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6th Mar 2014 00:18 - 10 years ago
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Description : played,sung and composed by me .

Comments (10)

If you have time take a listen and give Tonality some feedback.

Evisma
Evisma 14th Oct 2014 04:05 - 10 years ago
I recognize the voice. Haunting as before.

Care for yourself.

Evan
crucethus
crucethus 24th May 2014 05:05 - 10 years ago
I don't care that people might feel that the guitar work is simple. Nor that the vocals are not polished. It is an expression of minimalistic sound and emotional singing that even though does not resonate in our English thinking minds (not all of you mind that) It touches all of us as musicians at what ever level we are at as an expression. and there is something too this that is compelling. It's kinda like when I listen to Midnight Oil's Bed's are Burning. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ejorQVy3m8E&html5=1
I know Peter Garrett is not the greatest singer by any stretch and parts are off key..but the way he delivers the emotional impact in a ..dare I say simple chord structure of a song..but it compels me to turn up the volume every time. The message, the emotion of the song just compels you to listen. Or Neil Young (great songwriter..not a great singer (unless harmony)) but still just compeling to listen too...Leonard Cohen, Tom Waits, Chrissy Hynde, Sioxsie Sioux.. I could go on. IMHO
Tonality
Tonality replied 24th May 2014 - 10 years ago
aww my english is not very good but i think you're saying this is not bad . right? i appreciate your time to listen and comment.thank you.
Danke
Danke 10th Mar 2014 16:55 - 10 years ago
Nice one man...fortunatelly I don't understand the words but it's got a special tone, mood...there is no problem at all with your guitar play and your voice is unique for me...not a best technically but I really don't understand too, what those professional preachers looking for here? (that Mallorca sunshine...:-)
Good track...
Danke
Tonality
Tonality replied 24th May 2014 - 10 years ago
lol! Danke my english is not very good but i think you're making laugh with me about that spanish girl very long comment!lol!i appreciate your time to listen and comment.
Orlando51
Orlando51 10th Mar 2014 16:47 - 10 years ago
To echo Ed's comment... yes it's incredibly reminiscent of Leonard Cohen in the beggining. While I don't understand the language, I must say that I surely recognize the genuine and pristine soulfulness in your interpretation and even more good news is that it stands on it's own merrit...it's really unique in that respect. It's only that maybe you should done it a bit shorter, cause it might appear a bit repetitive after some time. But i really don't understand some of the Candelaria's criticism...why to whine about amateurishness on an obviously amateurish site? It's something like walking into the hospital and saying:"Oh, what a nice hospital, but why the hell is everybody ill in here!?".

For the uniqueness and independence im giving you my "fav"!:)

Respect____Orlando
Tonality
Tonality replied 24th May 2014 - 10 years ago
wow thank you for favorite sign!
i appreciate your time to listen and comment.
Tumbleweed
Tumbleweed 10th Mar 2014 15:25 - 10 years ago
Hi Tonality....the introduction part of this one reminds me very much of a famous Canadian singer called Leonard Cohen...while I do not understand the words, you present them with feeling and the acoustic guitar is good accompaniment for this one....well done...keep doing the music...Ed
Tonality
Tonality replied 24th May 2014 - 10 years ago
wow yes i know L.Cohen !thank you Tumbleweed for that.
i appreciate your time to listen and comment.
ImproveWithError
ImproveWithError 7th Mar 2014 15:21 - 10 years ago
Interesting song, I am not real sure why a couple of people have criticized the guitar playing, not every song needs to have a fancy sound to it especially with an acoustic guitar. Keep up the songwriting.
Tonality
Tonality replied 24th May 2014 - 10 years ago
i appreciate your time to listen and comment.thank you for being kind .
Candelaria
Candelaria 6th Mar 2014 17:59 - 10 years ago
you don't sing bad , but this was a very
easy track for singing .
and you're by far in a distance with solfeggio
breathing rules for a serious singer !
but all these things apart your guirar playing is the
biggest problem !

this simple rhytmry is clearly amateurish and you seem
don't know you can change this simple 3.4 rhythm sometimes !

for me instrumentally this is very amateurish and undone

as an instrumental track , this was an meaning guitar
training -without vox i mean-.

and this simple fact changes all you've done to
an amateur work for my ear .

but your larynx has potential .
and if you learn how to breath you can be a singer in
premier league of music .

good luck.
Modnex
Modnex 6th Mar 2014 15:33 - 10 years ago
This has a chill sort of feel to it. The guitar part is very relaxing and your vocals fit well. Keep em coming.
Tonality
Tonality replied 24th May 2014 - 10 years ago
i appreciate your time to listen and comment.thank you man.
ElenaSatine
ElenaSatine 6th Mar 2014 14:37 - 10 years ago
in my eyes you sing well.
but this is a novice type of playing .
and an wrong manner of mix i think .
here have heared very very better sorts of guitar
playing and well mixed in your musics !
but still i like you singing.
Elena
Tonality
Tonality replied 24th May 2014 - 10 years ago
hehe ysauj siden faw.i appreciate your time to listen and comment Elena this beautifull girl ! hehe.
StrawHatDJ
StrawHatDJ 6th Mar 2014 13:58 - 10 years ago
I have no idea what you're saying but I still the song and the way you sing.
Tonality
Tonality replied 24th May 2014 - 10 years ago
i appreciate your time to listen and comment.

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