I like the vocal sound. I think with a little creative editing and nudging the vocal tracks could be really unique. I don't really need to know the lyric precisely bc the vocals are acting as a synth in the mix to my ears. The backing track is a little weak imo bc there is no blatant musical hook to tie vocals with and very little punch in the track mix... But it's all pretty interesting musically. I think you should keep editing. "final edit" -lol, as if we know when to quit. :)

This track has basicaly quite some potential... but if I'm completely honest I think that those double vocals do not work well...I don't know why, but my ears tell me so..:)
But as a musical concept and idea is not bad by any means..on the contrary...it's pretty interesting and inventive...

All the best____Orlando

Hi. Instrumental super, voice for me not good.