Hi. I like the choir sample. Very beautiful.

And it appearing throughout the track works just fine.

Good sub bass.

However, I really think you need to introduce some other elements as it's just a bit too minimal. I'd say you could do with something complementary to it ie something else beautiful - not just hip hop bass and drums.

So, try to build up some string parts or something. Pitched up version of the sample works OK but I much prefer it at regular pitch.

Otherwise, it's a pretty hypnotic piece but I feel more can be done with it.

AYYYY its too nice those choirs and snare

great big sub...yes that loop does produce a subtle but addicting melody...this is really well done lowmusik...I wouldn`t chenge a thing unless you sing/rap...then it would be a really great backer....I`m not up on the genre...but this is just good listening...Ed

Hey, what's good man. Really nice composition you have here. I like the drop at 1:00 and the change up at 1:44. The mixdown is on point, I really love the subs. I have a crazy sub system here in the studio and it sounds great man.

You definitely have skills. Keep doing your thing.

Peace to you, friends and love ones.

boy'cott

I like the intro to this one, do you sing or rap? If you do you should definitely put your voice on this.

Kyle

you should put some vocal on this, and work abit around it.