The piano is great! Mixed with beat... amazing. Like the soft spokenness. My suggestion... bring the fx down a lil and the vocals up a lil.

Completely off topic, your picture is very cool, haha.
The only complaint I have, because I've decided if I'm going to review, I have to find something bad to say as well as the good, theres like 2 spots i can hear a "boof" noise because of exhaling into the mic. There I said it.
The voices are great otherwise
The piano doesn't overpower anything, the pads in the back have the right feel. Everything is great :)
The thunder as a hit on the outro was also pretty powerful

This really works.....I love the coiled tension within this piece..very effective with the whispering counterpoint to the piano.....'Walk on water" is a favourite line with me and it's inclusion here paints a vivid picture,coupled with the thunder and lightning you've created a remarkable track....very cool! cheers planet :)

Very good song. Love the lyrics man, its almost like a couple who are suffocating in their own relationship. Love the delivery of the lyrics the most tho, very subtle. Great choice in picking the beat too, great piano work on this. Also the transitions and dropping out was good when it dropped out to nothing but the drums.

Good stuff.