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12th Oct 2014 03:50 - 10 years ago
Description : Heard Beatz's vocal take on the track and began writing to it myself. Saw he had the instro uploaded and the rest is history.

Leave a comment on what aspects of the track you like, don't, what tweaks you'd have made etc.

Shout to Beatz for some dope production!

Comments (13)

If you have time take a listen and give donfons some feedback.

Th3Coalition
Th3Coalition 14th Jun 2015 20:42 - 9 years ago
@BEATZMODE and @donfons ...I want to put this on my mixtape I'm working on called VINDICATION...I want it to be the first track...n @donfons ...I want it as a collab with your verse...so let me know how we can go about this..n what legal issues need to be handled.. Preciate it
donfons
donfons replied 17th Jun 2015 - 9 years ago
Just messaged you fam. Good looks on the listen I appreciate it!
DMindProductions
DMindProductions 11th Apr 2015 21:19 - 9 years ago
Digging it!
donfons
donfons replied 17th Jun 2015 - 9 years ago
Thanks for listening! I truly appreciate it!
centralsdev
centralsdev 11th Apr 2015 20:32 - 9 years ago
you loss the flow some times.
Oceanically
Oceanically 10th Apr 2015 23:35 - 9 years ago
A catchy tune. Good lyrics :) Well done.
donfons
donfons replied 11th Apr 2015 - 9 years ago
Thank you for the listen and comments.
centralsdev
centralsdev 10th Apr 2015 23:34 - 9 years ago
if you could keep that flow that is at 0:32 to 0:36 and just keep all the way on the main part and make like two main parts and a nice chorus that goes betiwn.
donfons
donfons replied 11th Apr 2015 - 9 years ago
I've been brainstorming some ways to extend this to a fully featured track for another project I have coming up. I will definitely consider this approach!

Thanks for listening and your comments.
YungWillCPR
YungWillCPR 30th Mar 2015 23:35 - 9 years ago
I like the delivery on this one..clarity and production z great. A+ for me.
donfons
donfons replied 31st Mar 2015 - 9 years ago
Much appreciated Yung. Just left a comment of your track "life..."

You remind of this other cat on here Thatruth1 (His joint "black and ugly" features the stacking effect I was mentioning). Anyways, thanks for listening and commenting!
SHWAK
SHWAK 25th Mar 2015 00:46 - 9 years ago
1st time it sounds off to me is at the lebron line

those words just need some more spacing

maybe replace it with "gunna bitch slap lebron next" then the beat stops. * WHAP * beat starts again

solid vocals
donfons
donfons replied 30th Mar 2015 - 9 years ago
What did the 5 fingers say to the face???

Thanks S.
benjizo
benjizo 9th Mar 2015 19:54 - 9 years ago
Good joint...Love the flow.The delivery is on point.
donfons
donfons replied 30th Mar 2015 - 9 years ago
Thanks Benj! I'm feeling a lot of your joints. One of these days we'll have to make a collab happen.
JoeyBonezSD1
JoeyBonezSD1 6th Mar 2015 23:44 - 9 years ago
love the flows an delivery..this a nice joint right here beat bangs mixed an mastered well...good show...
donfons
donfons replied 9th Mar 2015 - 9 years ago
Thank you, thank you, thank you! This is one of my better mixes. I'm constantly looking to surpass this one.
BigBodyStylus
BigBodyStylus 28th Feb 2015 09:35 - 9 years ago
Fresh Oxy-Morons... Dope shit kid!!!
donfons
donfons replied 4th Mar 2015 - 9 years ago
I'm glad you feeling it fam. Thanks for listening!
DeLaBeatz
DeLaBeatz 12th Feb 2015 16:27 - 9 years ago
Pretty dope bro. Good vocal mix. Keep it up.
donfons
donfons replied 4th Mar 2015 - 9 years ago
Thanks for listening fam. Much appreciated!
BEATZMODE
BEATZMODE 12th Oct 2014 11:09 - 10 years ago
awesome stuff bro,im liking what you did,keep it up
donfons
donfons replied 20th Oct 2014 - 10 years ago
BEATZ I appreciate you checking in bro! Thanx for listening. I'll be checking your page regularly for any heat you put out!
larrybarrow31
larrybarrow31 12th Oct 2014 06:28 - 10 years ago
catchy flow, very nice work on this, I had to add it to fav. nice job!
donfons
donfons replied 20th Oct 2014 - 10 years ago
I appreciate the listen and fav. Much respect!!

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