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15th Aug 2015 05:36 - 9 years ago
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Description : sumthin sumthin

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If you have time take a listen and give wordybum some feedback.

SJW
SJW 30th May 2016 13:14 - 8 years ago
Thanks for all the feedback, and the producer of the beat is still newer and learning but has been getting better and better and I just like something about his sounds, they seem to click with me. Hopefully we can figure something out to make this a full, complete track ! :)
OmarMuk
OmarMuk 1st Oct 2015 22:53 - 9 years ago
Damn I just commented on SJWs track page on how he killed it but you really added to this track as well. Both of your styles work really well together. Fire flow, commercial material, deep lyrics, insane delivery!

In my opinion I actually really liked that buildup with the track getting louder leading up to your part. It gave this sense of excitement like something about to blow the listener away is coming and thats exactly what you did.
Now it did get a little too loud but if you control it right the volume increase can work to your advantage in my humble opinion. But thats up to u guys.

So anyway its been a month, how far are you guys regarding a final version? Really looking forward to it.
wordybum
wordybum replied 3rd Oct 2015 - 9 years ago
i was hoping to get the reworked version from SJW but it hasn't happened. i'm going to extend my verse as well so there is no big gap between the verses. I've been really busy with life shit that i havent had the chance to get back in the lab. another week and i will redo this for download.

thanks so much for the kind words and support, brother.
BeatMaker4real
BeatMaker4real 27th Aug 2015 05:33 - 9 years ago
Sounds good to me bro..yea the last part of the track is louder then the first part,but nothing a little tweek cant fix.I bet if cumulo99 heard this track on the radio with K west or Jay-z..he would swear it was the hardest shit he ever heard.Good work bro,and that flow...well you already know.
wordybum
wordybum replied 27th Aug 2015 - 9 years ago
thanks so much, Brother. i was up at 1am or something and found this track. i really liked SJWs flow so i tried to do it justice. i'm glad it's being received well. he's going to redo his vocals and i will remix mine, as well as extend the verses to possibly 64 bars to fill in the empty pieces... also because i like to show off once in a while lol.

i'll hook the LM community up as soon as its done.
cumulo99
cumulo99 17th Aug 2015 09:50 - 9 years ago
The raps, flows and lyrics are top notch!!! Fire!!! but the voice on the second verse could go harder. The mix in general needs a lot of work. The backing track is also very weak ( in my opinion) Such good rap skills deserve better beats, thats all there is to that. If you want to keep the dreamy feel to the track, keep the piano and synthy sounds, but rework that beat. Theres a hazy sound on the rhythm in the first part of the track, thats super annoying. Listening to it a second time, I realize that the last part of the song is where you should be heading. Just look at how the waveform expands. All of this is just an opinion, so please dont take it too personally. Listening to this a 3rd time, makes me think a chorus/hook could work really well too....
ok.. thats my 2 cents
wordybum
wordybum replied 17th Aug 2015 - 9 years ago
thanks a lot, brother. i actually added to this track with the last verse. the 1st verse and the music were on this site, posted by SJW. i added that last verse over the weekend.

thanks so much for the feedback!

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