Description : Got this beat earlier from Looperman's Very own DjRymZ, thanks fer the go bro... it was a really quick make, half of it was freestyle the other half was an attempt to write something, for being so quickly made I am proud of the final product.. maybe Ill come back and redo it later, but this one I really want to hear some feedback, I dont usually do anything like this so I wanna if it sounds good..
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It's a coo song and the vocals aren't that bad. I record out of adobe audition CS5 and I tweak the sound with effects from fl studio 11. The final mix is recorded is Adobe though. Here is a tutorial where the guy is using different effects and coming out with a real nice mix. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p3dHwxjVYBo
I definitely like what we have here.
This is a very good starting point.
I think you need some minor changes to get it really flying. As others already suggested, try to "enforce" your vocals by adding a doubling vocal part. Or you could try to stress the melody with an instrument in background: it does not have to play exactly the same melody, but you choose some "key notes" and keep the background instrument moving around these notes.
Looking forward to see this song completed.
Domenico
Sounds pretty alright..definitely have potential..something sounds ..off.not ur norm style..but tis ok.think u need a girl to sing in with u in this one
Its got potential to expand on. Not too familiar from your usual style but this aint bad for a quick run. The idea you applied I think can mix with the beat real good but the same as Rymz said, get some backup vocals or your own dubbing in there. Even though the timing seems off some parts it still shared a cool vibe and able to follow along. I understand the situation of this track and great start. The instrumental is catchy and thoughts wrap around it ez. One of those up down mix. Thanks for sharing, keep it going man. Peace.
naw, FL I usually use to produce the loops/beats, but I aint dont that in a grip, I've been using Magix for the Recording.. tho I think I need to upgrade to different software
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This is a very good starting point.
I think you need some minor changes to get it really flying. As others already suggested, try to "enforce" your vocals by adding a doubling vocal part. Or you could try to stress the melody with an instrument in background: it does not have to play exactly the same melody, but you choose some "key notes" and keep the background instrument moving around these notes.
Looking forward to see this song completed.
Domenico