivkurl
Spivkurl 12th Jul 2013 13:51 - 11 years ago
This is cool! I like how you've used the vocals! Thanks for incorporating one of my loops! The mix sounds pretty good to me, except I would lower the piano a bit. Awesome track!
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking replied 12th Jul 2013 - 11 years ago
Yes - lower the piano - check.
Thanks for the loop and for listening!
Have a nice day!
=)
Darkreine
Darkreine 12th Jul 2013 13:21 - 11 years ago
Wow sister, you just keep getting better and better!! Just a few tweaks needed to boost this. Steve's right, the song looses momentum around 2.19, then picks up again after the bridge at 2.57. The vox needs a volume boost, but apart from that, you is on to a winner with this one.

K;)
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking replied 12th Jul 2013 - 11 years ago
Thanks Kenny!
I'll look in to that.
And hope the improvement continues considering I started at the very bottom not long ago. =D
crucethus
crucethus 12th Jul 2013 03:57 - 11 years ago
Really Good stuff. (and you call me eclectic ;-)) I agree with you on the vocals there is a part where it gets too soft in the mix. But you have created a nice minimalistic sound-scape for these pellas to thrive in. I might think about backing down just a tiny bit on the mix with the piano, and maybe consider using very sparsely a pad (like vickydan uses) softly fading in and out around the 2:20 area, just like a whisper of a hint of ambience. Otherwise I think you have the workings of a great song here, I'm impressed!
Steve
SeriouslyJoking
SeriouslyJoking replied 12th Jul 2013 - 11 years ago
Haha - yes one might call this eclectic. ;)
Yet, listening to it after one nights sleep I find the melody too monotonous, too much piano - should have been some other instruments playing the same melody somehow...or something completely different, to keep the interest.
I seem always to think a song is finished when it really isn't!

Well anyway - thank you, Steve, for your REALLY encouraging words and the advice with volume and pads! I'll look in to that.
Have a nice day!

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