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23rd Jan 2014 06:05 - 11 years ago
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Description : A Electro House track here. I'm only fourteen, and I want experience, so criticize harshly. If you want any samples or anything from the track let me know. Please leave a comment if you enjoyed. I think its pretty good, so please listen, the intro is kinda long so if you get bored skip to 2:30 No loops were used.

Comments (18)

If you have time take a listen and give inklewinkle2 some feedback.

HertzFidelity
HertzFidelity 11th Jun 2015 11:46 - 9 years ago
Nice to see the work of another young artist. I'm 16 now and started using Mixcraft when I was 12 and have always wanted to make tracks like this. Amazed also at how you wrote most of your own stuff. I've never gotten such clean bass quality from the shitey virtual instruments in Mixcraft so I've been restricted to using loops to make dubstep tracks. So I was just wondering what program you use to get an understanding of how it's done, thanks. Also you should think of getting some of your tracks up on Triple J Unearthed or Soundcloud to maybe get some more publicity.
AnalogDisc
AnalogDisc 1st Feb 2015 10:58 - 10 years ago
nice! the chords progressions are crazy! that Massive drop interrupted the whole flow for me it sounds like that it`s a whole different track, but it`s cool Klass style :) and the waveform is weak sounds good but weak!
anyway keep up the good work! Cheers! :)
AZZYKO
AZZYKO 1st Jun 2014 17:52 - 10 years ago
drop is so awesome...
inklewinkle2
inklewinkle2 replied 1st Jun 2014 - 10 years ago
Thanks :D
Modnex
Modnex 7th Feb 2014 17:31 - 11 years ago
Really great track you got here. You got a great future ahead! Only 14 and already making club bangers? Can only imagine what your music will sound like ten years from now.

Keep up the great work!
Trnrbryn
Trnrbryn 31st Jan 2014 17:23 - 11 years ago
Dude! Lemme make a dirty drop for this plz! Haha. Got a great build up for a dirty drop at like 3 min in. U Did a good job on this tho. the synths r a little plain. But it all comes down to ur style. If ur happy with it then f*** every1 else. Its imposible to find a single song/artist that everyone likes.
inklewinkle2
inklewinkle2 replied 31st Jan 2014 - 11 years ago
Sure go ahead, If you want stems, private message me.
Thanks,
myakal425
myakal425 29th Jan 2014 12:22 - 11 years ago
Considering your age, You created an awesome track.
Well done. Keep it up!!!!!
johnnyproducing
johnnyproducing 28th Jan 2014 15:01 - 11 years ago
I think it sounds very nice but becomes a bit repetitive after a while, I see there has been given some other advise already so needless to post it twice. Thanks for sharing this ;)
PortraitOfABlackHole
PortraitOfABlackHole 28th Jan 2014 06:10 - 11 years ago
This is great, if you are willing to give me that saw-arp from the intro i might be able to do something new with it. tiny-b@hotmail.com
inklewinkle2
inklewinkle2 replied 28th Jan 2014 - 11 years ago
Hey thanks for listening,
What part exactly do you want?

Thanks
Tumbleweed
Tumbleweed 28th Jan 2014 02:27 - 11 years ago
well...if you are 14 (which I dont believe) I`m sure you have a great future ahead of you...I am always reluctant to offer advice on a genre that I have little experience with so I tend to just consider wheather or not I enjoyed listening....found this one a bit too repetative (but I understand that is the nature of a lot of dance genres) although you certainly did keep it rolling with the instrument changes, arps and beat drops...not sure how accurate the wav. graphic is here on the Loop & while it looks like you have it limited down to everything at the same volume I thought the dynamics were fine (synths seem to be quite forgiving that way and I`m just listening pc my pc speakers) and the mix sounded nice and clean....I`m sure you will get a lot more useful feedback that I am able to provide....keep on...and all the best...Ed
inklewinkle2
inklewinkle2 replied 28th Jan 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks for the response, and I really am 14
StaticNomad
StaticNomad 26th Jan 2014 01:52 - 11 years ago
Hi. My first thought after "This is really good" was "Is this guy really only 14?".

If so, I suspect you've either already been doing this for a few years and/or are a musician who's been playing for a while. I don't know what I would have been like if I'd had synthesizers and audio software aged 14 but I imagine not as good as this.

There's a lot of musicality and variety in this track. You remind me a little of myself in the way that you keep doing new things and introducing new elements. My tracks have more variety because of the different acoustic instruments, sounds and drumkits that are constantly being introduced. But you've managed to create a lot of variety with only a few synths.

Well done and I shall give a more specific, detailed review (plus some suggestions) another time - probably tomorrow.
aelmen
aelmen 24th Jan 2014 23:04 - 11 years ago
A clean sawtooth, good vibes, nice arrangement. Needless to say, a good one!
JJWeekz
JJWeekz 24th Jan 2014 22:35 - 11 years ago
hi! I enjoyed this, well done for the electro genre and even more surprising given your age. You have a good ear for volume levels and I was really impressed by the different elements you tucked into this, to avoid the repetition. Excited to hear more of your work!
monsterage
monsterage 24th Jan 2014 22:17 - 11 years ago
This is very good :) i think the intro is allright Great job.
DjPendule
DjPendule 24th Jan 2014 20:04 - 11 years ago
nice track want to collab with me? just check out my page and let me know on my mail adress krombos89@live.nl greetz Dj-Trigger but here on the site it wil remain Dj-Pendule hahaha havent figured out yet how to change that
larrywiggles1
larrywiggles1 24th Jan 2014 16:34 - 11 years ago
Brilliant work, start to finish with just 2 or 3 minor misses and maybe a bass line would help, but a really fantastic effort, well done.
Best wishes and lets have more,
Mark/Larry!
Orlando51
Orlando51 24th Jan 2014 16:17 - 11 years ago
Nice take from start to finish!

Orlando
zacongpow
zacongpow 23rd Jan 2014 13:38 - 11 years ago
Awesome work!
soulkettle67
soulkettle67 23rd Jan 2014 11:23 - 11 years ago
Hi,wow 14 eh? well I think that was superb..! if you want a critique I'd say that at 4.02 the flow is interrupted a little abruptly same at 6.20 but apart from that its a great track..! If you don't mind I would like to play this on air on my show tonight on www.loopradio.net Starts at 10pm GMT this week so if you'd like to listen in please do, If you have anymore tracks you would like me to play you can send them to soulkettle@loopradio.net Thanks
inklewinkle2
inklewinkle2 replied 23rd Jan 2014 - 11 years ago
Thanks for the response, and it would be fine to play my track,

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Music oriental type 128 bpm
If you made a remix send me please
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