Description : when she was laughing in facT ....composed @ nov 2012 ...,the first & last time I played mandolin in a trial of mine .
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hi,
nice cinematic music. Really well done with the strings and piano. I like your mandolin playing - it's very nice merged into this composition along the violin section. I would like to hear a bit more of the introduction: you start with slow strings but you could extend the beginning for sure. And add maybe some nice ending or just fade it out so you could have a 3-4 min.
Quite short track but really nice and pleasant to listen and enjoy.
A.
This was very well produced. Indeed very soothing and easy to listen to. The beat is very unique which perfectly goes with the soundtrack. Beautiful work, my friend.
Hello Chris , dear . many thnx for attention & the kind words. just my friend as U can see in description this trial was composed @nov 2012 & I'm not making music anymore ..
best wishes.___Behnam
Dear Behnam
This adorable music reminds me of the poem "Your laughter" by Pablo Neruda.
I read it again and again while listening to your music and remembered all laughters which I miss very much now miles away from all my loved ones.
Thanks dear Behnam for the moments your music created and appreciate sharing.
Bests
Mina
Take bread away from me, if you wish,
take air away, but
do not take from me your laughter.
Do not take away the rose,
the lance flower that you pluck,
the water that suddenly
bursts forth in joy,
the sudden wave
of silver born in you.
My struggle is harsh and I come back
with eyes tired
at times from having seen
the unchanging earth,
but when your laughter enters
it rises to the sky seeking me
and it opens for me all
the doors of life.
My love, in the darkest
hour your laughter
opens, and if suddenly
you see my blood staining
the stones of the street,
laugh, because your laughter
will be for my hands
like a fresh sword.
.
.
.
deny me bread, air,
light, spring,
but never your laughter
for I would die.
merci Mina for attention & nice shared feedback with me & us.
mamnunam az keifiate commenthaye mokhtalefe to va arezuhaye khub dara m baraye har2ye shoma 2ta. movazebe ham bashid .
mamnun again .___
Well...this just brings out all the feels...this is a beautiful track. The music speaks for itself. You really know how to bring unique sounds together I think. I love it, truly.
my appology for late reply ms Stevens & many thnx for attention , listening & the time to share your point of view as a comment with me & us . i'm gratefull. best wishes.___B
What a soothing and gentle track here brother Behnam!
I sense a lot of sentiments with this track. She must have been a very special person! :)
The percussion drums was a good choice as it is not overbearing. The piano itself reflects a special moment in time. The mandolin places you into that moment in time. And the strings in the background holds everything together. And looking back, it is a beautiful memory captured in sound. A soothing track to the soul. Well done. - Billy
Hello Billy , and first appology for my absence & late reply.
many thnx for attention , & time to share your idea as comment with me & us .
the phrase of '' beautifull memory captured in sound '' in your comment is remarkable , memorable & what I'll remember that from U , even beyond looperman . .
a friendly smile & appreciations again.
best wishes.___B
Yea the guitar is very impressive! Everything sits together so naturally, really love the pace of this as well. A very smooth moody production deciBel. No real complaints. peace
many thnx Gramo/Neo for attention & time to share your idea as commenT . that is Mandolin and this track has been the first time ever I had used mandolin in a trial of mine despite as U may know I'm a guitarist & not a mandolin player.any way no matter what is the name of instruments , I'm gratefull & appreciate your feedback.___Behnam
without demur this is an incredible and intelligence music !
what happens around 1:40 is a very very smart way for showing the laugh moments !!
congrats .
Hello Behnam, This trial I believe still is incomplete, not for its abrupt ending but, for it's moment in holding onto the previous thought. I hear the instruments wanted to say something more. I like the sounds you chose to explain the image of how that time seemed like. This is some natural deep thought. The piano allows me to make it personal to a time where she was laughing too but, not there anymore. A respective story. Must continue the ending sentence, will be interesting to hear. Thank you for sharing, is enjoyed and appreciated style from you. Hope things are clearer now. Peace.
Hello DesignedImpression and many thnx for the attention , listening & sharing your critical idea .
I underestand U & I think U'll underestand me to say I prefer people listen my trials 2 times , instead of making a longer version of them .but U've truely felt about instruments cause this is an extracted part of a longer version of this trial which I can send U in email if U're minded cause knowing your idea about that version too will be interesting for me and maybe that's why U've truely felt instruments wanting to say somethings more .
anyway designedImpression , your point of view is worthy of considering for me ,generally too everyone's idea is respectable for me .
and any how , now , U think what can make this better ?
which line , which instrument ( U think ) should be improved & expanded to make the listeners don't feel this is incomplete ? ....looking forward to read your reply & also according to your critical idea U're the only one who can feel free to want to collaborate about this track for any longer version .many thnx again & all the best.___B
Thank you for your response, and please don't be offended by my review. As usual, I read through all the reviews before I write mine, and I got the impression from your responses that this was still the "prototype version." The only thing about the recording that led me to believe this was the final moment, it is very sudden and abrupt. I am getting the feeling that this was completely intentional, and so I apologize for making an assumption. It's an absolutely beautiful piece, and I'm glad that I came back to listen again this morning. Getting concerned about you my friend within all the turmoil in the world, and I'm happy that we are still connected in some way.
I'm seriously gratefull of your second presence Patrick & please excuse me for a bit latency in responce for the reasons U know .
well according to knowing U , I'm sure U're not someone who cenosors his idea to make the others glad and I'm sure U're such a good friend of mine who'll help me learn more by sharing his positive or negative idea with me ..
...U can underestand me to say , knowing any type of feedback from such a virtuoso musician like U will be so great & absolutely respected worth of considering & appreciated by me..
anyway if U really think this is good enough , I should be glad and I'm seriously gratefull of your attention and shared idea & also especially your time for listening this trial of mine for 2 times & writing 2 times about it.
my friend , no matter when I leave looperman , we(U & me ) will be connected in any type of future & I'll be your friend & hope someday we ( all ) will meet eachother ..
smile & my best wishes for U & your dears all .__Behnam
You've done it again my friend, created something precious, and brightened my life in a big way! This gives me images of a travelling bard, going places, and changing lives. I realize this isn't the version you meant to upload, but I love it! You performed all parts with feeling and expression, and they all work together to create life. It's very good to see that you are still around here with us. I am happy to know you.
happiness belongs to me for knowing U my friend & Pat generally I should confess I've been lucky abouT my looperman communications what teached to this isolated grown man so much..regarding this track I'm gratefull of your attention & time , shared review & all your supportive words .
just no Patrick my friend , this is it the same version that I had wanted to upload ...I'm back from mission & U've listened the last seq of that folder of this project in which ending part has not that issues ...
buT your honest words makes me know this hasn't convinced your mind to be recognized as a completed and done track ...
despite I think U've not listened track till the end too...
and so I'm sorry if this hasn'T convinced U as a completed & done trial of mine , and my exclusive appreciation for sharing honest feedback & critical point of view Pat...
would be great to know what do U think We should change in it to can gain to a better output in the end ... ?
anyway thnx & thnx & take care buddy.___B
to o ahange asheghaneh !
ajab jaleb asan tavagho nadashtam .ey kalak pas she ee ham boodeh dasteto roo nemikardi pishe ma hamishe tanha tanha invar oonvar boodi .
diako in ahanget kheili zibast .to albate az oonaee kholgho khoot mikhore shoharo pedare khoobi bashi vali be hich vajh fekr nemikardam to ahange asheghaneh injooriam dashteh bashi adame bi ehsas . voooy joone Arsalane man ghor nazan chera farsi minevisam intouri man rahat taram .
be ghole khodet arezoohaye khoob.
:)
mamnoon az inke 100 bar azat khaste am ke inja mano Behnam seda koni va inghadr roayat mikoni .
hamintor merci ke inhame motevajjeh mishi migam be farsi ,turki , kurdi , lori , english ya hich zabune digei inja
dar morede masaele private zendegie adam harf nazan .
& in the end man ghadrdani mikonam az to , az amme Shahinam va az in commente technichal va kamelan herfei !
arezuhaye khoobe bi hosele..va ehteram .
it's nice how you transition into the mandolin solo. don't hear a solo like that very often. it should not be the last time you put mandolin in a track! regards. Dan
hey what's up Dan ? nice to meet U after awhile ..
many thnx Dan for attention & kind feedback about my mandolin playing .(ps:Dan I got your message, okay,soon I'll write a short autobiographic presentation for there ..just let me back home from mission...& many many thnx)___B
This track has a really nice live vibe to it. The mandolin is great and i dig the percussion. I like the way you did the pitch shift before bringing the piano back in. The violins are nice but i have to say it ended quite abruptly, so perhaps it would benefit from a fade rather than just stopping dead as it does.
All the same i enjoyed this track Behnam and i will for sure be back for more.
FR
Many many thnx FR for attention & shared idea .
and an exclusive appreciations for true & valuable criticism about ending ! yes , wacky me,haha have uploaded a wrong seq of the folder of this project ,a prototype version in which I hadn't designed ending part(version before the last seq)...! & now while reading your true comment , I'm in mission according to the job(mining engineer) & have no access to no track & no software even to correct this !haha!shame on my wacky mind but no problem this mistake made a cool memory about uploading this trial for me in my mind & I enjoyed!...anyway great appreciations FR for carefull listening & true point about this undone ending...
___Behnam
Marko (oh!wacky me!)nice to see your comment,yesterday around the same time I was listening ''land of legonds'' your wonderfull track & U were in my mind & now I see U've commented at the same time for this trial of mine..
Many many thnx buddy for presence,attention & shared idea .
and an exclusive appreciations for attention & true & valuable criticism about ending ! yes , wacky me,the one who mistakes about friend's names too as U know ,has uploaded a wrong seq of the folder of this project,a prototype version in which I hadn't designed ending part(version before the last seq)...! & now while reading your comment , as usual I'm in mission & have no access to no track & no software even to correct this !haha!shame !
anyway many thnx for attention & good point U've mentioned about ending man.best wishes.___B
What shall I say. I am smiling from ear to ear actually really starting to laugh. You always seem to find a way to amaze me. Your musical talent has no end. I wish it was for download hmm? You play mandolin as if you were happy at the time. It shows through your playing. I have noticed in your music you are very good at letting the listener feel the emotion you are expressing at that time. If you are able to grab the attention of your listeners and make them feel your laughter, sadness, anger, frustration, pain, love etc. then you are one very amazing composer/musician.
many many thnx my Brandy for attention & the kind words.
....BrandY but to be honest & even if I believe your generous words about being an amazing musician , I should confess,whished I was amazing about something else ...
wished I was an amazing father instead ....
anyway kiss kiss BrandY for all your warm feedbaX ...take care ,bests.__B
Hi Benham! I think your mandolin playing was great. The strumming parts are nice. The picking was also excellent, especially the transition part with the effects around 1:40. I am surprised more people don't play one here on the loop,
I found it to be an easy instrument to play. I am not very good at playing it. What's that saying, "fake it till you make it"? hehe. I just found my book of mandolin chords. I only play the mando when I record, I hardly ever practice it.
Your mandolin sound cleanly played and in just the right places, it is such a beautiful sounding instrument. Keep playing my friend!
Wayne many many thnx for attention,the kind words & all the encouragements. ....uuummm yes as U've mentioned there're not many mandolin players.particullary I think mandolin has a very nice sound & special character as a strumming instrument, buT I think the reason why we often don't find many mandolin players are its weak points about expressing suspended atmosphers,subjective impressions , & the lack of a strenght Bass sound which makes it to be usefull for some special & usually romantic concepts, it also needs a mentality with minor & melodic tendency for playing.
ofcourse these are my personal point of view & criticisms about mandolin & I don't know much about it .
for sure your probable reply can include some instructive points about mandolin ...& of course noone can't ignore its unique & beautY sound in its suitable place ...
anyway personally I enjoyed my first & last mandolin playing & your warm feedback made that exprience of mine including more pleasure...appreciations Wayne for patiency & presence & valuable shared idea.best wishes man.___B
anubis many thnx for the attention & shared feedback about this trial . and a great & special appreciation to your underestanding & respecT to my last replY my friend.
Anubis U may see there ain't be many persons whom I please them to call my persian name when they know that & please remember this was because I knew your worth preception will underestand my reasons,& if I please U about that in my last replY .many many thnx ,highesT respects & all the best.___Behnam
Behnam you really wrote an amazing track here. I was liking what I was hearing and then the mandolin came in and it was brilliant. Such difference in instruments that felt completely natural together. Really nice job on this.
I think this may be my favorite of yours. I LOVE the mandolin! You should use it more. It ends a little abruptly, though. Maybe a fade out would be better.
Hi Scott , Nice to know your point of view & I'm gratefull of your attention & feedback.
regarding ending , oOoPS !
I don't know I should say this is bad or this is what buT what a good that at last someone has motioned this matter !
yes Scott haha wacky me had uploaded prototype version buT not the last sequenT & the last result of the projecT of that folder in my computer !!
smile ! many thnx for usefull point man !
I seriouslY appreciate your attention & usefull shared feedback. best wishes.___B
by pushing virtual button of record ,which is usualy the red button & doesn'T need to even a bit of knowing about that software or program !
Cindy !!?
wonderS !
:)
hi Behnam ,mister:)
what a beautifull world !
so she laughs nicely as it sounds ...
oh i'm in looooooove with that Behnamian special technic when mandolin turns to draw laughter !
...
you're very clever about drawing with instruments !
i litened it 2 times and still it's not enough for me..
(ps:Behnam i tried to write a private message for you but you haven't allowed ...i need to have your mail if possible because of my father wants to talk with player of no to child labour ...the old guitar player is in love with that track ...)
thank you for underestanding me and confidence.
Elena :)
Elena many thnx for attention & the words.
well I don't underestand your ps , buT due to greatest respects for your father I wrote my email address for U.
many thnx for sharing that track with your father.best wishes.__Behnam
many thnx for attention & shared idea tv.
it's nice to know this from U & I wonder cause I didn't guess a prof driver may has such point of view about such styles of music !..
I've not had this chance to share my idea about your tunes as a written commenT in your page , buT the piece U'd worked after that Bitter exprience -entitled : ashes to ashes-was so impressive & sensible composed based on a deep & subjective sensation.appreciations & the best wishes.___Behnam.
Behnam, another absolutely beautiful track. Your mandolin playing is just fine, believe me. You have nothing to worry about.
Such a wonderful combination of musical instruments and influences, all seamlessly combined to make a wonderful few moments. I'm on my 4th listen and I think I'll just hit play a few more times before I head off to do something today.
Thank you for sharing your gifts with us. You are the best. I hope all is well.
obviously nobody hasnothing to be worry abouT sharing his/her traX with the others,I thinK !...Bear , I wonder to read your point of view in the first sentence in your replY ..!
many thnx for sharing your kind heart & generous words.
appreciations & the best wishes.___B
Hey Benham, so good to see you post another track even if it is an older one. I need my fix now and then.
Always love hearing the mandolin in any kind of music. Nice effect/transition around 1:45. The song has a bit of a somber, tranquil, lucent feel but at the same time there is an uplifting feel to the track.
Thanks for sharing this with us, it is always a gift you present to us!
hey if U take a look to my reply to Ed I was telling him that U're needed to share your point of view about my mandolin playing Wayne ..nice to have U here ...Wayne I think I played mandolin a bit forte (extra forte in fact )and all forte...but it's good if it hasn't sound badly & your warm & valuable feedback makes me think so ....an exclusive appreciation from the best mandolin player i know for attention & feedback & as usual my best wishes.____B
ow what a great gift !
besiar arzeshmand va mesle yek khatereye khub az in sarosedaye khodam baram be yad mundani khahad bud hozur va yadegarie zibaye shoma. aghaye Sabri agarche islame aziz dardesh migire filtershekan az koja migiri youtube ro mibini agha ! the rest in mail & aghaye Sabri man dige chon ba shoma dustam az in loopermanian taarofat ro bi khial mishamo midunam shoma
mano mifahmi ....labkhando areuhaye khubo merci dobare.___db
salam behname aziz, kheili vaghte azatan khabari nadashtam amadam inja va didam hanuz active hastid va khoshhal shodam.
in akharin musik ra goosh dadam va be delam ajib neshast...
Bravo dooste khubam, khoshhalam ke ensane aashegh o sheidaii mesle shoma ra mishenassam, hamishe aashegh beman behnam jan!
doostdare shoma Sabri
:)
Hi my very good persian friend & many thnx for all your kindness. ye chetorie dige inja va sepase ziad az tavajjoh va hozuret.aghaye Sabri omidvaram emaile mano ba attachement hash gerefte bashid va mesle hamishe man arezuhaye khub daram baraye shoma , baraye tah zamine madari va baraye este'dadhash...merci again ,labkhand.___B
thnx sir! it's nice to know your musical point of view regarding such genres & musical styles , & I'm gratefull of your attention & feedback my good friend Paulo Janela .many thnx buddy & take care.___B
"Music inebriates and settles the dancer while inquiring people only see him move. They laugh at that puppet who bustles about without a reason, for they don't comprehend music". Alexandre Dumas, "Queen Margot".
I like this quotation, and chose it to illustrate how much your music speaks to me, deary.
'Was really moved by this track and that unique way you have to depict human feelings through the prism of music.
Merci Behnam for this tender and evocative moment.
Do take care,
Kisses.
your poetical immaginations,cathexis & mental consentration about finding very nice words & suitable quotation is always wonderfull & unforgetable as your sign in my mind my dear Carole & I appreciate U & your comprehension & explanation.
kiss kiss & many thnx for attention,listening & the beautifull words.___B
nice to know this from U buddy & many thnx for attention & shared idea ....singers ....uummm Bjark U know ? I won't allow singers even think to sing to neither of my romantic trials .
if i's supposed to be sung , so its singer has one name & it's Diako Behnam Zandi..its selfish composer ! smile & wink + appreciations again. bests.___B
Very emotional track you got here. I love the guitar you used in just how much memories it brought to me when I listened to this. Thank you for the journey deciBle!
Mandolin it is not guitar but many thnx for attention & feedback & a huge appreciation to your comprehension for underestanding my subjective journeys in memories .
your comment is one of most beautifull comments below this trial for me & I'm gratefull .best wishes.___Behnam
nice to hear this from U TCAS , many thnx for attention,listening & sharing your valuable comprehension with me & us as commenT man..appreciation & best wishes.___Behnam
What a catchy one Behnam...that piano melody is when she was laughing?...
The mandolin is the peak of the song surely...this is short but essential...nice and dreamy...feelgood journey in your lost but hopeful world?
Was a great experience and a musical 'surrealismo'
nice to hear from U man ..but haha man wonder to see U've taken piano as laughing explanation !
and I also wonder to know my world is lost !!(how?where?when?) as U've informed me in your sentence...!
but anyway many thnx for sharing your surreal comprehension with me & us about this expressionistic trial of mine ..hope everything goes fine with U too my cool friend___B
Behnam...I am having a great day here this Saturday...what a wonderful happy sounding music composition...strings and piano are great company for one another and you have taken a very controlled, subtle approach to the melody parts (is that a mandolin you are using?)...this is a fav for me Behnam...thank you...she stopped laughing very suddenly at the end.....well done my friend.....Ed
many thnx Ed for attention & such a warm feedback .
yes that was the first & last time I was playing mandolin in a trial & i think I've played it a bit extra forte (Wayne is needed to share his idea about my mandolin playing) .and haha cool explanation U've mentioned I've designed that mandolin as her laughing symbole & that saddenly stop is due to as the name shows I'm reminding & reviewing in my mind the way she laughs & when she was laughing the world was stopping for me for a while ( smile !)..& also that was the way to back to main theme's tonality after imperceptible altration which happens by bent notes of mandolin to paint laughing ...master i should have an exclussive appreciation from U about this one cause your warm feedback in acidplanet about this made me to think this is suitable for upload here in my only active page in internet . many many thnx & all the bests.___B
Cool track deciBel! I really like the atmosphere this creates. The guitar was a real nice touch. It for sure has a cinematic vibe to it. The mix sounds pretty good too. Nice work.
nice to hear from U Shanter , and many thnx for attention & listening & usefull comment , particullary i had some doubts if i should categorize it as cinematic or noT ,now your feedback makes me think it's in right category . also this was the first time I was playing mandolin (not guitar is that)in a track & i'm glad if it sounds good & my first & last mandolin
playing worx ...appreciation again + best wishes.___Behnam
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nice cinematic music. Really well done with the strings and piano. I like your mandolin playing - it's very nice merged into this composition along the violin section. I would like to hear a bit more of the introduction: you start with slow strings but you could extend the beginning for sure. And add maybe some nice ending or just fade it out so you could have a 3-4 min.
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This is a real nice piece of music!
beautiful feel good music,that gives me feelings of warm sun and calm sea's.!
It a very very nice chilled piece of music!
Beautiful strings,beats n guitar.!
Great to know your still making music is such worrying times.!
kind regards dear behnam!
***chris***
best wishes.___Behnam
This adorable music reminds me of the poem "Your laughter" by Pablo Neruda.
I read it again and again while listening to your music and remembered all laughters which I miss very much now miles away from all my loved ones.
Thanks dear Behnam for the moments your music created and appreciate sharing.
Bests
Mina
Take bread away from me, if you wish,
take air away, but
do not take from me your laughter.
Do not take away the rose,
the lance flower that you pluck,
the water that suddenly
bursts forth in joy,
the sudden wave
of silver born in you.
My struggle is harsh and I come back
with eyes tired
at times from having seen
the unchanging earth,
but when your laughter enters
it rises to the sky seeking me
and it opens for me all
the doors of life.
My love, in the darkest
hour your laughter
opens, and if suddenly
you see my blood staining
the stones of the street,
laugh, because your laughter
will be for my hands
like a fresh sword.
.
.
.
deny me bread, air,
light, spring,
but never your laughter
for I would die.
mamnunam az keifiate commenthaye mokhtalefe to va arezuhaye khub dara m baraye har2ye shoma 2ta. movazebe ham bashid .
mamnun again .___
Good track and nice playing. I enjoyed it.
Keep up the music man; it helps you escape.
Mark.
take care man.merci again.___B
I sense a lot of sentiments with this track. She must have been a very special person! :)
The percussion drums was a good choice as it is not overbearing. The piano itself reflects a special moment in time. The mandolin places you into that moment in time. And the strings in the background holds everything together. And looking back, it is a beautiful memory captured in sound. A soothing track to the soul. Well done. - Billy
many thnx for attention , & time to share your idea as comment with me & us .
the phrase of '' beautifull memory captured in sound '' in your comment is remarkable , memorable & what I'll remember that from U , even beyond looperman . .
a friendly smile & appreciations again.
best wishes.___B
Gramo/Neo
what happens around 1:40 is a very very smart way for showing the laugh moments !!
congrats .
I underestand U & I think U'll underestand me to say I prefer people listen my trials 2 times , instead of making a longer version of them .but U've truely felt about instruments cause this is an extracted part of a longer version of this trial which I can send U in email if U're minded cause knowing your idea about that version too will be interesting for me and maybe that's why U've truely felt instruments wanting to say somethings more .
anyway designedImpression , your point of view is worthy of considering for me ,generally too everyone's idea is respectable for me .
and any how , now , U think what can make this better ?
which line , which instrument ( U think ) should be improved & expanded to make the listeners don't feel this is incomplete ? ....looking forward to read your reply & also according to your critical idea U're the only one who can feel free to want to collaborate about this track for any longer version .many thnx again & all the best.___B
well according to knowing U , I'm sure U're not someone who cenosors his idea to make the others glad and I'm sure U're such a good friend of mine who'll help me learn more by sharing his positive or negative idea with me ..
...U can underestand me to say , knowing any type of feedback from such a virtuoso musician like U will be so great & absolutely respected worth of considering & appreciated by me..
anyway if U really think this is good enough , I should be glad and I'm seriously gratefull of your attention and shared idea & also especially your time for listening this trial of mine for 2 times & writing 2 times about it.
my friend , no matter when I leave looperman , we(U & me ) will be connected in any type of future & I'll be your friend & hope someday we ( all ) will meet eachother ..
smile & my best wishes for U & your dears all .__Behnam
just no Patrick my friend , this is it the same version that I had wanted to upload ...I'm back from mission & U've listened the last seq of that folder of this project in which ending part has not that issues ...
buT your honest words makes me know this hasn't convinced your mind to be recognized as a completed and done track ...
despite I think U've not listened track till the end too...
and so I'm sorry if this hasn'T convinced U as a completed & done trial of mine , and my exclusive appreciation for sharing honest feedback & critical point of view Pat...
would be great to know what do U think We should change in it to can gain to a better output in the end ... ?
anyway thnx & thnx & take care buddy.___B
ajab jaleb asan tavagho nadashtam .ey kalak pas she ee ham boodeh dasteto roo nemikardi pishe ma hamishe tanha tanha invar oonvar boodi .
diako in ahanget kheili zibast .to albate az oonaee kholgho khoot mikhore shoharo pedare khoobi bashi vali be hich vajh fekr nemikardam to ahange asheghaneh injooriam dashteh bashi adame bi ehsas . voooy joone Arsalane man ghor nazan chera farsi minevisam intouri man rahat taram .
be ghole khodet arezoohaye khoob.
:)
hamintor merci ke inhame motevajjeh mishi migam be farsi ,turki , kurdi , lori , english ya hich zabune digei inja
dar morede masaele private zendegie adam harf nazan .
& in the end man ghadrdani mikonam az to , az amme Shahinam va az in commente technichal va kamelan herfei !
arezuhaye khoobe bi hosele..va ehteram .
many thnx Dan for attention & kind feedback about my mandolin playing .(ps:Dan I got your message, okay,soon I'll write a short autobiographic presentation for there ..just let me back home from mission...& many many thnx)___B
All the same i enjoyed this track Behnam and i will for sure be back for more.
FR
and an exclusive appreciations for true & valuable criticism about ending ! yes , wacky me,haha have uploaded a wrong seq of the folder of this project ,a prototype version in which I hadn't designed ending part(version before the last seq)...! & now while reading your true comment , I'm in mission according to the job(mining engineer) & have no access to no track & no software even to correct this !haha!shame on my wacky mind but no problem this mistake made a cool memory about uploading this trial for me in my mind & I enjoyed!...anyway great appreciations FR for carefull listening & true point about this undone ending...
___Behnam
Many many thnx buddy for presence,attention & shared idea .
and an exclusive appreciations for attention & true & valuable criticism about ending ! yes , wacky me,the one who mistakes about friend's names too as U know ,has uploaded a wrong seq of the folder of this project,a prototype version in which I hadn't designed ending part(version before the last seq)...! & now while reading your comment , as usual I'm in mission & have no access to no track & no software even to correct this !haha!shame !
anyway many thnx for attention & good point U've mentioned about ending man.best wishes.___B
Thank you for the big smile,
Brandon Michelle
....BrandY but to be honest & even if I believe your generous words about being an amazing musician , I should confess,whished I was amazing about something else ...
wished I was an amazing father instead ....
anyway kiss kiss BrandY for all your warm feedbaX ...take care ,bests.__B
I found it to be an easy instrument to play. I am not very good at playing it. What's that saying, "fake it till you make it"? hehe. I just found my book of mandolin chords. I only play the mando when I record, I hardly ever practice it.
Your mandolin sound cleanly played and in just the right places, it is such a beautiful sounding instrument. Keep playing my friend!
Wayne
ofcourse these are my personal point of view & criticisms about mandolin & I don't know much about it .
for sure your probable reply can include some instructive points about mandolin ...& of course noone can't ignore its unique & beautY sound in its suitable place ...
anyway personally I enjoyed my first & last mandolin playing & your warm feedback made that exprience of mine including more pleasure...appreciations Wayne for patiency & presence & valuable shared idea.best wishes man.___B
I love this.....
brightly...
All respect Behnam
Anubis.
Anubis U may see there ain't be many persons whom I please them to call my persian name when they know that & please remember this was because I knew your worth preception will underestand my reasons,& if I please U about that in my last replY .many many thnx ,highesT respects & all the best.___Behnam
Kyle
I think this may be my favorite of yours. I LOVE the mandolin! You should use it more. It ends a little abruptly, though. Maybe a fade out would be better.
Cheers,
Scott
regarding ending , oOoPS !
I don't know I should say this is bad or this is what buT what a good that at last someone has motioned this matter !
yes Scott haha wacky me had uploaded prototype version buT not the last sequenT & the last result of the projecT of that folder in my computer !!
smile ! many thnx for usefull point man !
I seriouslY appreciate your attention & usefull shared feedback. best wishes.___B
Cindy !!?
wonderS !
hi Behnam ,mister:)
what a beautifull world !
so she laughs nicely as it sounds ...
oh i'm in looooooove with that Behnamian special technic when mandolin turns to draw laughter !
...
you're very clever about drawing with instruments !
i litened it 2 times and still it's not enough for me..
(ps:Behnam i tried to write a private message for you but you haven't allowed ...i need to have your mail if possible because of my father wants to talk with player of no to child labour ...the old guitar player is in love with that track ...)
thank you for underestanding me and confidence.
Elena :)
well I don't underestand your ps , buT due to greatest respects for your father I wrote my email address for U.
many thnx for sharing that track with your father.best wishes.__Behnam
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it's nice to know this from U & I wonder cause I didn't guess a prof driver may has such point of view about such styles of music !..
I've not had this chance to share my idea about your tunes as a written commenT in your page , buT the piece U'd worked after that Bitter exprience -entitled : ashes to ashes-was so impressive & sensible composed based on a deep & subjective sensation.appreciations & the best wishes.___Behnam.
Solid piece of work...
Peace...TG
appreciations & the best wishes.___Behnam
Such a wonderful combination of musical instruments and influences, all seamlessly combined to make a wonderful few moments. I'm on my 4th listen and I think I'll just hit play a few more times before I head off to do something today.
Thank you for sharing your gifts with us. You are the best. I hope all is well.
Bear
many thnx for sharing your kind heart & generous words.
appreciations & the best wishes.___B
Always love hearing the mandolin in any kind of music. Nice effect/transition around 1:45. The song has a bit of a somber, tranquil, lucent feel but at the same time there is an uplifting feel to the track.
Thanks for sharing this with us, it is always a gift you present to us!
Wayne
Avaye koli asare composer Pablo de Sarasate:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rS5wtEhIUlg
besiar arzeshmand va mesle yek khatereye khub az in sarosedaye khodam baram be yad mundani khahad bud hozur va yadegarie zibaye shoma. aghaye Sabri agarche islame aziz dardesh migire filtershekan az koja migiri youtube ro mibini agha ! the rest in mail & aghaye Sabri man dige chon ba shoma dustam az in loopermanian taarofat ro bi khial mishamo midunam shoma
mano mifahmi ....labkhando areuhaye khubo merci dobare.___db
in akharin musik ra goosh dadam va be delam ajib neshast...
Bravo dooste khubam, khoshhalam ke ensane aashegh o sheidaii mesle shoma ra mishenassam, hamishe aashegh beman behnam jan!
doostdare shoma Sabri
Hi my very good persian friend & many thnx for all your kindness. ye chetorie dige inja va sepase ziad az tavajjoh va hozuret.aghaye Sabri omidvaram emaile mano ba attachement hash gerefte bashid va mesle hamishe man arezuhaye khub daram baraye shoma , baraye tah zamine madari va baraye este'dadhash...merci again ,labkhand.___B
Thanks\Steve
Great atmosphere.
Nice work!
your friend
Paulo
I like this quotation, and chose it to illustrate how much your music speaks to me, deary.
'Was really moved by this track and that unique way you have to depict human feelings through the prism of music.
Merci Behnam for this tender and evocative moment.
Do take care,
Kisses.
kiss kiss & many thnx for attention,listening & the beautifull words.___B
That is really really good! I especially love the drums and the mandolin.
When I listened to the track I could hear a song unstop of it. What if you ask some of our singers to sing to it?
if i's supposed to be sung , so its singer has one name & it's Diako Behnam Zandi..its selfish composer ! smile & wink + appreciations again. bests.___B
Brilliant Behnam
your comment is one of most beautifull comments below this trial for me & I'm gratefull .best wishes.___Behnam
Nice atmosphere
The mandolin is the peak of the song surely...this is short but essential...nice and dreamy...feelgood journey in your lost but hopeful world?
Was a great experience and a musical 'surrealismo'
Greet you budy, hope all is well...
Danke
and I also wonder to know my world is lost !!(how?where?when?) as U've informed me in your sentence...!
but anyway many thnx for sharing your surreal comprehension with me & us about this expressionistic trial of mine ..hope everything goes fine with U too my cool friend___B
yes that was the first & last time I was playing mandolin in a trial & i think I've played it a bit extra forte (Wayne is needed to share his idea about my mandolin playing) .and haha cool explanation U've mentioned I've designed that mandolin as her laughing symbole & that saddenly stop is due to as the name shows I'm reminding & reviewing in my mind the way she laughs & when she was laughing the world was stopping for me for a while ( smile !)..& also that was the way to back to main theme's tonality after imperceptible altration which happens by bent notes of mandolin to paint laughing ...master i should have an exclussive appreciation from U about this one cause your warm feedback in acidplanet about this made me to think this is suitable for upload here in my only active page in internet . many many thnx & all the bests.___B
playing worx ...appreciation again + best wishes.___Behnam