Description : Hello hello. I kind of took a detour and made this one loop wonder. I found this loop today by theHumps and I really liked it. I didn't add anything else to it. Just vocal layers and the lyrics, but welcome anyone who to add anything. As usual I don't have a problem with that. I hope you like it, thank you!
Here is the loop link. https://www.looperman.com/loops/detail/52418
Really great performance on the singing, the vocal layering is sweet and I dig the lyrics! I love singer songwriter stuff, a guitar and singer is so honest and exposing to a degree. Great job, glad I could contribute in a small way to this wonderful track.
Hey! Thanks for listening, yeah your loop here in itself is super, when I heard it, I pretty much fell in love with it, so thank you because you contributed in a big way ha. :)
-Charlene
Great track again! Fav'd. Since your voice itself fits perfectly into your tracks, it needs no changing at all. As for constructive criticism, as ValVedriVer said, maybe a bit of reverb would go in nicely here. Top track though, really good.
Hey! Yeah I am always iffy on the reverb. I have heard good and bad things. Working out the m/m of vocals is something I am getting the hang of still too though so sometimes I am not sure how much or how little if any etc etc ha.
Im glad you liked it though, thats awesome
-Charlene
Man, that voice! Gets me every time even though I'm expecting it now that I've heard your work. Your voice has so much emotion in every note. You have a real talent with melody, contrast and timing in the way you write melodies and sing them. I'm no vocal expert but I know what sounds good to my ears :)
You'll get a lot of love for this one and probably a good few collaborations. That's because it's really good and your voice sounds the best I've heard it sound.
Simple, effective guitar chords and the vocal sentiment is good.
My crazy idea won't happen but it's what I'd try to do if I were going to download and work on it.
So, it would be extremely obvious to just add some rock drums, strings, bass etc and you'd have a commercial sort of potentially hit pop song. But it would sound like a whole load of others.
So, as you're just singing over the same loop, I'd make the different verses different genres. So, the obvious pop/rock drums, then drum 'n' bass, then dub/reggae and so on.
That would really be interesting and set it apart from various other songs I've heard that sound similar. So, you and the guitar stay the same but everything/nearly everything else changes every minute or so.
I shouldn't think anyone will actually do it but I can hear in my head how it would work.
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Beardyman treat. This one's 20 minutes of excellent, unplanned fun:
Hallo mein fruend! Ha, wow, that's an idea. I actually would really like to hear that though.
Annnd again, for my Beardyman fix. Sweet deal.
Take care of yourself
-Charlene
Any time I see that you've added your vocals to anything, I have to listen. Generally, two or three times. As per usual, you don't disappoint with this one.
I think with the nature of the song, and the lyrical content, a little heavier reverb on the vocals would be good. It would give that distance to your voice that the lyrics describe. That hollowness, if you will. But, that's just my opinion. Either way, it's a good solid track as it is. Thank you for sharing. It really is our treat.
Yeah, you are probably right on the reverb. I am still getting the swing of things as far as how much how little, what fx to use if any and what not. Thanks again for all the support, it's awesome ha, hope all is super on your end.
-Charlene
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Loved it.
Thanks for offering your vocal pella. I would love to work on it. If you could send it to bladesplus@cox.net, I will try to do justice to it.
Thanks again,
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-Charlene
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Peace...TG.
-Charlene
I think I will send this to Franco and see if he wants to take it further. Would you happen to have a separate vocal track?
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faved and dl'd, thanks for sharing!
Wayne
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Kind regards,
Steve
Im glad you liked it though, thats awesome
-Charlene
I'm a fan and I faved!
RW
-Charlene
Jody
-Charlene
Always love the voice and your layering is great.
And yes, Beardyman is awesome.
Evan
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Mark
-Charlene
Simple, effective guitar chords and the vocal sentiment is good.
My crazy idea won't happen but it's what I'd try to do if I were going to download and work on it.
So, it would be extremely obvious to just add some rock drums, strings, bass etc and you'd have a commercial sort of potentially hit pop song. But it would sound like a whole load of others.
So, as you're just singing over the same loop, I'd make the different verses different genres. So, the obvious pop/rock drums, then drum 'n' bass, then dub/reggae and so on.
That would really be interesting and set it apart from various other songs I've heard that sound similar. So, you and the guitar stay the same but everything/nearly everything else changes every minute or so.
I shouldn't think anyone will actually do it but I can hear in my head how it would work.
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Annnd again, for my Beardyman fix. Sweet deal.
Take care of yourself
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I think with the nature of the song, and the lyrical content, a little heavier reverb on the vocals would be good. It would give that distance to your voice that the lyrics describe. That hollowness, if you will. But, that's just my opinion. Either way, it's a good solid track as it is. Thank you for sharing. It really is our treat.
Take care.
V.
-Charlene