I know you put this out there a long time ago, but it's still pretty sick man! And just for clarification, that is a good thing!

TALENTED INDEED!! Keep experimenting with different music man...if anything i would say make those drums more sticking ya dig...other than that...YOUR DOPE!!!

I enjoy that voice sample. Drums are kicking. Had me rolling this early in the morning. Haha

This moves like it's going somewhere, solid mix with lots of flavour...
You could have someone spitting some logic...Lyrically to meet the depth
and swagger of the track..Can't be no stupid stuff...
Also a guitar with style and simple lines...other then that the tracks talkin
smack.. :-)

Outstandingly done...

Peace...TG.

This Is Tight Ronabo After You Put The Finishing Touches On It I Would Like To Feature On It. Or Do A Song To It.

Tight track Ronabo! I can't believe this is your first time. This is Hip-Hop for sure. I really like when track breaks in at the 1:15 point. What I would do personal is add a little more thump / bass to the kick and some crispness / reverb to the snare. Just my two cents but I also usually make old school Hip-Hop beats. I really like what you have so far. Nice work.

I think the mix is what would make this track sound more hip-hop.The track is great, and hip-hop comes in all flavors, but if you are going for that traditional hip-hop sound..I think building the mix around the kick would be a good start for this track.

I have one advice for you. If you don't over-compress your music, then it will not be as loud as other tracks, but the dynamic range will be greater(sounds better). My latest track is not over-compressed so it has more dynamic range: http://turnmeup.org/

This is a good one,not bad for the first attempt.You got good synths there.Good one Ronabo.

You made a good track there! It is different than other Hip Hop beats. Different is good, because it makes you unique. Why make music sound like anybody else. Non of us look are are the same, why should our music not reflect our uniqueness?

I didn't notice anything that was not working.

Man... Those synths pulled me in from the start!!! I can't overstate how much I love the synths here! Very easy to follow along with. Even the way you transitioned was very strong. I'd love to have this on my gym playlist. looking forward to see what else you do with it. Hell, this would even make a solid stand alone interlude.

Great work,

Cognac
Cognac

WOW this is great...!!!
Flow is good as a Hip-Hop song would be.I mean you have maintained the Hip-Hop/Rap structure here...!!

Really loved those beats.Well programmed.I think you can lower the claps a bit and can add some Reverb to beats.

Those piano variations are addictive and cool.Gives a real feel of Pop/Hip-Hop.

Bass-line is really good.You can tweak it a little bit.I think its sounding more like a Dance or House bass(i think its only for me....don't change those keys,pitch and all....Just tweak it a little bit)

Song is really perfect.You can extend it by 1 Minute..!!
Awesomely produced....!!