Summertime,Beach Waves,Sea Gulls,Rich Bass,Epic Percussion,Beach Party,Catchy and Powerful tune......
Still HUNTING for soft female vocals.If anybody can help it would be really great...!!
I think the melody's pretty catchy and powerful.
Hope y'all will love it....!!
THANKS!
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Well you asked for my analysis and suggestions on this so here they are:
The guiro is quite good fun and I don't hear it used much in electronic music.
Build up intro is good and the riff is simple but quite infectious.
0:50 good little delayed break.
Then we have the main beat, with everything sitting well and the infectious main riff continuing plus some extra percussive elements.
1:37 removal of main riff. Not quite got the transition right there. Probably should go into something bigger and better.
1:50 very nice, haunting little pad sound and the guiro is back and sounding cool.
Then you bring the main riff back and return to the sea for a conclusion.
It's well produced and I can't really fault any aspect of the production, which is a very good thing! You could play this right now as it is on a dancefloor and people would enjoy it.
But it's also definitely lacking some top level elements such as melodies and/or vocals. It doesn't sound finished and not like a full track, even though it's long enough to be a full track. But it is catchy so it would appeal to someone who likes providing vocals for this sort of style.
"can you please check this track and give me some hints about adding Guitar or vocals"
I don't know how to suggest you add guitar. Do you play guitar?
I'm sure I could play some guitar along to this though I'm not planning to.
Hope you can add the missing elements to make this a really excellent house track.
YO !
amazing track you have here ,
nice vibes and real catchy synths .
in my opinion , i miss some breaks and spacy female vocals.
but overal its a very very good track
dancable and spacy , i love that !
Yeah nice track bro.
I have to say I pretty much agree with everything DJSLTUK said. I don't think its deep house either but certainly good and well worth a bit more polish. The seagulls and ocean waves are definitely a bit too prominent and are you aware of the wave sound coming back in for a nano second there just before the stop?
Thanks for such awesome comment.Actually I was confused between the House and Deep House Genre for this song.I was waiting for the replies for it.Nice feedback,will surely work on it and improvise and finish the track....!!
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Comments are welcome tho!
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Instruments:
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Description : check out janimifsson for these vocals
learning how to do house
good vocal effects
terrible drums
couldnt find a melodic loop to fit the track
figured out the key
the harmony basically matches the melody
probably in some dorian scale or something so
have to learn about that
the drums are my weakest point
good at the start but awful after the beat drop
please comment any songs to listen to to learn drums in this style
any advice please comment
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Cheers bro!!
Cognac
The guiro is quite good fun and I don't hear it used much in electronic music.
Build up intro is good and the riff is simple but quite infectious.
0:50 good little delayed break.
Then we have the main beat, with everything sitting well and the infectious main riff continuing plus some extra percussive elements.
1:37 removal of main riff. Not quite got the transition right there. Probably should go into something bigger and better.
1:50 very nice, haunting little pad sound and the guiro is back and sounding cool.
Then you bring the main riff back and return to the sea for a conclusion.
It's well produced and I can't really fault any aspect of the production, which is a very good thing! You could play this right now as it is on a dancefloor and people would enjoy it.
But it's also definitely lacking some top level elements such as melodies and/or vocals. It doesn't sound finished and not like a full track, even though it's long enough to be a full track. But it is catchy so it would appeal to someone who likes providing vocals for this sort of style.
"can you please check this track and give me some hints about adding Guitar or vocals"
I don't know how to suggest you add guitar. Do you play guitar?
I'm sure I could play some guitar along to this though I'm not planning to.
Hope you can add the missing elements to make this a really excellent house track.
Finally - interesting-looking waveform!
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Song_structure_(popular_music)
amazing track you have here ,
nice vibes and real catchy synths .
in my opinion , i miss some breaks and spacy female vocals.
but overal its a very very good track
dancable and spacy , i love that !
greetzzz
I have to say I pretty much agree with everything DJSLTUK said. I don't think its deep house either but certainly good and well worth a bit more polish. The seagulls and ocean waves are definitely a bit too prominent and are you aware of the wave sound coming back in for a nano second there just before the stop?
Massive thanks for enjoying my track...!!
Thanks to Google Translate....!!
Love & Light
Actually I was wrong about the FUNK elements in this track.
Massive thanks for enjoying my track...!!
Tune D
Groove on this one really does feel Summer-ish.
Thanks for such awesome comment.Massive thanks for enjoying my track...
Danke
I'm working on some new synths.Gonna extend the track.A massive thanks for listening and for your comments.