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17th Jun 2015 01:59 - 9 years ago
Description : Been away for a minute but i'm back at it with some new heat for y'all. One of the first beats I produced and wrote to. Lyrics, beat, mix & master. It's all me on this one (with exception of the sample). Let me know if you guys and gals are feeling this one. I have a list of critiques for it already. I'm just looking to see what others are hearing.

Please comment on everything! Lyrics, drums, arrangement, mixing, mastering, clarity, etc.

Comments (3)

If you have time take a listen and give donfons some feedback.

ShurelyTemper
ShurelyTemper 15th Sep 2015 18:30 - 9 years ago
Rap not being my scene I was almost going to pass this over. But I'm glad I didn't. Great track. The rap is awesome, clear concise, lyrically intelligent, with a smooth flow. Backing track is snappy, sparse and just right. Interesting intro, and slick production. Super job.
DMattduem
DMattduem 25th Jun 2015 00:38 - 9 years ago
I think it's awesome, great top end sparkle but didn't hurt my ears with spikes. Everything I have to say from here on is a matter of absolute taste I think it's great just the way it is if you like the sound, IMO though I would lose the reverb and make it in your face! At the very least you should eq out some of the high's in the verb trails. (Again unless you were going for that). Also, it's "glue" seems a little weird to me? Probably just my listening environment which is awful but I'd personally use something different on your bus for a better glue, again just IMO. Other than that very good clean sound that I like. (I've decided to not comment on tracks I don't like since that doesn't seem very constructive.)
donfons
donfons replied 7th Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
Even though you say it's only taste, I appreciate hearing others' take on what can be done better for the next one. Honestly, I was slapping buttons left and right to get something that sounded semi-listenable (and I mean slapping in the most sophisticated form). I typically try to leave the highs untouched or slightly boosted for clarity as it's something I struggle with most times.

I will say your comment on the glue nature of the track spurred a weekend long study session into how to get better at it so thank you for pointing me in that direction.

Again, thanks for listening and commenting! I'm feeling a little honored to be on the like side of your preferences.
WoozyBeats
WoozyBeats 17th Jun 2015 11:05 - 9 years ago
Sounding good i like it.
Love that Sample in Portuguese from Brazil.
As for the Rap You got a good voice and your flow is neat.
The only thing i would say is that the track needs is some variation on the instrumental and a slight improvement on the mastering for overall clarity.
Regards
donfons
donfons replied 7th Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
Good Ear! I take it you're into sample surfing?

Agreed, for right now i'm focusing on cohesive sounds and frameworks but you are absolutely correct, variation keeps the interest.

Thank you for listening and commenting!

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