vocals really make a track at times and these vocals work very well with this track..well done great track.

Hi sweet

Liking this one of yours, but needs a lot of tidying up,very nice vocal, never heard of the artist on the loop but might have to check her vocals out now after hearing her singing here, Like others have said seems to have a few flaws that seem blurred into the mix, personally I would add heavier beat to give deeper house feel to the track, This could be a very special track if flaws of the mix could be sorted, has so much potential to the track, really hope you re look at it, if you do please let me know would seriously love to hear it again when fixed up....Peace n Respect...Mosaic...PS I know you could sort this out going what I have heard of your other works here, been impressed with what I have heard previously....

Great work here!

Hey do...(swedish) lady,hmm i"m reading your text with the song. It's not so bad at all. The piano........your using FL..? do you use the "parametric EQ2 in you mixing track? i think not. If so then drop the 50 & 100 HZ. piano sounds better with the baseline. And not to much reverb..........:)) keep it clean. I like the song.....deep house...

Arps are nice :)
Delays on them is good too :)
There seems to be a lot of compression, almost limiting the pads to sound different than I think if they were to be uncompressed. Though, I know the power of compression and how good it can be :)
Beat I feel is too low in comparison to the rest of the tracks within the tune. Kick needs to be more prominent, give it more flow and emphasis; though not too much compression, or clicks start to form.
Piano is a bit too loud and ducks the entire track a little.
So over all, all that's needed is a little mastering/mixing :)
Nice tune!

I think why you may not be happy with this is that it is missing a solid bass groove to hold the rhythm together. Without it it sounds very ambient eclectic. I know the type of dance music you like in the clubs and maybe gear the bass and percussion towards that and you will be satisfied!
Steve

i liked it very much .
really takes me dance .
you are a rare tallent especially as a +18 years instructor and a mother!
a wonderfull one !

hey SJ wish everything goes fine with U .I've find this chance to take a listen to our wonderfull tallented mama music maker & got surprised !soon it'll be 1 year for U & annual rate of growth of your skill in music has been oviously wonderfullly triffic.
this one is groovy & energizer .there's a pleasurable psyco mood in this deep house track which has a bit dark ambient music flavour too , is verywelldone & U've designed a considered interval between vocal's scale & instrumental which is adorable & innovative . my thumb up & greatest respects .take care .____Behnam

Amazing, well done!!

Nice job (Y)

hey really good remix will be sending to paavo in above and beyond see what he thinks

Cool beats and nice vocals - a fresh piece of sound!

Need to post a comment in order to download... I can't stream at the moment but will post a proper review after I've had a proper listen :)

Really Nice and refreshing.

Hi SJ,
We have a good song here.
I really like the piano part.
I think you still have to figure out how to mix it perfectly with the voice, but please do not remove it: I would rather chop-out the vocal instead!
Do not touch that piano!
I simply love it.
Ciao, Domenico

you should dial down the frequency on the phaser, it's way too hissy, you know the phaser? I'm assuming you used a phaser effect device on this, any way the bass drum sounds pretty good pretty deep

SJ you just get better and better. Excellent work here!!

K;)

again it's a very good song. I agree the acustic piano is a little loud in places especially next to the vocal. And or maybe bring the vocal up a little louder in the mix??? It's all relative. But beside those tweeks it's a totally cool song. say where did you get the vocals???

Nice work!!! I like your music, keep it going.

Beautiful artwork!

MARVELLOUS

Hey this is a good one from you! remember the great DJ and remixer from the sound factory NYC ,Junior Vasquez, never listened to the original song before he remixed a tune (Check out Cher's moonlighting theme)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dEXUllZhm5w&html5=1
Steve

chill as hell, really like the vibe straight from the start

Hi SeriouslyJoking!
I like it, nice play with the vocal. The kick could use a little bit more bounce/bass! And sometimes I miss the rhythm a lil' bit. So maybe let the synths 'communicate' with percussion a bit more. Overall great job! It has a soothing feel to it, and uplifting. Cheers!

I really like your music i had to fav this. :) :) It's not even my kind of music but your voice is beautiful and the song fits it nicely.

well,,, you made a remix before hear the original song?

thats incredible!! good job! faved!