Wonderful Song. Makes me think of a girl who wants to stay happy while her lover wants to stay sad. Good job, keep it up!

feel you...

Very nice piano,
I like your voice a lot!
Beautifull track.

Cheers

~Eighteen

Very simple and very effective. The traits of every great song!
Well done. And i enjoyed the spoken word too. Keep it up.
Blessings - B.

Ain't it so true - what you said? Love this one. Love the trancey repetition of the beat and the spoken vocals, and then the singing comes in right at the right time. Great work.

you did a very good job, i wish i could work with you some day:D

Hey , nice work, sorry about the emotional pain you might be feeling at this time, I know relationships can be hard sometimes. As a producer and artist as I listen too this, I think that we could do much more to build the emotional cascade that needs to be expressed. For instance, If I had your acca-pella I would just use the piano and maybe a pad at first and build it until later in the song then using percussion and drums towards the end in an explosion of emotion, and then end it by bringing it all back down to just a piano and your voice. In that beginning section I would also add some interesting stereo delay to show the wide scape of the emotions being presented. But that's just me hearing something sweet and wanting to take it too the Nth degree.
Cru

Yes totally agree with the comment below. You could make some good track out of it. It sounds very interesting

First of all
respect for this mindset
the glory of humanity, is dedication
to loose something you want for someone you love
it doesnt matter
the "thing" can be everything even your life
and a dark world can be bright with this light

however lets back to the bussines :D :

the track is just a loop I think it would be better if you add some FX and etc on it

on 1:19 we have a beautiful choir that can be better with adding a chorus effect

nothing more
Kind regards
J_

Very poetic and soothing to the soul, a song that creates balance.Nice!!