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12th Aug 2015 06:55 - 9 years ago
Description : -UPDATED 22/08/15-

So this a song, right? And the spoken words are my friend Malinda and she's pretty awesome. Still a wip. But I'm loving how this is turning out. I'm using the same drumset as one of my other songs, I know. It's pretty much a place holder til I get something better. Doc Pyro says the vocals are off key but I don't really care atm. I'm not making music for you all to enjoy, I'm making it for myself. I only care if I enjoy it. That being said, if you do enjoy that's just fantastic! If not, I can promise I won't be losing sleep over it. Thanks for reading this wall of crap :D

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If you have time take a listen and give zacvoos some feedback.

ApolloForce
ApolloForce 26th Jan 2021 04:55 - 4 years ago
gjgcc
djmaddafaka
djmaddafaka 1st Oct 2015 11:49 - 9 years ago
Really like it dude! too awesome!
rashedroxx
rashedroxx 24th Aug 2015 17:52 - 9 years ago
beautifull
zacvoos
zacvoos replied 24th Aug 2015 - 9 years ago
Since I see you're going through my songs, If you wanna hear more look up Jahjah&Rainso on soundcloud of reverbnation I have a lot of music, albeit shit music, on those sites :D
GalanticMusic
GalanticMusic 23rd Aug 2015 14:25 - 9 years ago
very nice! it has that dancing vibe, good sounds!
Uzaifxd501
Uzaifxd501 19th Aug 2015 11:17 - 9 years ago
Too good . Yeah
Phr34kness
Phr34kness 15th Aug 2015 12:15 - 9 years ago
I think its a neat track.

Malinda's spoken word was a nice touch, actually it was what stood out among everything else.
It was what set the vibe for the track.

I cant give a constructive feedback regarding your build or sounds, because I myself am facing a little bit of a rough patch when it comes to mastering a track.

However, as a listener, and not a producer, I can certainly say I'd listen to the track every now and then.

Props mate.
Spudsy
Spudsy 14th Aug 2015 10:48 - 9 years ago
Hey dude,

Instrumental is ok tbh, few eqing issues here n there (too much low end on sounds) but nothing drastic.

Her voice is nice man a few things to try though, is keep her voice to just breakdowns that way she has her own platform to speak because she gets lost in the track when she speaks over the main bits. A nice 1 minute breakdown with a gradual build back up would work wonders for her spoken word bits.

Also slightly side chain compressing the pads/synths against her voice when she speaks will make her stand out more. if you have a stereo delay device put it on the vocal channel, set the left side at 1 millisecond and the right at about 10-15 milliseconds and put the dry/wet all the way to wet. that way she will also have width in the mix.

Cheers for sharing.
skwishfish
skwishfish 13th Aug 2015 20:18 - 9 years ago
Hey mate! This is a pretty neat track. Honestly, I don't believe Malinda is off key. After all, spoken word doesn't necessarily HAVE to be on key anyways.

I also agree with TRE24 on the purpose of this site though. I like to believe we all ended up on the good ole Loop cause the universe believes we can make it to the top and only the input of the knowledgeable artists that are on here can make us the best we can be.

I also throw out the offer of any input you would like in the future. Don't hesitate to ask!

This track is pretty golden though. The steady chord progression helps it to drive along. And don't kick yourself on the drum kit, I use the same few samples for most of my songs too. Cause they FIT!! Haha

You should take a stab at my remix competition! I think you could do well!

Best,
Skwish Fish
zacvoos
zacvoos replied 13th Aug 2015 - 9 years ago
I understand the purpose of the site. But I'm not down for criticism that is completely unjustified. I do appreciate the comments and suggestions I get on every song I upload and I do listen to people when they are being constructive. But I will also refuse to change something that doesn't need to be changed. Ill be sure to check out the remix competition. Thanks for the comment man. And I'll be sure to get a hold of you for future with any songs I may upload for some input
Danke
Danke 12th Aug 2015 21:29 - 9 years ago
Cool track yeah...

Isn't Malinda a singer?

From 0.32 and 1.37 there are places for a female vocal...:-)

Fantastic groovy and a melodical synth play from the top EDM LEAGUE...:-)

And actually totally agreed with TRE...

Handshake, Danke
zacvoos
zacvoos replied 12th Aug 2015 - 9 years ago
Yes Malinda is a singer but she was unhappy with her singing the first time through, so I'm waiting for her to rerecord her vocals before I mess with it more.
FAIRYSILLA
FAIRYSILLA 12th Aug 2015 18:59 - 9 years ago
cool song
TRE24
TRE24 12th Aug 2015 18:58 - 9 years ago
Lol @ your description. Hey I enjoyed the track man.
Really good uplifting vibes from this one.
Nicely done.
On the other note we all make music for ourselves to live in that moment. But its when you make music for the people and they begin to live in your moments that you begin to build a legacy. Constructive criticism is what anyone who makes music will face and it has helped some of the Greats get to where they are today. You have to learn how submit, take advice, and get better from it. Some can be more harsh than others but I learned a long time ago that the truth really does hurt. So if your not getting better then your stale or getting worse. Their will always be someone with more experience and knowledge on the subject and maybe the smallest of input from them can go for miles. This may just be a hobby for you but I think we all take refuge in getting better in what ever we do.
My goal here is for us all to get better, including myself, and these goals are mere childs play when the community bonds together and work as a team.

With that being said I offer you any input or help on any subject that I have knowledge on in the future at your request.
Anything.

I really thought the track was great. Very uplifting - bring back memories type of track.

Good Stuff Bro.
Id like to hear more.
TRE24-

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