wow! i like the melody

hey dude sounding sweet as a nut!!
could u send me the file and we can collab and I can see what I can do to it?
thanks

What you have sounds pretty good so far. Maybe try varying the patterns up a bit to make it a bit longer. Some synth or pad stabs would prob sound good over this, and a breakdown to chill things out for a bit and then drop the bass again. Keep it up man, good job! :)

Hey it's pretty cool for sure! I like the instruments you used, and it's got pretty good loudness. I think the main thing you should work is the stereo field. Many of the parts that are panned seem really one sided, I'm not sure if they are panned completely to one side or not. One thing I like to do to make things a little more stereo, is to send the panned part to a "send" and pan it a little bit in the opposite direction. You can add FX to this send, and when I do that I usually try to make the send FX wet, and turn down the fader on the send to adjust the FX mix. I hope that makes sense. This way you can adjust the volume and panning of two seperate channels for one instrument to suit your tastes. Anyway, I really like the track! Keep at it!

I don't know at all what Grime is but you made me curious, so I have just listened to "Dizzee Rascal" (I luv u)

Actually I think your track is better than his: you have good sounds, clean and powerful. Maybe you could make thing more interesting by creating a bit more "counterparts" between the deep bass and the synth line: they go really hand-in-hand for most of the track.

But of course the "determining factor" is the vocal lines that you can put on your beat.
So, all you need now is to record a nice vocal track.

Wish you all the best.
Ciao, Domenico

Hi..thanx for sharing this track.

got a old school vibe wiv the cow bell in the drums,and the claps make it flow nice too,maybe the melody needs more variation and some bass layered wiv it..but nice man keep it up