this is truly good...very refreshing the blend and style of both the music and vocals..you mentioned the vocal didn't have much time spent on them and I personally think you should take time and if needs be get them perfect!! Great track!!

Nice track! look forward to the finished product

The vocals on this track is outstanding and so is the beat, awesome work!

Hello. Oh no - I'm so offended by that one word! Actually, I don't know which one it is. Didn't spot it so you may as well tell me what it is.

This has a cool beat. But you already know that as I'm sure you enjoyed grooving big time to it. Reminds me of Teddy Riley sort of stuff eg some of what's on MJ's excellent Dangerous album. Maybe a bit like the groove on opening track Jam. Also a little like Prince's Gett Off, which I'm fairly sure is one of hundreds (thousands?) of Funky Drummer-sampling tracks.

Good use of guitar and bass and your verse rap is really good. Has quite an old skool played musical instrument rap sound to it rather than just layering of samples. So, a lot more life to it than lots of stuff I hear.

With a cleaner sound, this sounds like something that would be quite a big hit. Overall, it's a bit too 'pop' for me but I totally appreciate it.

I also like the end where we get to hear a bit more music and sound effects. It's good to lose your vocals there...

I prefer this to your bathroom recorded track.

Normally i don't like music with adult content. Normally... but your track is really good produced and yes - i like it!

Nice, has an immortal technique feel to it. Can barely hear your voice though(gotta turn my volume up). Other than that it's awesome to listen to a female MC who has something intelligent to say.

this is hard!! love your work! good job!

Whoa nice track there Michelle.
I'm really impressed not only with your rap but with your singing as well. The combination really raises the quality and showcases your talent here. The music on this is tight, especially the drum track. Yeah there's a few spots that might warrant some further work but by all means its worth the effort.
I'm definitely keeping eyes and ears on you.

Nice smooth beat, and great song concept. Being that this is a rough mix, I will admit that my only issue with this song is that. The mix. Make sure you let me know when you have the final mix prepared and I will give this a full review. I truly do like this song. The chorus is real. Great stuff.

Felix