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13th Jun 2015 23:09 - 9 years ago
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Description : The song is about choices, at least that's what I think about when I work on it.
I'm a novice when it comes to production and mixing so any tips are appreciated.

Comments (10)

If you have time take a listen and give Deathbot some feedback.

LordMCTimmy
LordMCTimmy 1st Oct 2017 05:32 - 7 years ago
Hey I really like this track. Any way you wanna work together. I can do some fresh stuff or you can dig my acapellas. My email is facelesspigeon@gmail.com . Check out my Music at mctimmy.bandcamp.com and lordsofthegalaxies.bandcamp.com
DanGoldstein
DanGoldstein 11th Aug 2015 22:44 - 9 years ago
mesmerizing groove. interesting sounds also. I hope you are well and doing some work recently. look forward to hearing more from you! regards - Dan
theHumps
theHumps 21st Jul 2015 14:34 - 9 years ago
Pretty cool track, it has a cool edgy sound to it, a bit industrial and rock with some electronic elements to it. I would suggest putting some more volume on the final mix, I did crank it up though. I like it, mix sounds decent. Big deep bass, yup, like that! Not too sure about the clapping and vocal parts but the music rocks. Reminds me of Fatboyslim and the Chemical Bros. style of music, electronic rock.

Good stuff!

Wayne
WoozyBeats
WoozyBeats 20th Jul 2015 13:25 - 9 years ago
Hi DB hope all is well;)
I'm still learning too and although i understand the physics of sound i still struggle to get a good mix mainly because the room where i produce is NOT acoustically treated so i cannot hear the sound accurately.

To get a accurate mix and mastering you will need at least a pair of Studio Monitors and an acoustically treated room which can be done quite cheaply See Here : http://www.soundonsound.com/sos/dec09/articles/beginnersacoustics.htm
Without these two elements it's hard to get a good mix.

However if you don't have them the best you can do is listen to your mix in as many different speakers/headphones as possible and make notes of the problems you might find and then is a question of compromise and test what works best.
Also compare it to commercial music of the same kind just so you have an idea of what's good and whats not.

Here's a few articles that really helped me but there's a lot of stuff on you tube too if you prefer video.
http://heroicrecordings.com/essentials-good-mixing-mastering/
http://www.soundonsound.com/sos/feb99/articles/20tips.478.htm

I hope this points you in the right direction, let me know if you have any doubts i will be happy to help :)
Peace....
WB
Deathbot
Deathbot replied 21st Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
Thanks a lot for the links man heaps there to keep me going
WoozyBeats
WoozyBeats 6th Jul 2015 10:21 - 9 years ago
Hello DB!

I like it especially the guitar, the tune is different and very original.
I do Agree with asidRn's review though.
Another thing i noticed is that the track lacks clarity and sounds muddy at times, better mixing and mastering would quickly sort it out.
Let me know if you do make changes as i would like to hear it.

Best Regards
WB
Deathbot
Deathbot replied 19th Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
Hey Wooze,

I totally agree with your comments. I'm a novice at mixing so any tips would be appreciated.
DijamMusic
DijamMusic 15th Jun 2015 01:31 - 9 years ago
Deathbot
Hello
It is a great track; wired, peculiar, interesting.
Very balanced with a mad ending.
Well done
Jamid
jesus2405
jesus2405 14th Jun 2015 13:33 - 9 years ago
Thanks, greets.
susane
susane 14th Jun 2015 10:23 - 9 years ago
good gen
25DjTj
25DjTj 14th Jun 2015 09:21 - 9 years ago
superb track..feels like a pursuit track in a game or movie.

TJ
Orlando51
Orlando51 14th Jun 2015 03:12 - 9 years ago
This one is really on the dark side...very tense feeling...I
like this kind of vibe! Well done!

Compliments______Orlando

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