Pretty cool track ArtfulOne! Sceptikdeejay came through with a dope beat and you delivered on the flows. I'm not a fan on the chorus and I think the vocals should be turned down a little bit. But other than that the overall mix sounds good. It was an enjoyable listen. Nice work.
Hi ArtfulOne,
I agree with joecramer comment: you definitely need a female vocal singing refrain by this one:) A kind of a very straitforward song (for me:)) but you did it very well with keeping time and rapping. This one makes me think of productions from Pitbull or some older music from 90's. But it is still really well done by singing along the whole track. Good job.
A.
I like it a lot. You did a good work with the vocals.
but :)
Music is realy to low. And i would let a female sing the refrain with changed words - thas why i leave, now i´m gone
Chill beat, the delivery of your vocals reminds me of bloodhound gang, like Johnny said i'd recommend turning down the volume of the vocals just a bit so they fit more with the instrumental as they overpower it, but only by a little, still really good
Pretty nice, bit of chillout though I would look into the mixing. The vocals could be turned a notch down to allow the listener to experience the beat in combination with the vocals more instead of just hearing the vocals so hard
Also I would check into the limiter settings, everything seems to be quiet high up into the master, might be a good idea to turn things down so that the limiter doesn't have to cut a great deal on the volume
Still a good song though ;)
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I agree with joecramer comment: you definitely need a female vocal singing refrain by this one:) A kind of a very straitforward song (for me:)) but you did it very well with keeping time and rapping. This one makes me think of productions from Pitbull or some older music from 90's. But it is still really well done by singing along the whole track. Good job.
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I like it a lot. You did a good work with the vocals.
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Music is realy to low. And i would let a female sing the refrain with changed words - thas why i leave, now i´m gone
Real good work
stay tuned
joe
Also I would check into the limiter settings, everything seems to be quiet high up into the master, might be a good idea to turn things down so that the limiter doesn't have to cut a great deal on the volume
Still a good song though ;)