this is very sick

This was gorgeous!

Super cool

Hello,
New to the DJ mixing music world and hope you don't mind I play with you totally groovy track.danke

I like that bass, nice and deeo! That lead synth sounds a bit washed out and quiet, but I like the one that comes in at 1:25, brings a bit more energy to the mix when you open the filter up. The high hat at 2:13 is a pretty cool little pattern to have but could maybe do with a small amount of delay/reverb etc. Overall its got a good vibe, just keep working on it if you feel its not finished, you'll get there! :)

Nice smooth track.

Funky stuff.

this track needs some vocals or a singer but either then that its really relaxing to listen to at times

Smooth... I love this track. Keep it on!!!

Cool song dude and I have to agree with some of the comments above. But...
Keep going dude. Nice work. :D

idk why but... there's something quite going on with the percussions bruh... The synth is nice but the hats are too.....hmmmm i might say that its a little bit off...

Anyways, Overall is very nice. Need a little bit of tweaking (since it is only in beta) and a very good job.

-ReonN

I think you have a great track going here. Nice variation of sections and a happy, solid energy throughout. My approach to refining would be adding little details here and there and generally finding ways to enhance the mix, bring out voices, etc. Best of luck developing further. best regards - Dan

yo you def have somthing here!

The reverse crash transitions were broken crashes right? Anyways, I like the style of the song, it's really great but I wouldn't call it as house but rather something like Disco or Groove? Try downloading some packs like the Sonic Boom Progressive House Pack, or the Virtual riot one. Anyways, keep striving!

I Like the groove, but the kind Of Hi Hat beginning at 2:13 before the next change, It's a little bit aggressive.

Hello Ookami.

It's good to have some new track from you. Very funky bassline, I like it a lot. Great material for a super catchy tune.

I mostly agree with all points by MrFunk.

From 1:57 there is definitely an overpower on the bass affecting hard the entire mix (see from 2:25) - maybe taking off effects and balance things would help? You may also try analysing what's really happening in the freqency spectrum throughout the track and consider. It is not to say that it is better to fix things by simply eqing them - in opposite: filtering is not that fine unless you're going for a concrete color of the recording. It is always essential to have the right sound from virtual instruments from the start as possible. That's just my opinion.

Those dry claps are quite fine to me actually but it seems like the reverb on them was somehow lost in the mix. See that each time you're adding an effect it changes the color of entire mix in one way or other, there's now way around it inside the DAW. It's quite touchy stuff and it is good to observe that sometime.

On the intro there are some clashings between strings and organ pad to me, strings are a bit too fat for my taste and played to low (I mean low range of the keyboard of course). They may benefit by getting more presence as well. Also you may try to find other strings with different/brighter sound and experiment with that a little.

Apart of all that that's a very nice effort so far. Keep up the production!
Alex