What they said, hehe. And I like the mystery here.

Great effort. I think people have already pointed out what I wanted to say. Add some piano and a little strings and it will be great

Good things come from experimentations :) Good job! A piano melody would be cool to add. you got a great base to build on. What did u bake for Darkreine? I want some too!

Not bad man!
The music fits pretty well the vocal part, and I know that the "reverse engineering" process of finding the right chords for an already existing pella is not easy at all.
Well done!
Domenico

PS: one technical note.
You have some clipping in your track, nothing too bad anyhow.
But as general recommendation, if you don't have enough time to recheck all the channels one by one, try to keep some free headroom on them, this will avoid clipping.
And you can do the same for your "master volume": you don't have necessarily to reach "0db" on your output meter.
Most tools will normalize for you while "bouncing" your mix, thus bringing the levels to a nominal 0db.
For sure not the best workflow, but it ensures that you don't have any clipping.
And sorry for the ramble...

lol...hey dont worry..im always kind!

Love patricia's vocals,beat n sounds work fine.!

I think the tip about maybe adding a bit of piano is ideal,as this track has room for that,or some soft strings.!

But as it is,it's still real smooth and enjoyable so nice work!

Sorry, the baking was fine and very tasty, I meant the backing lol!! for fit, see fir!! Emphasizing!! I should aslo get a spell checker!!

It's a good start, but needs a little work to make it great. I found the baking a little repetitive. You need to pad it out with more instruments. Timing and composition fir really well. Keep doin it and don't stop believing in yourself!!

It's a match! Definitely working with that haunting synth and the rhythm but from 1:20 I'm thinking it could fit in with some more texture - maybe a piano coming in and emphasing the melody or something?