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24th Feb 2015 00:22 - 10 years ago
Description : a darker side of me, inspired by a loop from Danke

Comments (8)

If you have time take a listen and give wordybum some feedback.

8Kass8
8Kass8 27th Jul 2015 06:51 - 9 years ago
this is real shiit , dig it ! i ll send you some beats man , id like to collab , feel free to send some acapellas verses...:)
wordybum
wordybum replied 27th Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
Thanks, brother! send me some tracks you think i may be a good fit on and i'll give you my feedback and/or verses/acapellas.
BeatMaker4real
BeatMaker4real 24th Jul 2015 18:53 - 9 years ago
Man I love this..the beat is hot, the flow is hot, the lyrics are poetic, that's total package bro. Fav this for sure.
wordybum
wordybum replied 24th Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
thanks so much for the positive feedback, brother. I really enjoyed putting the beat together, and i lost myself inside of it when i wrote the verses & the hook.

i'm glad you enjoyed it.

Bless.
srm2888
srm2888 14th Jul 2015 20:39 - 9 years ago
nice rhymes bro
wordybum
wordybum replied 14th Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
thanks for taking the time to listen, srm! enjoy the rest of the tracks.

bless.
StaticNomad
StaticNomad 14th Jul 2015 02:31 - 9 years ago
Word up, WordyBro, says me.

So sorry for not yet sending you any demos to rap over. I keep putting it off but do still have some initial ideas that I keep meaning to send. I'm also putting off sending someone all my stems so he can do a remix of a track dedicated to him. That's a lot more work than just sending you a couple of MP3s.

Anyway: foreboding intro. Piano and some added buzzing pads. Then the drums are pretty tight and powerful. 0:35 how are you doing that drum fill? Other good and varied drum fills keep popping up.

People can groove to this and your assured and mature vocals lead us through the slightly dark, haunting journey like a good master of ceremony. Interesting lyrics, as always.

My only real complaint is a lack of an obvious change. That would really make it take off and give us a bit of a break from the incessant nature of the track. And then you can have fun returning to that main groove and idea.
Mix sounds pretty good though I guess you know the end is chopped off too abruptly.

Good Wordywork...

P.S. New sort of chillout hip hop track from me:

Rhomboid

https://www.looperman.com/tracks/detail/168647
wordybum
wordybum replied 14th Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
thanks for the great feedback on the track, Static. the drum fills were done very patiently lol. they are midi drums in Logic. i took some basic hand percussion fills and moved them around and as tightly together as possible. i also used some filtering and other fun stuff to get that sound. i'm a novice with production and mixing, so i just play with different effects until it sounds good. i wanted to break up the pianos for a more emotional piece, but i just figured the drums would tell the story behind my words. maybe i'll play with remix and have fun with chopping up the keys a bit.

i'm gonna check out that link you posted in a moment. it's good to hear from you, brother!
lowmusik
lowmusik 1st May 2015 18:05 - 9 years ago
dope dope!
wordybum
wordybum replied 1st May 2015 - 9 years ago
thanks so much for the listen. I'm glad it's being received so well by everyone.

Bless.
Danke
Danke 26th Feb 2015 07:49 - 10 years ago
Cool track!

Very intense and tensioned...I'm not good in rap so just wanna say thanx for being part in this number!

Respect, Danke
wordybum
wordybum replied 26th Feb 2015 - 10 years ago
Danke, i beg to differ. i think a lot of your loops can be rap oriented, just as long as the narrator is able to think outside of the box and get creative with the music. i am highly inspired by your work. don't be suprised if i drop a few more songs on here using some of your work :)

thanks again for the inspiration. Bless.
mrwolf14
mrwolf14 25th Feb 2015 09:28 - 10 years ago
I have to quote MrSkinny: awesome!
Your vocals flow very nicely, liked the short "doubling" parts (again, I have to quote MrSkinny).
The drum-beat is powerful at the right point: liked.
Very "dreamy" piano part which sits very well in the mix. My only suggestion: try to use the piano only for the parts where you are not singing (or at least use it only for some of the parts). While I generally like the idea of a "sad melody" going on in the background the whole time, I think in this case it is not strictly needed: your flow alone can for sure bring enough energy and interest to this song (please, consider that this is my-very-humble-opinion).
Overall: great track!
Ciao, Domenico
wordybum
wordybum replied 25th Feb 2015 - 10 years ago
Thanks a lot, Domenico. i appreciate all input, good and bad. i totally agree with you on the over use of the piano loop, but after trying different ways to use the manipulate the sample (cut it and delay shorter peices of it, texture it with reverb for a more faded stretch, etc...) i just decided to run with it and put my best lyrical foot forward. i'm so happy that people are hearing the vision and enjoying it. thanks again for the great compliments and constructive criticism!
Skinnyboyslim
Skinnyboyslim 25th Feb 2015 02:42 - 10 years ago
Awesome! I love the smooth steady and fluent groove of your vocals. Nice doubling them up as well. Also loving the lyrics. Keyboard and beat bed sways sweetly behind the vocal. Nice work!
wordybum
wordybum replied 25th Feb 2015 - 10 years ago
thanks so much, Skinnyboyslim! i'm super happy that you enjoyed the vocals, they are some of my favorite rhythms and wordplay to-date. it was so fun to write over this beat, and i'm glad you enjoyed it as well.

cheers!

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