hey man, thanks a lot ofr the comment, I'm glad you liked it.
please feel free to go for it, I'm curious and I'd love to hear how could it sounds
thanks
I can rip some pipes on this... I dig metal. This is way cool.
I have posted some metal songs that I composed myself so if you want
to hear my vocals you're welcomed to listen....
Once again... THIS IS COOL STUFF.
THANKS
hey man, sorry for the late reply
first of all thanks for listening and please feel free to go crazy on this one, i'd love to hear what come out of it
cheers
Not seen your name on here before. I'm sure I would have noticed as it must be a Soundgarden reference (a favourite band of mine).
This is some pretty thick, powerful stoner metal.
There's a bit of an abrupt panning problem with the intro at 0:05. That could be a lot neater.
1:35 same thing happens again.
0:50 lead is awesome. Not that heavy a tone but cuts right through the mix.
Drums are OK but sound a bit unnatural. Seems like kick and snare aren't quite playing with the hats. Not sure why.
How are you doing the drums? Software programming?
Overall: pretty good stuff searching for vocals to make it a complete piece. Good luck and also with the mix. That panning issue can easily be fixed...
hey man
thanks for the comment
panning issue, is obvious just wanted to make it sounds like 2 different guitars that play the first riff. hsould use 2 diff apms too and fix the panning
second: drums are generated by that awesome and not at all professional software called "GARAGE BAND" , so to be honest, yes it is what it is. ;)
I'm just using it to play some quick sketches (writing playing and recording took less than 2 hours for this one). I maybe find better structure for the song and possibly go to a studio and record it
third : your stuff is unbelievable, the complexity of it , the style and sound quality is amazing.
thanks a lot
I like the distortion you have one the guitar. Drums are good but don't sound like they're coming from the same source as the guitars. Lead squalling lines are pretty nice, and the kind of thing I'd like to incorporate into my music. You've got a good, mean sound here. Good drum fills and tones.
I dig it, but wish there were a few more parts to continue enjoying.
hey man thanks
it was all written played and recorded in a couple of hours in garage band, on a hangover sunday morning
I'm not really good at mixing/mastering (also sure as hell garage band is not the right tool to get a finished product)
but it is enough for me , good DIY i guess.
Also the "lead squalling sound" are a sure rip off from refuse/resist by sepultura :D
Could I have your permission to use a clip from this song in a webseries I am creating for a film class? The song introduces a character perfectly. Please let me know asap.
man this is so good man ill keep my eye out for vocalist i work with some...i would try but i don't think i could do it justice...but i defiantly want to download it.
good track, however most musicians keep playing things over and over like this track. think music and lyrics. This sounds more like a video game than a track for music. where is the hook and why is the hook so long. the key to rock is to punch them all in the ball and leave them singing it. megadeth is a great example of riding that shit from point a to point b without skipping a crunch.
thanks for your feedback,
you got a point,
problem is i'd love someone to sing on top of that. as i'm not a singer myself, it is hard to imagine how to structure the song.
if anyone would sing on top of this, i'd appreciate the input of how many bars i should keep the different riffs.
i marked this as a collab request for a reason, it is uncomplete otherwise.
thanks and take care.
This piece has a, real punch in the mouth [as Danke mentioned]. I'd like to run it up the flag pole, and see if my muse, salutes. Keep em' comin'. Great sense. Really...
Sorry, I can't help you in vocs, just wanna tell you that how much I like this number...punch straight to the face feeling...so live...energy bomb...this is really missing here in Loopey...thanx for the upload, sudden dl to car...:-)
hey Danke
thanks a lot, you are always really kind.
I got few tracks like this one, always missing the vocal though.
Not sure how many metal head singers are around here, still I'll upload few of them later.
thanks again
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please feel free to go for it, I'm curious and I'd love to hear how could it sounds
thanks
I have posted some metal songs that I composed myself so if you want
to hear my vocals you're welcomed to listen....
Once again... THIS IS COOL STUFF.
THANKS
first of all thanks for listening and please feel free to go crazy on this one, i'd love to hear what come out of it
cheers
Not seen your name on here before. I'm sure I would have noticed as it must be a Soundgarden reference (a favourite band of mine).
This is some pretty thick, powerful stoner metal.
There's a bit of an abrupt panning problem with the intro at 0:05. That could be a lot neater.
1:35 same thing happens again.
0:50 lead is awesome. Not that heavy a tone but cuts right through the mix.
Drums are OK but sound a bit unnatural. Seems like kick and snare aren't quite playing with the hats. Not sure why.
How are you doing the drums? Software programming?
Overall: pretty good stuff searching for vocals to make it a complete piece. Good luck and also with the mix. That panning issue can easily be fixed...
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thanks for the comment
panning issue, is obvious just wanted to make it sounds like 2 different guitars that play the first riff. hsould use 2 diff apms too and fix the panning
second: drums are generated by that awesome and not at all professional software called "GARAGE BAND" , so to be honest, yes it is what it is. ;)
I'm just using it to play some quick sketches (writing playing and recording took less than 2 hours for this one). I maybe find better structure for the song and possibly go to a studio and record it
third : your stuff is unbelievable, the complexity of it , the style and sound quality is amazing.
thanks a lot
head banged all the way....
hard stuff!!!
cheers
Compliments_____Orlando
that would be fantastic
I can change the numbers of bar of each riff if you need
let me know what would you like to do on this
thanks a lot
I dig it, but wish there were a few more parts to continue enjoying.
Evan
it was all written played and recorded in a couple of hours in garage band, on a hangover sunday morning
I'm not really good at mixing/mastering (also sure as hell garage band is not the right tool to get a finished product)
but it is enough for me , good DIY i guess.
Also the "lead squalling sound" are a sure rip off from refuse/resist by sepultura :D
just curious . go for it
if you ever publish it, just send me the link because i'm curious !
Thanks
rock on!
you got a point,
problem is i'd love someone to sing on top of that. as i'm not a singer myself, it is hard to imagine how to structure the song.
if anyone would sing on top of this, i'd appreciate the input of how many bars i should keep the different riffs.
i marked this as a collab request for a reason, it is uncomplete otherwise.
thanks and take care.
if you know anyone that would enjoy singing on top of this, please give me a shout
Respect, Danke
thanks a lot, you are always really kind.
I got few tracks like this one, always missing the vocal though.
Not sure how many metal head singers are around here, still I'll upload few of them later.
thanks again