Nice track!
Keep the good work

Yes - there definitely is still a bit of clipping on that first note. I'm listening on hi quality headphones and on very cheap earbuds and it sounds the same.

I haven't actually tried on speakers (maybe I should).

Actually, there's still a bit of clipping on that main guitar riff (the one I said you'd fixed). But it's not really noticeable when the vocals come in. It's just there if you try to listen out for it and it's not a problem. But I guess it could be better, though maybe I'm being a bit perfectionist (you have to try!).

Wow, you really do have some cheap speakers! You must get something better if you can afford it. I have to do pretty much everything on headphones (I always hear that's not a good thing to do)because of the neighbours but at least I have some good headphones. They cost about £120 and are comfortable.

Anyway, it's still a good song, good mix and good musical crossover.

"I agree with everything you say and plus some !! Just got lazy and fed up with this track until you posted your 'kick up the backside' feedback, which is warmly welcomed and appreciated. Thank you so much : )"

I'm glad you took what was meant as constructive criticism the right way as I very occasionally get people here who really, really take it the wrong way. I just try to be honest but helpful. I know from my own work that when there are problems that should be fixed but there are also cool ideas and raw material that you can always make it better. And you owe it to yourself and the material to do that. You have to get honest with yourself and admit when thing's aaren't working or you've been lazy with an edit or whatever.

The re-edit is definitely so much better and that main guitar riff is now no problem at all. All so much smoother, no pain on listening. Actually I think the only problem is that very first note as it's clipping a bit too much.

Everything else is cool and you also got rid of the vocal snippets I didn't think worked.

The autotune "I don't know what's going wrong" is actually pretty good and unusual for this sort of genre.

I think this is now a really good track. Don't forget to check out Skindred - you will be inspired!

Yes, I love a good mix up of genres. If you haven't heard of the UK band called Skindred (terrible name) you must check them out. They are the greatest and possibly only proper mix of hard rock/metal and dub reggae. The singer is amazing and sings proper reggae and proper metal, often both in the space of a few seconds.

Anyway, your track is cool but there's a real problem for me with the guitar tone. It's too fuzzy and sounds like it's clipping but not in a good way. As it's a key feature it's bothering me and I hope you can fix it or re-record it.

Good vocals here and the drums are fine.

I really like the squealing, wailing high-ish guitar starting on 0:31 as it's a cool break after those vocals and good playing.

I didn't think the "uh!" snippet of vocal heard twice starting on 0:44 was good as it's too oviously an edit as it's too brief. I get the idea, I just don't like this particular snippet of vocal.

The shortish break without the guitar works well and then it's cool getting the high guitar back again. I also liked it as it gave my ears a rest from the tone of the rhythm guitar which sounds like an error to me rather than good distortion. I should add that what that guitar plays is just fine - the only problem is with the sound processing.

I hope you can fix that guitar as it's a powerful, direct track with some real balls.

Please remember to check out Skindred as I think you'll love them (perhaps start with the track Set It Off).

Overall: good work that people will definitely enjoy but needs some things fixing to help them enjoy it even more...

Pretty cool track you have here. Dig the mixing of Genres. Nice job.

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