I Wanna Be Famous - Orihime

However at what price?.....I wouldn't want to be like Paris Hilton for example....Ok back to the song..first off it's very interesting..there are some things that maybe need to be addressed..some things work and some things don't (In my opinion)...the tempo of the song has a problem in two areas..one. your freestyling with your lyrics(which is cool) but when a new sample is introduced your jumping to sync with it,which makes for a stuttered delivery..two..some of the samples chop and change without allowing any reflection of what has come before...I really like the more classical piano part as it suits your voice..one way to go would maybe get your lyrics down first to a click track or something then add the music later...it's all a juggling act I know but it will help with the final arrangement...mind you in music anything goes and the creative aspect and decisions are for the artist alone...I can imagine that your music in this style would closely parallel Bjork maybe......just my two cents,anyway it's clear your musical expression is going places...that's super cool! don't ever stop..........cheers planet :)