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28th Jun 2015 23:40 - 9 years ago
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Description : Here is something a little different from me in my vocal delivery. This song was inspired by an incident which happened to a person who is very dear to me. This is an dedication to her and her new found strength.

Again featuring one of my favorite guitarists, AllenV. Please take time to check out his gift at: https://www.looperman.com/tracks?mid=AllenV

Thank you Crucethus, Clindsay, and Jamid for your engineering suggestions. This version contains your suggestions.

Comments (17)

If you have time take a listen and give Twanna1 some feedback.

Micky
Micky 30th Oct 2023 04:04 - 1 year ago
Hi Twanna, still a big fan of your voice. Hope you're doing well. Peace out from Micky
noobking
noobking 17th Jun 2018 06:34 - 6 years ago
wooooooooow
skates99
skates99 26th Jul 2015 10:09 - 9 years ago
great job i like it
Twanna1
Twanna1 replied 19th Aug 2015 - 9 years ago
Thank you Skatess99 for the kind words and appreciation.

God bless!!
8Kass8
8Kass8 26th Jul 2015 06:37 - 9 years ago
i like it , dig it :)
Twanna1
Twanna1 replied 19th Aug 2015 - 9 years ago
Thank you 8Kass8 for stopping by and for the appreciation.
Have a blessed day!!
Enzotic
Enzotic 26th Jul 2015 03:51 - 9 years ago
Very interesting track. I wasn't expecting this at all, but I like it! The only thing I'd fix in this is the sibilance (mostly in the beginning). Nothing a few volume automations or a de-esser can't fix!
Twanna1
Twanna1 replied 19th Aug 2015 - 9 years ago
Thank you Enzotic for your appreciation of the song. I am working on the sibilance issue. My brother made a suggestion that I include a "male's " perspective to the song. So on the next upload, the sibilance issue will be addressed.

Have a great one.
Tumbleweed
Tumbleweed 25th Jul 2015 21:05 - 9 years ago
You can sing on my radio any day Twanna...this is really well done...meaningful lyrics...great job in the vocal delivery (there is a little sibilance in the lead vocal...notable most at the intro...easy fix)...right on accompaniment & nicely produced..guess that makes it all good.....This is the way R&B should be done...superb...a tip of the hat to you and a definite fav....bravo.....Ed
Twanna1
Twanna1 replied 19th Aug 2015 - 9 years ago
Thank you Ed for your kind words. It would be an honor to sing on your radio anyday. This style of "spoken word" is new for me, but I love trying something different, getting away from the typical.

Much love to you.

Twanna
amirfar
amirfar 17th Jul 2015 09:58 - 9 years ago
دمت گرم دمت گرم
Twanna1
Twanna1 replied 25th Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
Thank you Amirfar for your comment. Apologies for not being able to read your comment, but I do appreciate you stopping by and taking a listen.
Couchie
Couchie 1st Jul 2015 02:56 - 9 years ago
a really great track. very real. not that ive heard thousands at Looperman but definitely one of if not the best. i was not going to critique but if your going to fade out the end I think at little more gradual. like someone said already a hit song here - only takes one
Twanna1
Twanna1 replied 1st Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
Hello Couchie, thank you so much for stopping by to take a listen. I so appreciate your comments and sentiments.

Have a truly blessed day.

Twanna
NWilliams
NWilliams 1st Jul 2015 00:18 - 9 years ago
Nice track.
Twanna1
Twanna1 replied 1st Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
Thank you. Have a great day:-)
promenade2239
promenade2239 29th Jun 2015 21:59 - 9 years ago
hello Twanna

I love the extremely peaceful message of this piece. fine production as well! - so different from your other ones indeed. sweet and gentle reverb on vocals! the sound-image of this song reminded me a bit of 'In your wildest dreams' but only stylistically because your message here is so different and much more spiritual.
I am not familiar with guitar works by AllenV but I will check them out!

Impressive vocal work from you and great song.

Alex
Twanna1
Twanna1 replied 1st Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
Thank you Alex and please do go and check out AllenV. He is an extraordinary guitarist!! He has worked with quite a few people here on Looperman.

Thank you again, Dear and have a blessed day.
soundhound
soundhound 29th Jun 2015 18:26 - 9 years ago
Very tasty track, outstanding vocal just drop the peaks not the
whole vocal track...
It's in a good place, controlling the front line...Where it should be...
Strong lyrics lots of love in them meaning full...

Keep workin it, you've got something here...

Peace...TG.
Twanna1
Twanna1 replied 1st Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
Thank you so much, my friend.

Blessings:-)
Orlando51
Orlando51 29th Jun 2015 17:44 - 9 years ago
This song is so cool...I really love your vocals and your special gift for interpretation! More than splendid!

Compliments _____Orlando
Twanna1
Twanna1 replied 1st Jul 2015 - 9 years ago
Thank you Orlando. Your comments are so appreciated.

God bless and have a wonderful week.
Klandestyne
Klandestyne 29th Jun 2015 11:18 - 9 years ago
hey there twanna
great song structure , kool stripped back vibes,vox reminds me of one of my fave lolleta holloway ,really groovy stuff , look forward to hearing the updates on this ,
and will be checking your other tracks
Twanna1
Twanna1 replied 29th Jun 2015 - 9 years ago
Thank you Klandestyne for your comments and appreciation of what I am doing. Much love.

Twanna
DijamMusic
DijamMusic 29th Jun 2015 10:15 - 9 years ago
Yes, it is great now.
Well done.
Jamid
Twanna1
Twanna1 replied 29th Jun 2015 - 9 years ago
:-) Thanks
crucethus
crucethus 29th Jun 2015 04:48 - 9 years ago
What I like about it: Great R & B music well composed, awesome spoken word delivery, reminds me of a cross between Robbie Robertson and Grace Jones.
what I would like to see worked on:. I think for the chorus you are using a vocal harmonizer, I had one back in the day, I stopped using it years ago except for the reverb as it sounds too weird in the mix. I would love to hear you do your own harmonies line by line with the main melody being a little more out in the mix as you have a great voice. Allen V's guitar is very good. This is one that if you work at it would be an incredible song my dear.
Cru
Twanna1
Twanna1 replied 29th Jun 2015 - 9 years ago
Hey Cru, thank you for your appreciation and critique. Believe or not, I am singing all of the vocals. I am not using a harmonizer. My husband frequently tells me that my harmonies are so close they do not sound real.

I spent many years in school and church choirs and I would always sing along with each section as they were learning their parts, from first soprano to second tenor. That was how I challenged myself vocally and developed my range.

I am currently working on the levels. An update is coming soon.

Thank you again.
clindsay
clindsay 29th Jun 2015 02:13 - 9 years ago
OK - this is seriously good. The narrative is really powerful,
your vocals and phrasing are very good, the composition and structure is good but there are serious production issues that need to be worked through. I agree with Jamid -in the hands of a good producer this could be bonafide hit. Well done with the caveats expressed.
-clindsay
Twanna1
Twanna1 replied 29th Jun 2015 - 9 years ago
Thank you Clindsay for your comments and appreciation. All that you suggested is relevant and appreciated. I am working on it now. I should have the "redo" up soon.

Thank you again.
DijamMusic
DijamMusic 29th Jun 2015 01:26 - 9 years ago
Hello,
This track very good, creatively laid out . Nice RnB, however; your gain is too high that at the top end there is a distortion. Maybe it should be a touch lower this is my view though.
It’s great job though.
Jamid
Twanna1
Twanna1 replied 29th Jun 2015 - 9 years ago
Thank you Jamid for your appreciation and critique. I am working on the mix now taking your critique into consideration.

Thank you again.

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