Hey EK, instant fav this is what I'm talkin' 'bout! I luv tracks like this that turn the focus on the real subject matter and ain't afraid to say it like it is! I have an unfinished track based on the continuous and daily assassinations of our young brothers, sisters and babies "entitled Hands Up Don't Shoot!", if I can somehow get the track finished up we may have to do a colab. Great job on this I am impressed.
Yeah, I like these lyrics a lot. I would like to hear a vocal backing track on the hook to brace it a little. A slightly less hot sound on the main vocals too bc it distorts in some places.
This is a really good song and a tight rap.
Thanks what's a vocal backing track? A dub? I THINK I KNOW what you talking about with the distortion I peeped that 2 so I'm a watch out for that in doing my next song
Tha track is dope fam, really saying something for the world to hear, i love music wit a meassage and you nailed it my friend, the beat is tight and the vocals on point. keep'em coming my friend
nice job
im not suppose to fuss tracks
but i just tell my opinion:
1.i think it would be better if you add some effects like chorus or vocodex to your chorus parts
2.your vocal line is so wide i think it would be better if you turn down the volume a bit and turn down the widing effect's (every plugin you use) volume a bit
3.i just heard a noise like (Wiss Wiss) when you're rapping so it can be better if you use a compressor for killing some additional freqs or you can soundgoodize your vocal
however it was a great song ( honestly )
and i just told my opinion
hats off...
It's a track & all that, but it can use a little more personality. Like if somebody says something about eating popcorn, toss a sample of some kernels popping in the background, &/or toss a chorus effect on certain vocals to give to lyrics more pop/variation/ definition. Only other thing I can think of is maybe back off the main compression a bit so the kick & snare don't get washed out in the mix. Your track sounds good dude
Thanks I never even asked the man at the studio can he put sound effects behind certain words but I do think it's a nice idea,like if you say bee you hear a buzz in the background yeah I'm a try implementing that
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This is a really good song and a tight rap.
im not suppose to fuss tracks
but i just tell my opinion:
1.i think it would be better if you add some effects like chorus or vocodex to your chorus parts
2.your vocal line is so wide i think it would be better if you turn down the volume a bit and turn down the widing effect's (every plugin you use) volume a bit
3.i just heard a noise like (Wiss Wiss) when you're rapping so it can be better if you use a compressor for killing some additional freqs or you can soundgoodize your vocal
however it was a great song ( honestly )
and i just told my opinion
hats off...