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10th Jun 2015 01:12 - 9 years ago
Description : Here's an attempt at a trap track. More of electric-dance with hip-hop elements. This track came to me easily, within decent time as well. Completion was within a days time, and probably one of my more fun tracks. Thinking about having a competition of remixing this track. Tell me what you guys think? Any/All comments are welcomed.

Comments (8)

If you have time take a listen and give GoldenOokami some feedback.

centralsdev
centralsdev 18th Jun 2015 18:59 - 9 years ago
hey man i better like Competitions so you not turning this into a battle? but it need to have a work time = 24hours.
GoldenOokami
GoldenOokami replied 18th Jun 2015 - 9 years ago
You think I should host a competition? That sounds fun, and I would absolutely do it. But not only would I have nothing as a reward, but I don't think there would be many people that would participate.

~GO
mudhoen
mudhoen 18th Jun 2015 18:33 - 9 years ago
Well, it is definetly not a trap song, but that does not matter. It still sounds very well in its own way. Like the use of the synths although the piano starting at 2:24 should be altered(in my opinion). But for the most part I think its a fun production to listen to.
GoldenOokami
GoldenOokami replied 18th Jun 2015 - 9 years ago
I gotcha. Thanks! I'll put it as Electronic then. I'll also keep your suggestion in mind. I'm probably going to rework this track soon. Peace!

~GO
centralsdev
centralsdev 18th Jun 2015 17:50 - 9 years ago
hey man can i cut in it and infect it? you get full credit ?
GoldenOokami
GoldenOokami replied 18th Jun 2015 - 9 years ago
Sure. No problem. Just shoot me a message.

~GO
centralsdev
centralsdev 17th Jun 2015 18:44 - 9 years ago
here i can eazy hear you have been useing to much reverb, you should removed complete and find a EQ tree effect.
GoldenOokami
GoldenOokami replied 17th Jun 2015 - 9 years ago
Hmm. I can assure you, I did not use any effects at all on this track. Any/all effects you hear are from the actual, untouched/unadjusted vst banks themselves. I never changed a single thing, EQ-wise.

~GO
crucethus
crucethus 12th Jun 2015 04:43 - 9 years ago
I wouldn't want to remix this one as I don't think I could improve on it, it's that well done!
Cru
GoldenOokami
GoldenOokami replied 17th Jun 2015 - 9 years ago
I appreciate it Cru. I'm curious to how others could work with this and make it into his or her own style, y'know? Thanks again man!

~GO
centralsdev
centralsdev 11th Jun 2015 15:33 - 9 years ago
hey there i think this could be abit more short, and you would get a better track nice work.
GoldenOokami
GoldenOokami replied 17th Jun 2015 - 9 years ago
I appreciate your comment. I'll keep that in mind. I may rework this a bit more in the future. Thanks again.

~GO
XyIlent
XyIlent 10th Jun 2015 16:40 - 9 years ago
Not sure if id call it trap, it jumps genres. But whatever genre its pretty awesome.

Love the glitch feel too it, and the synth/violin/pluck thing at 1.40 is pretty cool
anyhoo... cool track man :D

keep it up
GoldenOokami
GoldenOokami replied 11th Jun 2015 - 9 years ago
Much appreciated man! I had real fun with this. The genre is beyond me. I have no idea. But I'm satisfied with the results. Thanks for the comment! :)

~GO
BeatMaker4real
BeatMaker4real 10th Jun 2015 10:34 - 9 years ago
This is trap ?..what makes a track trap ? what is trap?
I really can't say that I know the elements of a trap song, but I do love this track and the mix as well...it's like 4:00am and I'm listening thru headphones, and it's sounding very nice.good work
GoldenOokami
GoldenOokami replied 10th Jun 2015 - 9 years ago
Hey man! I'm glad you enjoyed my track. It was really interesting when making this. This is obviously not the traditional trap-sounding song, but I thought it fit the title of the genre. Like a mixture of Electric and Hip-hop elements. Perhaps it's not. Not sure. But what I do know, is that I do appreciate your comment and words. Take care, man.

~GO

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