Thank you for reviewing the record and thanks for the input. I did not intend for the outro to be that long. I didn't have the time to shorten it. I do understand that there are still mix issues, I'll get to them in due time.
Nenah is a good vocalist.So much potential on this track.You can always change one or two things to make it perfect and i know you will do it since its just a rough mix.Good one.
This song has some potential. The vocals are very good. The only thing that really got my attention was the kick. It maybe me, but it sounds as if it's a bit too strong. Nevertheless, great vocals, and nice instrumental layout.
Thank you for the comment. As far as the kick goes, I do like to make it stand out because there's nothing I hate more than that a great melody is presented and then ruined by weak drums. But thank you for your input.
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