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24th Jul 2013 13:18 - 11 years ago
Description : UPDATED!
My latest work. It would be awesome to find a singer for this.. 105 BPM

Comments (15)

If you have time take a listen and give the47 some feedback.

mathivus
mathivus 25th Oct 2013 05:33 - 11 years ago
Mind if I can write some lyrics and try to record it with the composition you made?
the47
the47 replied 25th Oct 2013 - 11 years ago
sure! just don't forget to send me your song when you finish
3rdNippleMusic
3rdNippleMusic 22nd Oct 2013 16:54 - 11 years ago
yep, definitely got heads bobbin - you played the guitar eh - wicked.. duly noted.

:)

visher
Evisma
Evisma 9th Aug 2013 07:02 - 11 years ago
Excellent guitar work. I want to hear it again with vocals.
lostjoe333
lostjoe333 31st Jul 2013 00:29 - 11 years ago
a very good quality sounding track....has the right mix of elements.....heavy with a touch of sad, hope to hear this with some vocals.....
StaticNomad
StaticNomad 30th Jul 2013 04:12 - 11 years ago
As regards these words: "I've got a couple of guitars, and this one is a 7 string Ibanez Prestige guitar tuned to ADGCFAD, the chorus riff is in A, so yeah, it sounds low", I was going to ask if it was a 7-string, I just didn't get round to writing it. I love heavy low end so maybe I should get a 7-string too. But maybe another guitar just for serious low end is a bit of an extravagance (I already have a few and am actually mostly a fingerstyle slide resonator player). Do you find it offers you much more aside from heavy, distorted low end riffs? And is there anyone using one who's not using it to make metal?
the47
the47 replied 30th Jul 2013 - 11 years ago
I've got another 6 string low tuned guitar which is in A# F A# D# G C, that also works on low riffs (just get thicker strings and adjust the action) but I find that the larger scale of the 7 string gives those nice long vibrations, you can almost feel the power of the riff with your palm.
I wouldn't say that it opens a whole new world of possibilities, it all depends on your playing style and genre. But yeah.. if you want a deep low end while preserving the ability to play high pitched screetching solos - definetely have a look at the 7 or 8 string guitars
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 29th Jul 2013 15:13 - 11 years ago
good song.
Looking forward to hear Jenny singing on it (please JJ... please...)
And I think the snare is OK (now?)
Ciao, Domenico
StaticNomad
StaticNomad 29th Jul 2013 13:49 - 11 years ago
Yes, good work. Interesting mix of elements done in a creative and melodic way. It does sound like you've left lots of space for a singer and I'm sure there are lots who could make a really good song out of it. If you don't ever get one, I'd suggest going back in and changing a few things (maybe adding more)so that it doesn't still sound like space has been left for a singer. I love the real low end tone. I play in dropped D but don't get that sort of sound. Is it dropped C, perhaps? I do a very electic mix of genres but have lots of heavyish stuff. Try this hiphop/jazz/d'b'/saxophone metal track https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/145971 or this heavy slide guitar one http://www2.mixposure.com/Static_Nomad/song_focus_24417.php
the47
the47 replied 29th Jul 2013 - 11 years ago
Thanks, yes, you are right, I've left a lot of space for a singer to have room to breathe. This is not a kind of song I would write as an instrumental, so there will be a singer sooner or later.
I've got a couple of guitars, and this one is a 7 string Ibanez Prestige guitar tuned to ADGCFAD, the chorus riff is in A, so yeah, it sounds low :)

thanks for your feedback
evilarmy83
evilarmy83 29th Jul 2013 11:28 - 11 years ago
Nice to see some other metal people on looperman!!!
DesignedImpression
DesignedImpression 29th Jul 2013 09:04 - 11 years ago
Hello the47, Great sounding music right here. Everything sounds really top notch. The snare sounds good and tight. Is that drum take recorded live or samples? Guitar is great and feeling it a lot. When that synth starts whistling gets me hyped for everything to rock it out. Thanks for sharing. Peace.
the47
the47 replied 29th Jul 2013 - 11 years ago
Thanks, drums are vsti-s, the synth on the chorus is my first take at recording my new synthesizer that I bought last week.
cheers for listening
DjRymZ
DjRymZ 27th Jul 2013 00:46 - 11 years ago
Just too perfect... hit more like this
AlienSymbiosis
AlienSymbiosis 25th Jul 2013 17:31 - 11 years ago
This is pretty interesting. Much of it makes me think of the Euro/Scandinavian goth metal style (bands like Sirenia, Within Temptation, ect)...and then the midsection veers into 'The More Things Change'-era Machine Head. Nice!

I could easily picture a female singer with a wide range doing something cool with this track.
Ishimizu
Ishimizu 25th Jul 2013 17:14 - 11 years ago
max respect for this one, now really sounds friggin' awesome... thumbs up!

~so far
the47
the47 replied 26th Jul 2013 - 11 years ago
cheers for helping point out the flaws, it's really good to be pushed out of the comfort zone sometimes. If you guys haven't noticed the snare problem - I would have left it as it was. And now, listening to the old version - it does sound dull
thanks for your feedback!
PROblematic
PROblematic 25th Jul 2013 15:43 - 11 years ago
Not punchy enough...
Your music is powerful and snare needs to be sharp, so the whole drum can make song even more powerful.

If you know what i mean?
the47
the47 replied 25th Jul 2013 - 11 years ago
Thanks for your opinion, I have created a forum post addressing this issue
hopefully more opinions will clear out this matter
http://www.looperman.com/forum/thread/180538
PROblematic
PROblematic 25th Jul 2013 15:29 - 11 years ago
Great song, just fix that snare, and it will be perfect.
the47
the47 replied 25th Jul 2013 - 11 years ago
whats wrong with the snare?
JJWeekz
JJWeekz 24th Jul 2013 15:18 - 11 years ago
You are a star, you know that? Love your work, please post more! Would you mind if I played around with this one too on vocals and mixing?
the47
the47 replied 24th Jul 2013 - 11 years ago
This song is still in demo mode (I started working on it yesterday) but yeah, feel free to mix around with it! It would inspire me and may steer in a whole new direction

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