Hi again - you are my hero right now listening to all these crappy versions of the same songs! Thanks so much for taking your time to do that. It's really helpful.

I've been listening to breakbeat based music just now to refresh my memory of how it really sounds and I Think you are on to something - the drum line should be more prominent and kind of dry and there should also be more bass specificly tied to the rhythm.
I'm not sure this song is suited to sound like that because of the heavy reverb and all the automation in the drum line wich creates those phased sounds (I also used this flanger-effect on the drums and that's probably what you are referring too). But I'll give it a try!
I Think I'll try to give the vocal a rework too, it's so very lame like this.

Thanks again!

Hi!
Sorry you had to listen to the first version - it was quite terrible!!
It's a litte better this way I hope - the reverb on the drums is still there but I took away an EQ from the master channel and rearranged and added some percussion and other stuff.
It's not there yet though, still too muddy. I also agree about the lacking energy part - have to find out how to fix that.
Thanks for listening!

Cheers/ SJ =)

Hi Ed!
I just remixed this and added some things, drums and also some FL "piano". I had an EQ on the master channel which ruined the sound in the first version so I took it away but it's still not punchy and clear enough so have to look in to that later.
Layering (different) drums almost always makes things better! Or, well, often anyway.

Thanks for stopping by and take care!!
Cheers/ SJ =)

Hey, it's you guys! I just rearragned the track, I Think it's better this way although it's still muddy sounding...not sure how to fix that.

But thanks for listening and for letting people use the Acapella.

Cheers! / SJ =)